Fanon:The comment ninja's 2 (Adventure Series)

Same with the first story, the only people that can edit this are:


 * Neptune_Ninja_Comics
 * Swayamplayz
 * Spyroclub1
 * Yoda
 * Mr. Epic
 * BiggerNate91
 * NobodyElse
 * Cheezdoodle51
 * Marty_Says
 * 7'o clock
 * Flipnote19
 * -No Avatar-

Intro (You need to read this to understand the story.)
A user named SportsStar once was everyone's favorite. Then something happened. A new user named Comic Lazer or C_L came along, became the hero, and SportsStar or SS was ignored. After a month of being ignored SS decided to bring evil back into the Go comics world. Why? Evil was the only way he could become a hero and be noticed again. SS made a big mistake that day. One that changed everything.

Chapter 1: Fallen hero == == SS needed one more thing to bring back..........M_K. He wasn't bringing back a hero; he was going to create a second account for M_K, then make M_K evil. Evil was the only way to become a hero. Or at least SS thought. SS needed some one who had the hacker code to get a second account. No, SS wasn't going to do second accounts the right way. That would mean passing it by the new GC admin, BiggerNate91 or BN91. BN91 wouldn't allow SS to create a second account for some one else that couldn't at the moment. Also not an evil one at that. An evil account would be disasterous. Just what SS wanted. SS meet with the hacker code expert, P̺̦͇̰̪͇̉̋̿̀͢͠o̵̗̹͙̰͇͖̥͋̅̀͊̈́l̲̣͔͖̱̹̬̀̿̎̇̚̚l̸̡̨̺̣̪͚̩̀͂͛̈̎̊̓̆͊͝e̷̡̼̠̬̱̹͍̘̅̏̿̄̅̿̔r͉̱̫͇͈͛̀̈͒̓̒̈ͅŅ̵̡͉̲̩̼̖̲͍̯͗̃̍̎́͗͑̍̒͌ã̴̹̲̩̣̮͙̝̙̠̎̓͐̇̈͡͝t̷̡̥̮̯̹́̍̎͝͡e̵̢͇̭̘̼͙̽̒͂͂̈́̔́̊̐͜͢͡ͅ9̵̡̫͙͚̤̲̿̆͒̍̐̋͗1̵͓̳͉͇̰̗̀̂̓́͌̒̚͠ͅ. P̡͇̘̲͙̜̀̐̾̆̊͜Ǹ̛̲̘̭̹̰̦̻͍͎͊̅͌͑̓͘9̷̨͕̲͎͓̀͆̂́͑̽͝͡1̷̢̛̞͈̯̣͔̠̭̔̇̈́̐͆̽̀͝͡ was Alley's with the famous villan, Henry Hudson. Henry Hudson wasn't called that anymore, but people still know him as that. Just as SS created the profile, Neptune_Ninja_Comics (Neptune) (The comment Ninja) Ran in with Yoda and Spyroclub1. C_L and Swayamplayz came from behind. Mr.Epic and NobodyElse burst through the windows. "Just had to make an epic entrance." said Mr.Epic. "Yes we know" said Swayamplayz rolling his Eyes. "Ok anyways...." said C_L. "Were here to stop you" said Neptune. Then they attacked. Neptune was ready to anyways.

