Fanon:The comment Ninja's 3 (Adventure series)

The authors of the Comment Ninja's are: Neptune_Ninja_Comics (Creator), Swayamplayz(Co-creator), Cheezdoodle51 (co-creator) and (Flipnote19) (co-creator). These are the only users that can edit this. All other edits will be deleted, unless previewed by the creator. Enjoy the story! (Also please ask if you want to be in it.)

Chapter 1: Greatest enemy== == Neptune woke up to find himself in a cell. He stood up wondering where he was. There were no clues or anything. Suddenly it occurred to Neptune. “Wh-where is my crew?"Where is that...person?!” Neptune cried. He searched around, looking for anyway to escape. No such luck. Then, he heard a yell from across the area. “Let me go! Let me GO!” It was Hatena’s voice...but it sounded as if he was being tortured...or worse.

Chapter 2: Hatena’s Robot== == “You don’t know what you’re doing!” Hatena screamed. “Stop squirming, you filthy animal.” A voice said. It was dark and gloomy, that voice. No emotions at all. The voice had a shadowy figure with no way to tell who it was. However, it held a little machine, Perfect for Hatena‘s size. “You can’t put me in there!“ Hatena said, “or ill...I’ll-“ “YOU’LL WHAT?” The voice screeched. Hatena stayed silent, but tried to escape. He felt an electric shock hit his body as he fell to the ground. “Wh...who are you...?” Hatena said, as he shook on the floor. “That’s for me to know...and you to suffer through.” The voice said. He took Hatena into his hands and put him into the machine.

Chapter 3: Marty_Sayz's army== == Marty_Sayz ordered C_L to help him clean the cells. Well more like ordered C_L to clean the cells while he watched. Spyroclub1 was still in his cell, and the creaking bars of the cell were driving him crazy. However, the whole Comment Ninja's team was actully starting to get crazy. Half of them were losing their sanity. sanity is an important thing. Swayamplayz was thinking about something other than being trapped in a cell alone though. He was thinking about how to get out. "Hey whats this?" Swayapalyz said to himself. He found something that would change everything.

Chapter 4: New ending== == Marty_Sayz was asleep that night.He was having a dream that was actully a user using a dreamwalker. Marty_Sayz's dream was this: '''"Before you fell." "Who was that?" said a voice. MartySayz looked around. "I knew you." said the voice again. "W-What?" Marty_Sayz asked. "You know me......I much more powerful than you, you faker." "I've grown stronger........" Marty_Sayz argued. "Don't argue with me, I am much more strong than you will ever be."spoke the voice. "Wha-" Marty_Sayz was scared by now. "I am more powerful. I've exploded Neptune's chance at finding BNF. Literly. Literly though, things are hard to get done that way." the voice finished. "You know." the voice said. "umm....I dont." said Marty_Sayz. "You know!" said the voice."Umm....I don't." said Marty_Sayz. "YOU KNOW!" said the voice.Then Marty_Sayz woke up. I need to get better dreams. thought Marty_Sayz still in his dream. Suddenly a new voice broke up the hilarous thoughts. this one was more scary and imtimidating. The voice said:'''

