The comment ninja's choose your own adventure

this is a choose your own adventure story, about the comment ninja's. I need all the help I can get, so feel free to add on to the story. Just don't vandilize, or take the story in the wrong direction. Have fun!

-Neptune_Ninja_Comics

Also is it okay to make it somehow more advanced like D and D? I will if I can. - HH

Depends- Neptune

Do Not follow the chapters in order. THIS IS A CHOOSE YOUR OWN ADVENTURE, LISTEN TO THE INSTRUCTIONS.

Chapter 1
You can't belive it. Your actuly meeting your hero, CheezDoodle51! As you walk into the QQ base, Neptune greets you. "Hi." he says. "Hello." you respond. As you walk in the base, Swayamplayz, Cheezdoodle51, and C_L are there to greet you. "Hello." they say. "We need you, to help us solve a problem." CheezDoodle51 says. You are suprised. This was supposed to be a meet and greet, you won by finding a ticket in a cereal box.

You question. "What's the problem?"

He answers "There's a poller that needs to be taken care of. I am sending you with one of my loyal teamates to help bring him to justice."

So, you can choose one of these 4 people....

Yoda- Go to Chapter 7

Swayamplays- Go to Chapter 29

Neptune_Ninja- Go to Chapter 16

Mr. Epic- go to Chapter 18

Chapter 2
The fall off the edge of the cliff. But you somehow catch yourself on a nearby branch. Swyamplayz runs up to you. You pull your self back up the cliff with Swyamplayz's help, only to have Swayamplayz fall this time. When you try to catch him, you fall too, and die.

Chapter 3
Looks like you chose the bronze gate. The heavy metal creeks under you as you cross the winding bridge on the other side of the door. Luckily, you chose a safe door. You find the exit and run out to Yoda. Yoda looks happy to see you. "That was a close one." says Yoda. You sigh a breath of relief. Yoda has not been taken over by the micronic bots just yet. You still have time to help him. But there are two narrow paths coming up. You have to choose one, to get the antitoce.

If you choose path one, go to chapter 8

If you choose path two, go to chapter 19

Chapter 7
Looks like you chose Yoda. CheezDoodle brings you to Yoda, and the two of you begin to pack for the journey ahead. You still can't belive you are going on this quest, but you get ready for it. Just as you two are about to leave on the trail to the poller, Yoda stops and looks at you.

"Do you think we should take a shortcut?" Yoda asks you.

You're not sure if you should trust this "Short cut." so you ask, Yoda what the shortcut is.

"Trivia question path." Yoda answers.

Your not sure what to do. Should you take Trivia Question path? Or just stick to the normal trail? You decide.

If you go the short cut, go to chapter 22

If you go he normal path go to chapter 9

Chapter 16
You chose Neptune_Ninja_Comics. He is, after all, the leader of the QQ's, and the famous "Comment Ninja". CD51 takes you to Neptune. Neptune smiles. "Pack up." He says.

You pack up your things, amazed your even doing this journey in the first place. Some cereal box prize. You and Neptune start off on the path to the poller. "Well, what a nice day." Neptune says out loud. You laugh. It is rainy and misty. Not exaclty a nice day. "What?" Neptune asks you. "I like days like this."

You stop.

Ahead of you are two paths.

Neptune looks at his map.

"One path leads to certain death." He reads. "While the other is safe." "Take the path on the-" Suddenly the wind blew really hard and knocked the map out of Neptune's hand. Neptune dives after it, but falls down a hill. What do you do?

If you follow him, got to chapter 12

If you trust he is ok, got to chapter 8

Chapter 18
Mr. Epic seems cool, right? Plus, he sounds thoughtful.

CD51 leads you to Mr.Epic.

Mr.Epic is waiting for you, as if he knew you would pick him.

"Hi." Mr.Epic said happily.

"Umm.....hi." You respond. You weren't expecting a user with a rainbow epic face as a teammate.

"Should we pack now, or watch TV?" Mr.Epic asks you.

If you pack now, go to chapter 21

If you watch TV, go to chapter 23

Chapter 21
"Lets pack now." You say. So you and Mr.Epic start packing. Once you get all your stuff together, you and Mr.Epic head out the door. Unfortunitly a spy was watching you. He puts a time warp bomb on you. What happens next all depends on the flip of a coin.

If it is Heads go to Chapter 18

If it is tails go to chapter 25

(No cheating or using a magic coin)

Chapter 23
Did you really expect this to be a choice? Go back to Chapter 18 and try again.

Chapter _ (Where you find the poller. Also this is the same for all)
Alas, all your adventuring has driven you here. But zounds, as you are about to catch him, he sees you and runs away into the distance. You chase him, and come across a couple of houses and you do not see where the poller has entered. Luckily though, there are 2 Knights that stand in front of the each cave. And there is a sign that says "one guard always lies" You can only ask one question. And you do without any consulting.

"So, which door leads to the poller?"

A Knight says: The other guard is a liar. He will say it's the left one.

Other Knight says: He's lying and will say it's the left one.

Well, so much for THAT. So it's up to you, left or right?

Left: Chapter _

Right: Chapter _

Chapter 24
Yoda asks you riddle.

A book costs 20. The customer has a 100 dollar bill. The seller has no change. So he asks his neighbour for some. After the customer leaves, he finds out that the 100 is fake! He returns 100 dollars to his neighbour. How much money did he lose?

If you answer 100, go to chapter

If you answer 20, go to chapter

If you answer 200, go to chapter

If you don't like riddles you may choose someone else.

Chapter 25
The time bomb however, isn't evective, so you continue on your journey. It is a misty rainy day.