Fanon:The Commenters' exploit of combat - 1

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During poll war 2, two sides fought; The pollers and the Anti-Pollers. (This is not based off the Joe stories.) Alex"Cluch"Carry106 was the commander. During the wars, he got sucked into a blackhole created by the forces of evil and was never too be seen again. Seeing that his right-hand man vanished, Marysayz, the genral, ordered the pollers to be replaced by BOTS because the black hole was their fault. A commenter by the name of PollerNate joined. He was a failed cloning experiment in the lab of BiggerNate91. After downgrading Martysayz, because PollerNate did not think of him as a worthy leader, the BOTS chased him down because of his refusal, helping the anti-pollers whether they liked it or not. When all hope seemed lost for Martysayz, he jumped into a volcano. The battle raged on, and without Marty, the pollers grew stronger until, PollerNate sunk into the water. The mods down in the ocean dealt with him. Now, the poller BOTS were no match for the antis. Soon enough the battle ended and all was peaceful once again...

Chapter one: Kaboom!
One fine day, CheezDoodle, Neptune, and Swayamplays, were walking to BiggerNate's (BN) house. "Let's see if he wants to play soccer with us," says Neptune. Just then, they heard an explosion coming from BN' direction. "What was THAT???!!!" Swayam yelled. The three ran to BN's house to investigate. "WE WILL SAVE YOU!!!" Swayam yelled, as he kicked the door to BN's house off it's hinges. "We're fine," said Bigger. "You owe me a new door." "But, what made that loud noise?" Swayam's voice trailed off. "I am showing Flipnote, here, the solution we put in our exploding bullets that messes with the poll-droid's motherboard," BN answered. "Mother-boring," CheezDoodle said, rolling his eyes. "Yeah," Swayam said. "Why don't you relax? The poll wars just ended a couple months ago. Say goodbye to work and hello to vacation!!!" "This is serious, Swayamplays," said Flipnote. "Any of the pollers could be back." Then he dropped the bomb. "Even Martysayz." "M-Martysayz...?" The three studdered. "Yes," said BN. "The radar has been showing recent poller activity the last few days." "Lemme see!" said Swayam. "Ha! This is garbage! It said there is poller activity underneath us." BN sighed. "Maybe you are right," he said. "Maybe this is just garbage..." "But, we are so close to discovering a new solution, that we can't stop now," Flipnote finished. This seemed to lift BN's spirits. "Yeah! So go play soccer without us, we have some work to finish." And with that, the two got back to work.

Chapter two: Work, work, and no play
On their way to the field, the 3 see Spyroclub running on the track. "Hey, Spyroclub," Swayam yelled. "Come join us for soccer! Two on two! You can be on my team!" "He doesn't want to be on your team," Cheezdoodle said. "You stink!" "Hey, shut-up scrub!" Neptune laughed as the two argued. "So... Was that a yes or a no on playing?" asked Swayam. "Sorry, dude," Spyroclub answered. "I have to train. You never know when the pollers will attack next." "But it's vacation!" "No, man. Gotta beat my high score." And then Spyroclub ran off. "Aw, man," Neptune shouted. "Everyone is training." "This is wrong!" Swayam protested. "IT'S VACATION!!!" "Three strikes and your out," said Cheezdoodle pointing to Yoda. "If he is training, I guess so should we." They walked over to Yoda. "Hi g-" "SAY NO MORE!" Swayam yelled. "I have seen enough!" Yoda was lifting wieghts. Swayam stomped off. "Wait!" But Neptune's voice was muffled by a lound sound.

Chapter three: A new kind of Boom
KA-BOOM!!! "What was that?" Cried yoda. "Oh, just BN's and Flipnote's expeirementing," CheezDoodle said. "I'm sure their fine." "Well, go find out to make sure," Yoda replied. "We will," said CheezDoodle, and he rounded the others up. "And if there is any trouble, before you do something, call us!" Yoda called. As they walked, the three talked about the radar. "You know what is weird?" said Neptune. "What?" the other two say. "Well, BN is pretty good at tech and expereiments, right?" "Riiiight..." "Well, his tech never fails," "Uh, huh..." said Swayam, wanting NPT to get to the point. "So, what I am saying is, well..." "WELL WHAT ALREADY???" Swayam was yelling now. "WhatifMartysayzisstillaliveandhasahidoutandhasbeenhearingeverythingwesayinBN'slab?" "Whoa, whoa, whoa," CheezDoodle said. "Calm down. The hideout inside the volcano theory is just another myth. You will see, everything is f-" The three looked around. "ine," he finished.