'''T̶͍̭̩̤̂́̀̽̈́̐̏̊̇͟͡h͇͓̩͔͌́̈͊͜͝à̴̭̥̤̭̥̳̗̲̝́̓̇̍̒̽͞t̡̠̞̳̝̺̆̓́̽͂͜ͅ ŵ̶̟͓̗̲̮̩̱̈̎͊̐͗͛͠ȧ̼̫̯̤̣̞̮͔̐͑͌̆̇ͅş̸̮̺̳̱͓̗̖̾̽̀̎͆̓͛̈̇̾ j̢̨̥̳̫͕̮̯̙̞̍͌̀͂̊͛̂͡͝u̞̰̯̙̻̳̱͋͋̆̈́̋̆̎͟s̼̟̦͙̉̿́͑͑̓̆͘͟t̢̤͈̺̭͇̙̀͌̈͑̋̏ ţ̘̮̖̠̘̓͋̈́̍̓̕̚͟͞͡o̷̼͖͚̹̤̐̒́̏͌͞ r̛̥͇̖͕̩̣̅́̌̒͐̈͢ă̢̺̞̠̝͔͕͔͈̇̉̓̈́̔̔̈ͅt̝̱̤̞͍̳͑̔̄̆͡ṫ̸̡̛̫̩̦̮͇̫͓̓̀̃̃̌̅͋̚͟l̷̜̹̣̮̩̮̲̅̍̆̾̽ͅĕ̶̥̦͈̖͒̌̽͌̽͒͂͜ ỵ̷̛̩̠͚͈͔̣̪͒̐̈͑ͅǒ̸̳̣̘̫̘̺͊̀̑͒̒͜͝ư̧͉̫͔̯̫̘̆͊̎́͘̚̚͢͠ͅ u͖͓͓̥̹̲̭̖̱͗̍̏̄̏̍̔͊͢͞p̸̨̨̲̖̥̜̯̖̈́̐̽̈́͐͜ͅ,̛͖̬̞̱͇͖̺͍͈̑̿̍̓͗̒͟ j̶̨̬̤̙̭̗͍̊͗͌͑̃̒͢͠͝u͙̗̫̥͍͍̔̔͛͜͠͠ṡ̱̹̣̠͈͈̾͆̿̂̃̔̚ţ̟͔̬̭̬̺̋̌͆̿̕ ṣ̷̨̡͇̝̈̉̒͂͂͢o̱̼̜̰̺̩͊͋̂̿̀͊͑͗̒͞ I̷̡̤̖̜͔̜̜͋͂̔͐̎̕͜ͅ c̵̨̛͖̖̤̟̞͔̹̣̱͑̍̾̍̓͑̉͠a̸͖̻̱̪̲̩̯͈̺͒́́̇́̐̋̎̒ͅn̩̙͇̩͕͎͖̼̠͐̓̃̒̐̽̕͜͠ b̙̟̟̦͖̳̓͗̅̿̋̑͗͆̚̚͢ͅr̻͕͈̣̳͂̾̌͋̈́̕̚ͅḭ̴͍̤̰̭͊͂̄̃̎̑͊̉̍͟͜ͅn̵̡̛̲̠͙͖͕͇̰͉̐͑̋̅̇̔̐͠g͍̳̩͓̯̹͒̅̎̑͒̚̚͜͡͠ y̹͙̫͇͈̣̟̫͎̆̐̈́͗̂́̋͘o̶̮̭͓̻̱͐̿͆̑́̕u̡͉̱͚̘̤̓̇̿̈͐͞ ḑ̠͈͔̮̆̊̈́͒͘͜͜ơ͙̤̻̞̮̬̳̽̐͋̽̾͐̀̚ŵ̸̥͉̱̖̜̯͍̬̓̓̆̚̚͜n̢̛͍̩̲͙̲̰̰̗͌͗̄̔͒̍̃́͢͡!͚̺̮̪̥̰̙́͊̀̓̌̄̈́͘͜͝͞ͅ!̧̖͎̯̖̹͓͆̾͐́͋͌!̛̻̺͎͈̝̞̻̹̓̀́̑̓͘̚͘ Y̷̡̨̫͍̯̗̙͖̝̽͌̄̈̅̍͌̾̕o̢̢̡̙̻̳̹̥͔̘̾̎͋̀͋u̢̮̻̼̺̔͂͆̌͢͡͝ ẗ͖̣̘̖̰́̊͊͋̆̌͂̾̈̕ͅḩ͚̘̳̲̳̃͌̓͘͡͝į̠̣͉̺͔̻͔̊́̒̋̉̒̄͛͘͠n̸̡̛̦̳͕̼̘̱͊́̔̾͆͂͠͞ͅk̯͚͈̻͚̩̘̯̼̓͆́̈̿͠ͅ Ỉ̷̜͕̹̼͊̓̽̆͒̆̇͒͟͟ d̷̝͓̹͕͓̊̆̂̑͡͡ǒ̷̢̼̲̼̬̲̩̞͊̊̚͢͢͝ņ̡̛̹͔̙̘̤̝̦̙̾͛̽͂̕'̡̧̢̨͍̙̺̣͒̏̃̾͐̃̂͌͐͢͠t̹̳̯͕̩͙̉̀̉̏̆̾͜͞ ŗ̸̛̗͈͇̖͊̐͑͜͜͝ͅȩ̫̰̺͚̯͙͚̊̾͌̿̄̌̇ç̩̪̮͚̠͖̱̜̈́̔̀͋̉̽̒͑̉ȍ͚͍̥̮͑̆͐̑͋̔̄͞ͅͅṉ̶̰̥͈̭̘̗̜̫̅̆̇͑͆͛̽̌̾̚ͅḯ̴̟̝̼̮̿̎̏̆̚͟͞͡z̨̧̛̭̰̟̯̣̓̊̓̌͆̂̈̅͢͜e̡̡̧͚̠͚͒͌̍̽͐̒͞ ȳ̢̝̤̮͉͇̹̞̣̹̏̎̊̉̒̃̒̓͒o̵̧̗̮̱̼̪̿̈̑̄̓͐̿͟͞͡ṵ̢̞̰̺͍̥͋̓̅͛̓͂̀̕͘̚͢?̬͍̰̞̝͚̬̤̫̆̿̈́̑͊̋́̿!̫͉͔̟͓͔̉̔͒̎̆̎̒͟͞?̼̟͎̜̄̂̔̒̕͡ͅ w̴̧̡̻͈̦̯̗̤̬̪͑̿̔̓͆e̷̡͖̝͎͙͕͕̫̓̽̄̐̓̑̒̅̿̉͢ļ̸̧̞̱̩̤̝̥̊̓͊̀͌͋̀͘͡l̨̨͈̜̲̗̝͉̻̄́̒͒̃̎͋̕͟ t̢̠̰͙̱͖̦̏̌̈́̔͂͌͢h̷̗̙̦̲̻͖̮̳͉̻͛͛̐̽̂̽̈́̏a̴̧̞͔̦̥̤̮̾̋̉̆̄͡ẗ̩̼͕̜̻̊̉͂͋͆̆͑̑̀ w̶͈̤͚̼͉̜̜̺͍͂̈́͗̾̑̈͝i̡̨̛̹̩̘̓̊̒̈́̔̾͜͡l̛̞̠̠̹̻̿͌̈̋̀̅̃͞l̷̨̰͎̣̺̓́̃͂̾̄̚̚̕ c̱̗̦̼̺̈́͛̓̀͊̓͜͠͞ḫ̶̨̛̜̰͈̱̟̍͐̽̎͗͂͆̎̕a̱̫̤̤̪̙̜̫͓̍̀̾͞͡n͍̜̱̹̫̉̉̄̔̏́̔̑͘ͅͅg̡̧̡̞͖̤͌̊͆̒̓͟ȅ̵̛͚͇̭͍̠̱̂̃́̑̾.̧̩͕̥͉̫̎̈́͂͛̏͟͞ G̫̗͖̰͒̾̒͌̎̀̄̑͘ͅo̧̙̠̹͖̹̠̐̾́́̐̅͞ǫ̷̧̛̪͎͎͉̙̖̞̍̅͜͠͡d̛̦͍̺̮͕̭̺̲̻̤̎̍̈̐͐b̸̨̧͖̠̼͇̔͋͋̎̏͗̚̚̕ͅỳ̵̢̼͙̜̆̔͆̋͂̑̎͟͡ͅe̡̨̱̥̳̣̯͂̈́̃̂̒̂̽͞ͅ.̮̗̦͓͉̾̿̄̑͟͡͡ I̖̯̖̦̣͗̍̽͛́̚͟ w̛͈̝͈̭̯͍̙̾̆́̍́̾͡ͅḭ͙̪̘̺̄̾͆̇̔l͔̮̪͔͕̆̇̾͛́̀̃̊͡͞l̷͔̺̼̲̿̀̐̀̄͢ e̞̙̻͔̗̭̖̞̼̐͑̈́̓̚x̸̛͙͚̺͚̏͂̃̈́̕͢c̭̞͎͉͔͍͍͈̋͐͆͋̐̎͞ͅe̸̗̪̘̣̭͙̩̝̯͛͋͆̈́͆̄̚̕p̡̠̟͉͙̪̦̣͐̈̂͒̈ͅt̴͔̦̻̠̝̣͂͂̈̚͜͞ b͍̬̻̪̮͚͍̣̫͌͋̂̐̿͘͜e̻̰͉͆͌́̚̕͢ͅt̵͈̙̦͔̬͎̤̲͇̿̇̂̋̀̅̑͘t̵̬̘͙̮͉̞͈̗̖͒̐̊̊̚ë̞̲̥̞̟͓͕́̾͊̏̿͐͟r̸̹̦͔͇̣͈͆̇̾́̃̀̇̕͡ t̢̡̛̘̘̟̬̞̻̬̔̑̉̑́͐̓̚͝ẖ̵̛͎̯̲͙͍̫̏̿̕͢͡͠į̥̦̪̱̱̙͐͂͊̃͆̊̕͜n̶̝̤͎̳̼͓̜̱̏̑̏̈́̆͢͜g̡̮̼͙̾̾̈́̍̾̎̂̅̽ͅş̵͚̟̖̭̖̿̌̓̓̏͞ f̸̡̛̪̠̻̰͐̑̀̿͒̀͌͌͝ŕ̶̻͎͇͓̞̙̊̈̔̍͋̚͟͜ǭ̗̻͍̬̮̋̌͒͜͝m̤̦̰̫̍̽̅́̃̾̽͜͝ ÿ̵̢̤̭̭͙͚͔́̂̌̀̂͊͜o̶̧̳̝͇̭̽̈̌̐̐ư͇͕͉͓̭̈́͑̈́̀́̈̉͢͝͞.