Fanon:The Commenters' exploit of combat - 1

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During poll war 2, two sides fought; The pollers and the Anti-Pollers. (This is not based off the Joe stories.) Alex"Cluch"Carry106 was the commander. During the wars, he got sucked into a blackhole created by the forces of evil and was never too be seen again. Seeing that his right-hand man vanished, Marysayz, the genral, ordered the pollers to be replaced by droids because the black hole was their fault. . After turning on Martysayz, because they found themselves much stronger than him, the droids chased him, helping the anti-pollers wether they liked it or not. When all hope seemed lost for Martysayz, he jumped into a volcano. The battle raged on, and without Marty, the pollers where no match for the antis. Soon enough the battle ended and all was peacfull once again...

Chapter one: Kaboom!
One fine day, CheezDoodle, Neptune, and Swayamplays, were walking to BiggerNate's (BN) house. "Let's see if he wants to play soccer with us," says Neptune. Just then, they heard an explosion coming from BN' direction. "What was THAT???!!!" Swayam yelled. The three ran to BN's house to investigate. "WE WILL SAVE YOU!!!" Swayam yelled, as he kicked the door to BN's house off it's hinges. "We're fine," said Bigger. "You owe me a new door." "But, what made that loud noise?" Swayam's voice trailed off. "I am showing Flipnote, here, the solution we put in our exploding bullets that messes with the poll-droid's motherboard," BN answered. "Mother-boring," CheezDoodle said, rolling his eyes. "Yeah," Swayam said. "Why don't you relax? The poll wars just ended a couple months ago. Say goodbye to work and hello to vacation!!!" "This is serious, Swayamplays," said Flipnote. "Any of the pollers could be back." Then he dropped the bomb. "Even Martysayz." "M-Martysayz...?" The three studdered. "Yes," said BN. "The radar has been showing recent poller activity the last few days." "Lemme see!" said Swayam. "Ha! This is garbage! It said there is poller activity underneath us." BN sighed. "Maybe you are right," he said. "Maybe this is just garbage..." "But, we are so close to discovering a new solution, that we can't stop now," Flipnote finished. This seemed to lift BN's spirits. "Yeah! So go play soccer without us, we have some work to finish." And with that, the two got back to work.

Chapter two: Work, work, and no play
On their way to the field, the 3 see Spyroclub running on the track. "Hey, Spyroclub," Swayam yelled. "Come join us for soccer! Two on two! You can be on my team!" "He doesn't want to be on your team," Cheezdoodle said. "You suck!" "Hey, shut-up scrub!" Neptune laughed as the two argued. "So... Was that a yes or a no on playing?" asked Swayam. "Sorry, dude," Spyroclub answered. "I have to train. You never know when the pollers will attack next." "But it's vacation!" "No, man. Gotta beat my high score." And then Spyroclub ran off. "Aw, man," Neptune shouted. "Everyone is training." "This is wrong!" Swayam protested. "IT'S VACATION!!!" "Three strikes and your out," said Cheezdoodle pointing to Yoda. "If he is training, I guess so should we." They walked over to Yoda. "Hi g-" "SAY NO MORE!" Swayam yelled. "I have seen enough!" Yoda was lifting wieghts. Swayam stomped off. "Wait!" But Neptune's voice was muffled by a lound sound.

Chapter three: A new kind of Boom
KA-BOOM!!! "What was that?" Cried yoda. "Oh, just BN's and Flipnote's expeirementing," CheezDoodle said. "I'm sure their fine." "Well, go find out to make sure," Yoda replied. "We will," said CheezDoodle, and he rounded the others up. "And if there is any trouble, before you do something, call us!" Yoda called. As they walked, the three talked about the radar. "You know what is weird?" said Neptune. "What?" the other two say. "Well, BN is pretty good at tech and expereiments, right?" "Riiiight..." "Well, his tech never fails," "Uh, huh..." said Swayam, wanting NPT to get to the point. "So, what I am saying is, well..." "WELL WHAT ALREADY???" Swayam was yelling now. "WhatifMartysayzisstillaliveandhasahidoutandhasbeenhearingeverythingwesayinBN'slab?" "Whoa, whoa, whoa," CheezDoodle said. "Calm down. The hideout inside the volcano theory is just another myth. You will see, everything is f-" The three looked around. "ine," he finished.

Chapter four: Top warriors?
"Wow!" Neptune said. "This is..." he did not know what to say. "Forget about the house," said Swayam. "Where is BN and Flipnote?" They looked every were and could not find them. They shouted thier names, but no answer. "I'm going in," said Swayam. "Wait!" said CheezDoodle. "Remember what Yoda said?" Yoda's words flashed in Swayamplays's mind. "And if there is any trouble, before you do something, call us!". "Yoda, shmoda," he said. We are the top warriors, we can handle a little investigation." "If you put it that way," Cheezdoodle said. "Then let's do it!" They went in. "Look footprints!" Neptune said. "L-look," Swayamplays said. He was pointing to an outline of a commenter. They could feel the presents of evil. Black and purple orbs were floating and swirling around him. His red eyes sliced through the dark like a laser. "RUN!" CheezDoodle yelled. They heard an evil laugh, then a net swooped them up, thick, green fog was clouding the place, and then, before they could yell "HELP!", everything went black.