Chapter 2: Too late == == SS quickly told PN91 to hurry up with the code. Neptune quickly had Yoda blast PN91 to his end. SS shouted swear words as he quickly tried to finish the code. Yoda blasted at him too, but unfortunitly, SS had been around long enough, and had enough time to know a simple trick called ducking. The blast hit one of the numerous computers in the room. the room wasn't just any room. It was the TECH. room. The TECH. room was all white except for the blue door and small blue windows. "How did Mr.Epic get through those small windows?" SS said to distract Neptune. "Mr.Epic has his ways." said Neptune without looking away. Unfortunitly, Neptune talking was enough time to plug in the backup code PN91 had implanted in a USB. PN91 will be remembered. Thought SS as he confirmed the USB. C_L swung his sword at SS. SS took out his custom coded sword out, and hit C_L in the leg. C_L suddenly stopped and looked at SS. SS said " I will destroy Neptune and Yoda." C_L repeated him, " I will destroy Neptune and Yoda." C_L hit Yoda in the arm with his sword that had gotten duplicated from SS's sword as soon as SS's sword had hit him. Yoda said, " I will destroy Neptune and Yoda." SS quickly said, "Destroy Neptune and Nobody_Else." Soon, everyone had been struck with the custom sword except Neptune and Swayamplayz. Spyroclub1 said "Destroy Neptune and Swayamplayz!" and since Spyroclub1 was an amazing swordsman, he almost instantly got to where Swayamplayz was without being noticed. Spyroclub1 threw his sword down at Swayamplayz. Suddenly, Neptune threw a SuperStar (A modified Ninja star) at the airborne sword. The sword flew to the side, and hit Neptune in the chest. Neptune fell backward, and since the sword had almost no sharpness to it, (It was meant for custom control) Neptune was not injured. He was just under custom control. Swayamplayz knew there was only one thing to do. He ran back to the QQ base.

Chapter 3: BN91's observation == == BN91 had just gotten back to his virtual house after a long day. The virtual sun seemed to turn into darkness. BN91 looked at the status chart. We sat tiresome on his living room chair. His phone rang. BN91 looked at the caller. Swayamplayz. "H-Help! Swyamplayz yelled into the phone. BN91 answered "What?!?" Swayamplayz explained everything that had happened to BN91 while he ran away from the tech room. SS swearing, and mad, told Neptune to run after him. Swyamplayz ran as fast as he possibly could, but it was no use. Neptune was trained more, so natuarlly he was faster. Swayamplayz looked up at the sky. A helicopter rang above him. "Hop on!! BN91 yelled to him. Swayamplayz reached for the deceanding helicopter rope. They were safe. For now.

Chapter 4: Nobody_Else banned == == Nobody_Else, now under SS's control, Helped with the M_K return. A moderator that BN91 hired didn't know what they were doing, and banned Nobody_Else. SS quickly had him replaced with Spyroclub1.. "Almost done." said SS. The mod banned Spyroclub1 then told BN91 about it. BN91 yelled "UNBAN THEM!" and the mod unbanned Spyroclub1. However it was too late to unban Nobody_Else. "Another one down." said Swayamplayz remembering what Neptune had said before. \

Chapter 5: Another battle == == A long way away a user named MartySayz looked out into the light of dawn. He knew it was too late to change his past. Martysayz or M_S remembered a lot of things. A rival named LordNour, LordNour or L_N. An un-forgetable past...it was all clear. the sun came fully up. "A brand new day." M_S said. "Wow." he implored looking at the sunrise. The sun shown on SS's lair.

Chapter 6: Not the first sunrise == == The sky shown bright. Yoda looked out the small TECH. room window, which upon seeing the sunrise snapped him out of SS's control. The TECH. room? what am I doing here?" Yoda thought upon seeing ?Neptune and the others doing something with a computer while the sun shown brightly throught the sky.

Chapter 7: The flashback == == The planet seemed so far away yet......... "Hey Neptune!" Neptune looked over at Swayamplayz "We need to get this ship moving to the place were SS was last spotted!" Swayamplayz remarked. "Stop writing in that letter too!" Rang out a voice Out Neptune muttered a silent "oh No" Behind him was a user he would rather not see agsin. He heard another voice. But this one was more distant. "we need to get out of this ship." "NOW." Neptune said silencing the crew, which at the time was only three users. Besides himself. They were Swayamplayz, Whiteknight, and Spyroclub1. Neptune explained why, while they got parachutes out. They all jumped out of the plane. But Neptune and Spyroclub1 were tossed into a cargo hold while they tried to jump. There was darkness. All the sudden the bottom of the plane opened causing Neptune and Spyroclub1 to fall towards the burning hot volcano.