̶͇͓̣̰̣̽́̇̃̓̃̎̋̚ Î̷̢̧̧͉̌͊̊͛̃͐̈́́ͅ ŗ̨͖̱̯̺̀͊̅͗̐̊͂̕ͅa̘̦̘̤͔̣͕͉̘̲̿̆̐̅͗̌̓̀͡ṫ̢͉̙̤̼̮͉̮̐͛͌͋̓̓̆ţ͖͎͉̻̭̗̞̫̮̀͆̓͑̒̾̀l͚̭̭̫̖͍͉̳̥͑̔̽̽̄ȩ̶̨͕̳̱̺̟͆̔̇̃̋̾̎͘ď̙͇͎̝̹̊̊̄͒̃͞ ư̠̦̳͇̯̜̥̙̏̀̎̉̋̓̚̚̚ͅp̴̡͈͎͉͙͕̤̟̅̈͂̇̇̾̓ Ň̸̨̳̞͍̭̤̂̊̓̅̆̃͆͜ḛ͈͎̮̩̅̑̉̆̈́̊͘ͅp̴̡̲̥͈̞̱͎̊̉͋͂͆̀̏͘ͅt̵̘̫̩̤͑̽̊̒̔̽͟͞͠ù̲̮̳̱͕̼̏̈̍͂̓͠͝n̫̯̳͖͙̼̯̗̳͗̐̾̌̍̆̉͌͐̆e͈̗̲̭̘̤̱͒̔̌́̈̈́̒͡͞͡ͅͅ,̵͈͚̻̜͍̯̯̪͖̄͂͂̓̏̔͗̂̌̚͟ ą̵̟͉̖͆̆̅̅͘͜͜ͅn̶̥̭̳̩̠̑͗͗̔̍͢͢͡ͅd͓̪̜͙͚̗̫̐̈́̓̂̏͌̔͘͢͞ I̸̭̺͉̙̠͊͑͗̀̒̄̑̒͢ c̴͓͚͚͉̝̐̽͗̓̀̎̓͋͘͟ȧ̞͓̰͙͖͕̪͐̓͘͝͝ͅn̷̢̲͖͍̫̯̝̍̃̏̄̃́̀̒̚͟͝ͅͅ ḓ̜̤̱͉͙̭̂̔́̓̓̈͜o̡̢̱͚̫̦̘̎̿̑̐̍͘͜͝ å̢͈̪͙̖̞͔͈͋͆̔̍̓͌̌͡͞ͅ ļ̸̯̗̗͎͋̋͆̃̍ơ̸̧̬͕͚̳̳̈́͒̂̇̃̽͡͡ț͍̯͖̬̫͚͂̏͊͒͟͞ ẃ̱̠͔̱̰͖͙͛̏͋͒̽̎̐̐ͅò̧͇̻̤͓̆̄̒͐̔͐̚͢r̨̢̧̛̫͖̱̬̞͆̀͂̈̓̽ͅs̵̳̥̟̤̻̲͐͋̌́̈́̽͒̅͐e̸̡͇͙̯̖̲̙̺͖̱̎̏͒̽̚͝.̸͈͔͇̙̩̩̺͂̉̒͊̀̄̃̔ G̯̜̩̣͎͚̪̉̈̔̒̆́͘o̥̻̟̘̯͂̈́̂̓̒̚̚͝͠o̷̖̺̩̪̫̾̏̉̈̄̅̂̋͝d͎̯̦͚̬͔̺̝͂̌͒͆͗̕b̵̦̭͓̯̦̺͈̺̙̯̎̓̀͒͊͛̐̐͝ẏ̵͍̲̣͕̼̜̙̇͂̇̍́͢e̠̺̥͕̮̓͗̃̈́̏̕ͅ.̻͓̝̣̼͆̀͛͂̓̽͑͑̚͟͢ͅ S̵̛̫͖̳̜̥͔͓͎͓̮̒̋̋̊̒ę̸̛̩̩̪͍͈͖̀͛̈̄̿͐͟ͅệ̡̖̞̙̠̣͇͖̩̽͆̑̽͂͡͝ ŷ̶̡̛͍̣̯̩̾̆̒͒́͊̈́̋ȯ̡̧͍͙̲̪̠̹͂͌̀̀̍̽u̵̹̜̭̞͋̔̐͊̊̿͊͋̾ͅ.