Community Activity:Improve the story!

Ok guys, I'm making a new activity where I wirte a paragraph of a story, and anyone can add on. just improve the story

Chapter One.
It was a dark and stormy night at the local burger king. P-dog chewed his Impossible Whooper (because he's vegetarian). As he savored the flavors in his burger, Henry came up behind him and put his hand on P-dogs shoulder.

"It'll be ok, man"

"Yeah, thanks dude."

P-dog was suffering the loss of one of his friends, who died in a bike accident. His school mourned. It was about a week ago, and he had a basketbal tournament this weekend, and his sorrow might mess him up.

"Try to cheer up," GG said

"Sure," P-dog replied

They left Burger King

They walk out.

”Wait is that a killer clown?” Said P-Dog.

"no" said gg4l.

They turned on the tv and saw that the vikings had gotten smoked by the seahawks

"augh!" P-dog cried out. "bnb will never let us hear the end of this!"

"Seahawks won! HAHA!" yelled bnb walking up to them.

”Then p-dog smashes the tv on BNBs head.”