Chapter 8: New fighters == == Two users were running toward the TECH. base to save Neptune. 7'oclock and Cheesedoodle51 were their usernames. 7o'clock or 7 looked at the trees, while Cheesedoodle51 or CD51 ran forward. But Spyroclub1 was falling to the volcano and then suddenly everything was in slow motion. blue lighting was everywhere and suddenly lightning struck Spyroclub1. With lightning speed he fell in the lava in the volcano. Meanwhile Neptune had been saved but then an alert flashed on his iphone. "alert, Spyroclub1 has been banned." "NOOO," screamed Neptune. But the worst was yet to come.

Chapter 9: The Funeral == == Swayamplays and WhiteKnight had the same alerts. Swayamplays fell in horror. Whiteknight stood there silently. Swayamplays and WhiteKnight had not jumped and they saw Neptune with two other users. They all agreed that Spyroclub1 and Nobody_Else would have a good funeral. They flew back and organized a funeral. The one most disappointed was Neptune.When the day came Neptune didn't show. The funeral did go smoothly though. But little did they know Neptune didn't show because he was held captive.......

Chapter 10: The Leader == == Neptune was captured by Henry Hudson or Spade. "Why do you keep on changing your name," said Neptune. "I'm a hacker," said Hudson. "Anyways I captured you for a reason." Neptune told him what had happened in spite. "Another one," asked Hudson. "My vpn power is gone, You gotta ask the leader of team Boosted." Neptune faintly remembered that. "Follow me," said Hudson. "I cant follow you when i'm tied up....." Neptune spoke again in spite. The capturer untied the captive. They followed the path to the neutral zone. "what is this place," asked Neptune. "The Neutral Zone," said Hudson. the Neutral Zone has changed....." said Neptune. "You'll find out why." said Hudson. Hudson walked up to an electric device which was red and blue. "Dude is that a Nintendo Switch," said Neptune, "Its an undimensioned time and that thing is from 2017, I have the Playstation 10." Hudson told him to focus. Hudson then tapped a button on the middle. "Nintendo, all rights reserved," said the system. Then it said "Materight all systems hacked." "What the," said Neptune. "Good Morning Henry Spade Hudson and Neptune Ninja Comics," the system said.

Chapter 11: The system == == "My friend Materight who served in a war a long time ago created this thing," said Hudson. "Anyways, guide me into BN city." "BN city, will open its doors now," said the machine. Just then a user walked out of the door. "Hello Neptune." "You wanted me to come back...." The user was Marty Sayz. Marty sayz or again M_S walked up to Neptune. "I have your cowardly friend here." M_S grinned but in a sad way. He said "I'm not coming back, you know my past. Where is Spyroclub1?!?" "Banned," said Neptune. Neptune noticed how scared M_S had suddenly got. M_S shouted "look out!"But it was too late. However, just then Cheesedoodle51 pushed them out of the way.........just in time before lava pored down. "PN91 and lourdnour have heard me....." M_S said. "The only one who can help now is Animated Galaxy." Neptune looked at Hudson with a confused look. Hudson spoke "Animated Galaxy or Galaxy as he is commonly known, can teleport to hidden places." He was under the radar for a long time. Your own Warrior Swayamplayz got him out. Neptune looked at cheesedoodle51. "Why didn't you or Swayamplayz tell me?" Cheesedoodle looked confused. "I didn't know about that either Neptune." Neptune sighed. "Sorry i'm just a little overwelmed. First we fall from an airplane, then Spyroclub1 gets banned, then I get captured by Spyroclub1's old enemy....now finding out about this?" Neptune looked back at the others. "Any other users I need to know about?!?" M_S thought for a second. "Link_O_Neal." "Link_O_Neal or Link is known for being comic relief." Neptune looked at M_S "Ok then......" "Also theres Big Nate forever." Big Nate forever or BNF is known for magic tricks and agreeing with everyone." M_S finished. "Ok.....where are they" Neptune asked. Martysays laughed. "To find out, You'll have to catch me first."