Chapter five: The rope
"It's been a while since those three left," Yoda thought. "Are they alright? Or are they getting into trouble, like those guys always do? I will ask Spyroclub to go with me to find them." Yoda went to get Spyroclub, meanwhile...

Neptune woke up to the sound of bubbling. It was hot, very hot. "Were am I? How did I get here? How come I am in this cage???" "Your questions will be answered in a matter of time," a familiar voice said. Neptune spun around. "M-mar-MARYSAYZ???!!!" Neptune exclaimed. "I thought you were dead!" "Hmm," He answered. "Then you were wrong. But good news! You get to watch the death of your friend! BwaH haW HAW!" "BiggerNate! NO!" BN was tied on a rope above the lava. "Now," Marty began. "Tell me how to reverse the formula that messes with my BOTS." "I will never tell you!" BN exclaimed. "Fine, we will play the hard way." said marty. "Tell me or you are going in the lava. Then your little friend, Dipdope-" "It's FLIPNOTE!!!" BN yelled. "Fine, Flipnote," he continued. "Well, he will be next." "No! Flipnote!" Flipnote replied, "Don't do it!" "Never!" BN cried! Then, martysayz lit the rope.

Chaper six: the crew
Spyroclub and Yoda were running to BN's house when they saw into Lordnour. "C'mon," Spyro said to Lordnour. "We need you." "Yeah," yoda added. "CD51, NNC, and swayam went missing when they investigated the explosion at BN's house." "Well, we gotta find them," said Lordnour, and they took off. When they arrived at the house, Yoda said, "This is more than a little puff. This is the work of a poller." Lordnour and Spyroclub exchanged worried glances. "Look!" Spyroclub exclaimed. "Footprints." "And they lead to..." Lordnour finished, "A hole." The hole was pitch black. It looked to go on forever. "Let's grab this rope, these lasers, and lets grab... this!" Yoda said pulling up an object. "Let's rescue some commenters!"

Chapter seven: The rescue
BN's rope was burning quickly. Commenters were yelling and screaming in horror at this sight. It was time for BN to say goodbye, when suddenly, three commenters came falling down. "Yoda! Spyroclub! Lordnour! You came!" Neptune yelled. Two were fighting off droids and one was "Flying?" Marty said. "How could that be?" Yoda flew to BN, as he was just about to fall, and swooped him up. "Uh, we're kinda cornered..." said Spyroclub. Yoda grabbed them and said, "We will come back for the others later." and then, they flew off. "Curses!" Martysayz said. "Well at least I still have you guys..." He said, eyeing the four. Neptune squirmed. "Take them to the dungeon!" Martysayz barked to the droids. "All we need is a plan..."

Chapter eight: Brainstorming
"All we need is a plan," Yoda said. "Something that could take them down." "Well, that super-jetpack thing you grabbed was very efficient." Lordnour commented. "Ah!" BN said. "That's what you used! One of my oldest inventions, The jetpack 2000! I have to think of a better name. I never tested it. That was risky..." "Well, we saved you," Yoda said. "That is all that matters." "If there is another poll war," Spyroclub stated. "Then we better build a hideout to do business in, without getting ambushed." "Great idea," BN said. "But I am worried about the four that are stuck. Especially Flipnote." "Don't worry," Yoda said. "We will think of something. But, now we have to build a fort!"

Chapter 9: Neptune's escape
Marty_Sayz was standing on a chair. He was still trying to figure out how Yoda flew, when a rustling noice broke loose. Marty_Sayz looked behind him. Neptune was gone. "How-" Marty_Sayz started, then he noticed a note lying on the floor. "What is this?" Marty_Sayz said to himself. He picked up the note. It read: '''I Saved Neptune. I couldn't save the others, I had no time to. I am in the Quick Questions side. You will never reach us now. - Nate Clone.''' Nate clone was a famous Quick Questions fighter. That didn't matter now. Neptune's escape now mattered much more.

Chapter 10: QQ base
far away was a user who had been forgotten. A villain nobody remembered. This villain looked a lot like herobrine. A herobrine with themesongs. "Hi." the user said to an intercom. "I am superfoxtrot, and Superfoxtrot is a good name becuase I get a lot of fame, my nickname is SFT, I want to be free, I am SFT." the user said. Suddenly everything made sence.

