Improve the story!

Ok guys, I'm making a new activity where I wirte a paragraph of a story, and anyone can add on. just improve the story

Chapter One.
It was a dark and stormy night at the local burger king. P-dog chewed his Impossible Whooper (because he's vegetarian). As he savored the flavors in his burger, Henry came up behind him and put his hand on P-dogs shoulder.

"It'll be ok, man"

"Yeah, thanks dude."

P-dog was suffering the loss of one of his friends, who died in a bike accident. His school mourned. It was about a week ago, and he had a basketbal tournament this weekend, and his sorrow might mess him up.

"Try to cheer up," GG said

"Sure," P-dog replied

They left Burger King