Chapter 13: The way out of nothing == == Neptune and his team ran after Martysays. "This is the guy who you thought would help me," said Neptune. "Team Boosted helps me," said Hudson. "I don't even know how he escaped his exile." Martysays jumped onto the abandoned buildings of the torn down city. "He escaped," said Neptune. Hudson said "He even got your friend." They could see lightning in the distance. "Its going to rain," said cheezedoodle, "and we are lost." Neptune sighed. M_S sent Neptune a message on his spy phone. it read: XD I thought you guys were supposed to be fast...... Neptune sighed. "I forget how many people like to betray others." M_S sent another message that read: Everyone blamed me in the past, '''why should I come back? XD catch you later........maybe actully catch you, just wanted to have some betrayal fun so bye. '''Neptune looked at the town below.Of course PN91 was still watching. "What do we do next?" asked Cheesedoodle. "I think we go and meet Link and BNF." said Neptune. . Unfortunitly, that wasn't what PN91 had in mind. Neptune suddenly felt a rope underneth his feet, and unfortunitly, Neptune tripped into the town below.

Chapter 14: Ends possible == == "NEPTUNE!" Cheezdoodle shouted. No one knew if it was too late to save Neptune. He was falling very fast. Luckily though, Neptune had known a few tricks of his own. After shooting his grappling hook up, he climbed to safety. "Thank goodness," CheezDoodle said, "I thought you were done for!" "Never underestimate the power of me when I am in the zone." Neptune replied. "I'm glad your safe," Cheezdoodle said, "But we have a traitor to catch!" And with that, they took off. Of course PN91 wasnt done with them just quite yet.....

Chapter 15: The meeting == == Spyroclub1 woke up dazed. He looked around him. He was surrounded by a void of darkness. "Where?" Spyroclub1 started, but a voice answered. "Hello old friend." Spyroclub1 looked over. The voice said" Well.....your not old or anything but hi." Suddenly a user Spyroclub1 had helped host a funeral for appeared. "M_K!" Spyroclub1 ran toward him. "Woah don't run me over, we will be here for a long time after all." M_K spoke. "Wait did I-" Spyroclub1 started "Yes you got banned just like me." "Turned into a cloud of pixels, gone." M_K suddenly remembered. "Keep it down!" M_K whispered. "you'll wake up LL." "Oh no....not him." Spyroclub1 whispered. "Guys!" said another user. It was Crazy_Kat. Crazy_Kat or C_K came over. "There is another one about to be banned." she said. M_K rushed toward the fallen user. "Wait just a minuite," said an Unknown presence. "Both of you were banned but not Spyroclub1." "Remember the blue lightning in the volcano," said the user. "That was my old partner." "Then how am I here in the banned," said Spyroclub1. "And who are you." "Its an Illusion," said the user. "None of this is real." Spyroclub started to fade away.

Chapter 16: The Fall of a User == == C_L, Nobody_Else, Swayamplayz, Yoda, and Mr.Epic were battling SS. SS was still trying to create an account for M_K that would rule over the lands. The comment Ninja's were still trying to stop it. Nate and Chad were still on a mission to get back there friends, and Neptune was still being watched by PN91. But C_L had learned a bit from Neptune since he had been in BATTLELAND. BATTLELAND was a kind of place where you needed training. Right now C_L and the others were battling SS. M_O_V came in, reappeared, and he brought in other warriors. "Swayamplayz, you take the left, i'll go right." C_L spoke. Swayamplayz noticed the enemies charging in from the right. C_L fought off the enemies but not for too long. Swayamplays fought off the enemies to the left too. Swayamplays fell too. Not banned though. Everyone else had got defeated by SS's army. "HA HAH AHAHH HAHA," said SS. "Use the Ban Sword to kill them." But then suddenly SS had been stabbed. SS turned into pixels. A man with a beard appeared. "MARTYSAYS," yelled WhiteKnight. "Who let you out." Martysays grinned. "Your friend Neptune, and he, Hudson, and Cheezedoodle are trapped in a city where an earthquake is going to happen." "My Revenge is almost complete."

