Community Activity:Improve the story!

Ok guys, I'm making a new activity where I wirte a paragraph of a story, and anyone can add on. just improve the story

Chapter One.
It was a dark and stormy night at the local burger king. P-dog drank his Milkshake. As he savored the flavors in his MilkShake, Henry came up behind him and put his hand on P-dogs shoulder.

"You are very scary." P-Dog yelled.

"It'll be ok, man"

"Yeah, I guess I overeacted. thanks dude."

P-dog was suffering the loss of one of his friends, M-frog, who died in a bike accident. His school mourned. It was about a week ago, and he had a basketbal tournament this weekend, and his sorrow might mess him up.

"Try to cheer up," GG said

"Sure," P-dog replied

They left Burger King

They walk out.

”Wait is that a killer clown?” Said P-Dog.

"No” said gg4l.

They turned on the tv and saw that the vikings had gotten smoked by the seahawks

"Augh!!" P-dog cried out. "BNB will never let us hear the end of this!"

"Seahawks won! HAHA!" yelled BNB walking up to them.

”Then p-dog smashes the tv on BNBs head.”

bnb passes out

10 minutes later

"hey me and gg joined your basketball team!" said bnb happily

”Um he must be going crazy“ said GG4L.

"No i'm ok!" said bnb. "We need to help p-dog in his basketball tournament."

"BRO WHAT IS UP!" Neptune yelled, driving up in a blue lambo with the roof off.

"Hey Neptune." gg4l said.

Neptune gave them pizza and sodas, and the pizza had mushrooms, and pinapples.

"Good toppings on the pizza." Neptune added.

"Wow thanks Neptune!" said bnb. He then proceeds to throw his pizza into the trash.

"Here want cheese pizza?" Neptune hands bnb a cheese pizza with no toppings.

"Nah I'm good, I don't really have much of an appetite, with p-dog smashing a tv on me and all." bnb says rubbing his head from where p-dog hit him over the head

"Oh cool." Neptune said, eating a piece of little cearses crazy bread.

"Want a ride?'

"Sure!" bnb said looking at the blue lambo. " I've never been in a lambo before!"

"I know its nice." Neptune said.

Bnb hopped in the back.

"Where are we heading too?" bnb asked.

Suddenly GG4L explodes and dies.

"Woah did you see that Neptune?" asked bnb incredulously. " GG4l just exploded!"

Suddenly. CrossDoggo feel out of the sky!

”WOOOOOAAAAHHH!!,” CrossDoggo yelled.

”I’ll catch you!” Neptune yelled.

”He drove the car and caught CrossDoggo.

”Why where you falling out of the sky?” Everyone asked.

”PlusCatto is attacking the city again, and i dealt with him, but the explosion sent me flying.” CrossDoggo explained.

”Ugh, that cat is so annoying. He thinks he’s all powerful. Sure, he is giant, and has robots and drones, but he has no friends, unlike us, we have each other!” BNB said.

”YEAH!” Everyone except Neptune agreed.

"Sure." Neptune responded.

”I wonder where GG is...” P-Dog muttered.

"Did you guys hear that?" asked bnb.

"It sounded like meow!” Growled CrossDoggo.

Neptune suddenly passed out.

"Blue orange night sky." Neptune muttered, then fell asleep (as in passed out).

"uh n-n-neptune." said bnb very scared

”I think it’s PlusCatto. I thought when I shoved him in the nuclear power plant he died. The rest of the guys go. Neptune, stay with me. You are an experienced comment ninja! We’ll deal with him. I have weapons, some powers, and stuff.” CrossDoggo Barked.