Chapter four: Top warriors?
"Wow!" Neptune said. "This is..." he did not know what to say. "Forget about the house," said Swayam. "Where is BN and Flipnote?" They looked every were and could not find them. They shouted thier names, but no answer. "I'm going in," said Swayam. "Wait!" said CheezDoodle. "Remember what Yoda said?" Yoda's words flashed in Swayamplays's mind. "And if there is any trouble, before you do something, call us!". "Yoda, shmoda," he said. We are the top warriors, we can handle a little investigation." "If you put it that way," Cheezdoodle said. "Then let's do it!" They went in. "Look footprints!" Neptune said. "L-look," Swayamplays said. He was pointing to an outline of a commenter. They could feel the presents of evil. Black and purple orbs were floating and swirling around him. His red eyes sliced through the dark like a laser. "RUN!" CheezDoodle yelled. They heard an evil laugh, then a net swooped them up, thick, green fog was clouding the place, and then, before they could yell "HELP!", everything went black.

Chapter five: The rope
"It's been a while since those three left," Yoda thought. "Are they alright? Or are they getting into trouble, like those guys always do? I will ask Spyroclub to go with me to find them." Yoda went to get Spyroclub, meanwhile...

Neptune woke up to the sound of bubbling. It was hot, very hot. "Were am I? How did I get here? How come I am in this cage???" "Your questions will be answered in a matter of time," a familiar voice said. Neptune spun around. "M-mar-MARYSAYZ???!!!" Neptune exclaimed. "I thought you were dead!" "Hmm," He answered. "Then you were wrong. But good news! You get to watch the death of your friend! BwaH haW HAW!" "BiggerNate! NO!" BN was tied on a rope above the lava. "Now," Marty began. "Tell me how to reverse the formula that messes with my BOTS." "I will never tell you!" BN exclaimed. "Fine, we will play the hard way." said marty. "Tell me or you are going in the lava. Then your little friend, Dipdope-" "It's FLIPNOTE!!!" BN yelled. "Fine, Flipnote," he continued. "Well, he will be next." "No! Flipnote!" Flipnote replied, "Don't do it!" "Never!" BN cried! Then, martysayz lit the rope.

Chaper six: the crew
Spyroclub and Yoda were running to BN's house when they saw into Lordnour. "C'mon," Spyro said to Lordnour. "We need you." "Yeah," yoda added. "CD51, NNC, and swayam went missing when they investigated the explosion at BN's house." "Well, we gotta find them," said Lordnour, and they took off. When they arrived at the house, Yoda said, "This is more than a little puff. This is the work of a poller." Lordnour and Spyroclub exchanged worried glances. "Look!" Spyroclub exclaimed. "Footprints." "And they lead to..." Lordnour finished, "A hole." The hole was pitch black. It looked to go on forever. "Let's grab this rope, these lasers, and lets grab... this!" Yoda said pulling up an object. "Let's rescue some commenters!"

Chapter seven: The rescue
BN's rope was burning quickly. Commenters were yelling and screaming in horror at this sight. It was time for BN to say goodbye, when suddenly, three commenters came falling down. "Yoda! Spyroclub! Lordnour! You came!" Neptune yelled. Two were fighting off droids and one was "Flying?" Marty said. "How could that be?" Yoda flew to BN, as he was just about to fall, and swooped him up. "Uh, we're kinda cornered..." said Spyroclub. Yoda grabbed them and said, "We will come back for the others later." and then, they flew off. "Curses!" Martysayz said. "Well at least I still have you guys..." He said, eyeing the four. Neptune squirmed. "Take them to the dungeon!" Martysayz barked to the droids. "All we need is a plan..."

Chapter eight: Brainstorming
"All we need is a plan," Yoda said. "Something that could take them down." "Well, that super-jetpack thing you grabbed was very efficient." Lordnour commented. "Ah!" BN said. "That's what you used! One of my oldest inventions, The jetpack 2000! I have to think of a better name. I never tested it. That was risky..." "Well, we saved you," Yoda said. "That is all that matters." "If there is another poll war," Spyroclub stated. "Then we better build a hideout to do business in, without getting ambushed." "Great idea," BN said. "But I am worried about the four that are stuck. Especially Flipnote." "Don't worry," Yoda said. "We will think of something. But, now we have to build a fort!"

Chapter 9: Neptune's escape
Marty_Sayz was standing on a chair. He was still trying to figure out how Yoda flew, when a rustling noice broke loose. Marty_Sayz looked behind him. Neptune was gone. "How-" Marty_Sayz started, then he noticed a note lying on the floor. "What is this?" Marty_Sayz said to himself. He picked up the note. It read: '''I Saved Neptune. I couldn't save the others, I had no time to. I am in the Quick Questions side. You will never reach us now. - Nate Clone.''' Nate clone was a famous Quick Questions fighter. That didn't matter now. Neptune's escape now mattered much more.