Chapter 17: The Earthquake== == The ground was shaking. Neptune, Hudson, and Cheezedoodle ran for their lives. Buildings started to fall. An explosion was heard nearby. “No! My leg! Someone please, anyone help!” someone cried. Neptune heard the yells as they ran. They found a small, orange and white frog being crumbled under a block of stone. Cheezdoodle tried, and eventually succeeded to, getting off the stone to help the little frog. “Let’s go! I’ll talk later! We don’t want to die here, do we?” The frog exclaimed. Right as it said that, Hudson made a quick save from falling rubble. “Woah.” He said with pretty much no emotion. ”See? We HAVE to run! Quick!” The frog declared. He jumped onto Neptune’s leg, and climbed up to the top of his head. “That way! I bet we can be safe there!” Cheezdoodle yelled with all of the noise. He pointed at a little alleyway were no rocks were. As Hudson, Cheezdoodle, and Neptune entered the alley, the frog jumped off Neptune’s head and started to glow a very dark shade of green. Then, a magic roof appeared over their heads. The frog, now exhausted, changed back to its original color, and fell back onto Neptune’s head. “Now that we’re here, safely apparently, who are you?” Asked Hudson. “Ah, I forgot to introduce myself. I‘m FlipnoteStudioHatena40, but you can call me Hatena. When MartySays escaped and trapped you in this city. I was a byproduct of a glitch, kind of like the Matrix. The glitch wasn't accedental as I was created to form when Martysays escaped so that I could defeat him. And because of said glitch. I have these magical powers to protect others in times of need and/or stress.” The frog explained. “I appreciate you guys helping me, really I do. So, as thanks, I‘m going to stick around for a bit and help you all out. I won’t cause any trouble.” Hatena said. Then, he dropped into Neptune’s backback, seemingly disappearing. Suddenly, the team heard the buildings falling, and the ground shaking even more than before. ”Lets go, everyone.” Neptune said. The team darted off with a brand new friend by their side. Or, more literally, ON their side.

Chapter 18: New Armies == == SS's army well now called the grand poll army was now under the control of Martysays. "Take them as prisoners, I will torture them till they want to leave Go comics. They will have the choice. "Take Yoda first," Marty said. "I will not give up," said Yoda. Martysays flickered a switch. The headline said, "Star wars will be cancelled," Yoda started to cry. "That will not make me want to leave Go comics myself," said Yoda. Martysays grinned. "The worst is yet to come." Martysays then put his hand to Yoda's head. "Remember those days when you were Nate Napoleon Maximus Wright." "How, do you know," whimpered Yoda. "Mind tricks," said Marty. Yoda started to scream. Why are these memories coming to me. Why." sobbed Yoda. Martysays grinned. "Your darkest banning memories are returning. Take him away. Bring him back to me tomorrow," said Marty. Then he smiled. "Time to ban the rest."

Chapter 19: Mission to the Unknown. == == Spyroclub1 woke up. He remembered that he had faded. He was still here though. "You've finaly woke up, I see,' said a voice. "Who are you?” said Spyroclub. "You don't remember do you," said the user. The user took off his hood. Spyroclub was shocked. It was Nathan Big. His twin brother. "But you were banned in the Bet war," said Spyroclub1. "Yes, by the stupid mods," he said in an angry voice. "But you don't look like you were banned,' said spyroclub1. "None of that matters, but what does matter is that you have powers like me." said Nathan. "Powers," said Spyroclub1 "The power of speed and electricity," said Nathan. "Now you'll need to help your friends." "But how did I get powers in the first place," said Spyroclub1. "I'll tell you when we meet again," and suddenly Spyroclub1 was already at his destination.