̢̟̰͙̬̪̖̼̣̘͗̾͌̏͆͛ Ỹ͕̞̯̳̠̩͌̑̃́͛̏̓̌ͅō͎̩̹̞̬̊͒̀̅̊̅͡ṵ̢̧̼̝͕͉͚̮̋̒͑̊̈̄̈́͡ k͉̩͇̫̪̖͂̅̐̋̅͒͟ņ̶̛̻̳̺̳̔̌́̋͘̚ỏ̧̪̰̺̣̞͓̭̱̄̐̀̄͟͝w̧̰͕̼̬͎̲̱̅̽̀̍͊̃͊͟ͅ w̷̛̝͖̭͔̖͎͊́͗͛͜ͅḩ̼̤͔̗̊̾̇̎͠o̷͚͔̳̜̙̘͋̈͆̄̄̀̽̕ I̶̞̟͈͍̲̩̓́̈͒̍̇̏͟͞ ą̸͈̰͈̰̯͓͌͋̓͂͛̽̔̕m̴̛̼̤̤̪͐̀̀̈̀̅̒͜.̡̤̲̬͙͎̮͚̇̅́̅̉͞ '''

(that said:That was just to rattle you up, just so I can bring you down!!! You think I don't reconize you?!? well that will change. Goodbye. I will except better things from you. I rattled up Neptune, and I can do a lot worse. Goodbye. See you. You know who I am.)

Marty_Sayz woke up screaming. His screaming stopped when he heard a voice rang out, "DONT FORGET!" that woke up everyone. Marty_Sayz remembered now. "Oh no....." he said. "I thought he was gone forever....." Neptune tried to fall back asleep that night. But morning cam before that could happen.

Chapter 5: The follow== == Neptune fell back asleep at 5:00 and woke up at 6:00. The cell doors were open. Marty_Sayz was gone. "Where is he?" Neptun e said to himself. Little did Neptune know, Marty_Sayz was long gone. Nothing seemed wrong however.

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