Neptune walked into the QQ base, a base for QQ'ers. *Snap!* He turned around

Chapter 11: The end?
M_S was still pondering. "Wait! Why waste my time wondering how they did that, when I can destroy them?" He gave the BOTs a command. "Take them, and hang them above the lava." It was hot inside the volcano. "Then, I will set the timer." "YOUR TIME IN THE COMMENT SECTION IS OVER." He boomed. Lava bubbled and bursted, almost splashing CD51. The BOT's clammy metal hands closed around his body. He would think something cold like this would make him feel better in this immense heat. But, he could sense the evil wrapped around him was merely as hot as lava. The BOTs clanked and whirred as they arose and took the three over to the lava pit. It was time to act fast.

Chapter 12: The user
A murky figure trudged in the shadows. He had been lost in this network of caves for as long as he could remember. It was getting warm. The thick, damp air turned thin and hot. The walls seemed to have steam coming out of them. Them he saw light. His walk turned into a sprint. Will this be the end of his wandering? Then he heard a scream. A large lava pi came into view. Just then a burst of lava splashed at him. Quickly dodging, he could make out a figure on the other side. Then, out of the shadows, six more appeared. Three bigger ones holding three smaller ones. The user looked up at the ceiling and saw three ropes. He connected the dots. "I have to save them," he thought. Just then, a user jumped into the lava pit with the BOT still holding on. He could not believe it.

Chapter 13: QQ
* Snap!* NPT whirled around. "Did I scare you?" The voice seemed to be coming from everywhere. "Wh-who are you?" Neptune asked. A user jumped down behind him. "I am Nate_Clone, Leader of QQ." "Wait..." He replied. "I made up quick questions!" "It's not a copyright." Nate_Clone said. "Plus, I am obviously worthy of leading QQ. Who had to rescue YOU from M_S, the poller?" Neptune stood in silence. "How about co-leader?" Neptune asked Nate clone. "Sure." Nate clone gave up. But the conversation didn't get any further.

Chapter 14: the lava
The user ran toward the pit of lava. The hot air was almost defying. Then, the volcano erupted, spewing lava everywhere. The user ran, but a hand came from the lava and pulled him up. He braced himself. Ready to feel the heat. But, he felt nothing. Finally the air hit his face as he came flying out. How good it felt to be outside again. Next to him was laying three users. "Who did that?" He asked. "What?" Asked Swayam. "Who jumped into the lava and pulled me in?" CD51 stepped up. "I did," he said.

Chapter 15: Elements
"How?" asked the user. "Well," said CheezDoodle. "Every commenter has an element. Mine is fire." "Some people have not discovered thier's yet," Said Swayam. "Like me!" "I did not know what mine was before this," Said CD. "I just felt the urge to jump in, so I did. Once you were pulled into my invisible barrier, you were immune." "What other elements are there?" The user asked "Hmmm..." CheezDoodle replied. "Well, Neptune is ice." "Now we would like to ask a question," Said Flipnote, "Who are you?" "I am..." He paused "GiantNate91." He finished.

Chapter 16: Poller tsunami
It was a nice day. The sky was clear, the air was thin, the sun was shining, and ToPhu was relaxing on the beach. After all the poll wars, he needed time to recharge. Suddenly, the waters seemed to roll back, leaving the once covered sand to dry in the hot sun. ToPhu thought this was strange. Then a clap of thunder could be heard in the distance. The once cloudless sky was now blanketed with grey thunderclouds. Several twisters appeared. More thunder. ToPhu was eager to leave. Packing his bags, he saw lighting. Then he saw somthing else. The water that had been pulled in, was now towering above. 10 feet, 20 feet, 50 feet, 100 feet, 500 feet, until it was a mile above. Running now, ToPhu took one more look back. "No! It could not be!" He thought. "He died in the poll war!" For, the top half of the tsunami formed into the top half of..."Poller Nate!" He exclaimed. Just then, he heard his voice, louder than all the thunder combined. When he talked, the ground shook. Then he let out words that sent a chill down ToPhu's back. "I will seek my revenge!" Then the water collapsed into it's once shapeless self. ToPhu ran for his life. The water was closing in on him. This was the end.

Chapter 17: Ice
ToPhu was running out of breath. Why had't he left earlier? Then he did not hear the sound of rumbling water. He turned his head to see it turned to ice. He was relieved, but wanted to know how that happened. He looked around and saw Neptune freezing the water. Nate_Clone was with him. Nate_Clone turned his attention on ToPhu. Then suddenly started to yell at him. ToPhu was confused. Then he heard a crack, and the last thing he saw was Nate_Clone running at him.

Chapter 18:
ToPhu woke up to the birds chirping in the bright, sunny morning. "Where am I, and what happened?" He demanded. Nate_Clone spoke up,"You got hit by falling ice. I tried to warn you." "Ice?" ToPhu could not remember what happened. "Neptune, here saved thousands of lives turning the water to ice." Nate_Clone said. "But how did this happen?"