Chapter 20: Escape == == Neptune spotted the door or the exit out of the city. 'There's the Nutreal Zone," said Hudson. "The what zone?" asked Hatena. It seemed as if he was asleep. "The Nutreal Zone!" Hudson yelled. The 3 ran as fast as they could with Hatena holding onto Neptune. However, there was something behind them. It was a user. "RUN!" said CheezDoodle. They made it to the door and closed it before the user could catch them. Neptune sighed. But then suddenly white lightning appeared. It was Spyroclub1. "I thought you were banned..." said Hudson. "Did we just survive an earthquake for no reason?" said Neptune. "Uh...who’s this?" said Hatena. "The name is Spyroclub1, and we have no time to waste. We have to save our friends." "No we have to find Flipnote19 and BNF. I know where they are." said CheezDoodle. Hatena sprang up at Flipnote’s name. “F-Flipnote...we have to go, guys...” whispered Hatena. Something about that name gave him a hit of memory.

Chapter 21: Recruitment== == The 5 of them started looking and trying to fine them. Well except for Hudson who left. So now it was Hatena, Spyroclub1, cheezdoodle and Neptune. They would have to find BNF and Flipnote19. First was BNF who was at a magic show. "Here he is." Said Neptune. Suddenly something exploded.

Chapter 22: Fallen enemy== == Marty_Sayz got to Nobody_Else. Nobody_Else had been fighting for so long that his face was white with fury and tireness. Marty_Sayz seemed to wince at the pixel falling down from N_E's cuts. Marty_Sayz didn't have to do anything. N_E pixeled away into being banned. "Waste of time." Said Marty_Sayz. "You'l never win me over fallen enemy." Said a voice. Marty_Sayz turned around. it was Lord Nour and seven. Marty_Sayz fired a blast of virtial fire at Lord Nour. Lord Nour doged, and with one quick move, did a back flpi and sent back the virtial fire instantly. "Overn isn't here I see." Marty_Sayz implored. "Overn got BANNED!" shouted Swayamplayz angerily. "Marty_Sayz didn't even stop and think about it. "Who cares." Marty_Sayz implored back. Just then a user burst throught the door. It was hudson. hudson pulled out a blaster, and with one quick move, turned a nearby computer into burning rubble.

Chapter 23: Saving nothing== == Neptune walked over to the explosion. Everything seemed perfectly fine. Neptune noticed a note on the ground. it read: '''I got your message. -Joe moraliste Another Note read: Be there soon. -Joe Moraliste. '''"Good." said Neptune. Neptune also saw two users lying next to the message. "What the-" Neptune was speachless. Crazy_Kat and M_K had returned.

Chapter 24: New day for Yoda== == Yoda woke up. Yesterday had been action filled and rough. Yoda shivered. The thought of another day, there. Yoda was getting ready to deal with Marty_Sayz, when a user was thrown at him. Yoda got hit by......Joe moraliste? "Joe Moraliste, what are you doing here?" Yoda asked, still dazed from being hit by Joe. Joe stood up. "I got Neptune's message. I helped you guys with LL, why not the sayer?" "The what?" Yoda asked. "The sayer...oh waqit you guys don't know who that is." "Lets just say Marty_Sayz ccaused a lot of trouble where we are, before he came." Joe thought or a second. "Oh yeah, where is my old friend, BiggerNate91?" Joe searched the cell, hoping to find BN91. "Oh.....he is in cell 22." Yoda spoke. "Oh no......MArty_Sayz is here." Yoda quickly implored. "where?" Joe implored back, looking around the cell. "Shh..he's coming!" Yoda quickly whispered. Marty_Sayz opened the cell door. "Who is ready to have FUN!" the cell door closed as Yoda came out. Yoda stayed out.

Chapter 25: No end== == Neptune tried to wake up M_K. No luck. "I think he's going to be out for a while." Neptune said. "He was banned for a while, and to come back?" Neptune said again. Suddenly the ground shook again. Rocks broke apart. Neptune fell hard, backward agaisnt a rock. The buildings of BN city fell apart. A voice rang out "REMEMBER ME NEPTUUNE?!?" "Who?" Neptune said standing up. "YOU'LL FIND OUT, VERY SOON!" the voice yelled. "I think were done." Neptune yelled, then he fell to the ground again, only to fall into the same wall. This time however, Neptune did not stand back up. The comment Ninja's were facing there worst enemy they had ever had.