Chapter 10: QQ base
far away was a user who had been forgotten. A villain nobody remembered. This villain looked a lot like herobrine. A herobrine with themesongs. "Hi." the user said to an intercom. "I am superfoxtrot, and Superfoxtrot is a good name becuase I get a lot of fame, my nickname is SFT, I want to be free, I am SFT." the user said. Suddenly everything made sence.

Neptune walked into the QQ base, a base for QQ'ers. *Snap!* He turned around

Chapter 11: The end?
M_S was still pondering. "Wait! Why waste my time wondering how they did that, when I can destroy them?" He gave the BOTs a command. "Take them, and hang them above the lava." It was hot inside the volcano. "Then, I will set the timer." "YOUR TIME IN THE COMMENT SECTION IS OVER." He boomed. Lava bubbled and bursted, almost splashing CD51. The BOT's clammy metal hands closed around his body. He would think something cold like this would make him feel better in this immense heat. But, he could knew the evil wrapped around him was burning hotter than lava. The BOTs clanked and whirred as they arose and took the three over to the lava pit. It was time to act fast.

Chapter 12: The user
A murky figure trudged in the shadows. He had been lost in this network of caves for as long as he could remember. It was getting warm. The thick, damp air turned thin and hot. The walls seemed to have steam coming out of them. Them he saw light. His walk turned into a sprint. Will this be the end of his wandering? Then he heard a scream. A large lava pi came into view. Just then a burst of lava splashed at him. Quickly dodging, he could make out a figure on the other side. Then, out of the shadows, six more appeared. Three bigger ones holding three smaller ones. The user looked up at the ceiling and saw three ropes. He connected the dots. "I have to save them," he thought. Just then, a user jumped into the lava pit with the BOT still holding on. He could not believe it.

Chapter 13: QQ
* Snap!* NPT whirled around. "Did I scare you?" The voice seemed to be coming from everywhere. "Wh-who are you?" Neptune asked. A user jumped down behind him. "I am Nate_Clone, Leader of QQ." "Wait..." He replied. "I made up quick questions!" "It's not a copyright." Nate_Clone said. "Plus, I am obviously worthy of leading QQ. Who had to rescue YOU from M_S, the poller?" Neptune stood in silence. "How about co-leader?" Neptune asked Nate clone. "Sure." Nate clone gave up. But the conversation didn't get any further.

Chapter 14: the lava
The user ran toward the pit of lava. The hot air was almost defying. Then, the volcano erupted, spewing lava everywhere. The user ran, but a hand came from the lava and pulled him up. He braced himself. Ready to feel the heat. But, he felt nothing. Finally the cool air hit his face as he came flying out. How good it felt to be outside again. Next to him was laying three users. "Who did that?" He asked. "What?" Asked Swayam. "Who jumped into the lava and pulled me in?" CD51 stepped up. "I did," he said.

Chapter 15: Elements
"How?" asked the user. "Well," said CheezDoodle. "Every commenter has an element. Mine is fire." "Some people have not discovered thier's yet," Said Swayam. "Like me!" "I did not know what mine was before this," Said CD. "I just felt the urge to jump in, so I did. Once you were pulled into my invisible barrier, you were immune." "What other elements are there?" The user asked "Hmmm..." CheezDoodle replied. "Well, Neptune is ice." "Now we would like to ask a question," Said Flipnote, "Who are you?" "I am..." He paused "GiantNate91." He finished.

Chapter 16: Poller tsunami
It was a nice day. The sky was clear, the air was thin, the sun was shining, and ToPhu was relaxing on the beach. After all the poll wars, he needed time to recharge. Suddenly, the waters seemed to roll back, leaving the once covered sand to dry in the hot sun. ToPhu thought this was strange. Then a clap of thunder could be heard in the distance. The once cloudless sky was now blanketed with grey thunderclouds. Several twisters appeared. More thunder. ToPhu was eager to leave. Packing his bags, he saw lighting. Then he saw somthing else. The water that had been pulled in, was now towering above. 10 feet, 20 feet, 50 feet, 100 feet, 500 feet, until it was a mile above. Running now, ToPhu took one more look back. "No! It could not be!" He thought. "He died in the poll war!" For, the top half of the tsunami formed into the top half of..."Poller Nate!" He exclaimed. Just then, he heard his voice, louder than all the thunder combined. When he talked, the ground shook. Then he let out words that sent a chill down ToPhu's back. "I will seek my revenge!" Then the water collapsed into it's once shapeless self. ToPhu ran for his life. The water was closing in on him. This was the end.

Chapter 17: Ice
ToPhu was running out of breath. Why had't he left earlier? Then he did not hear the sound of rumbling water. He turned his head to see it turned to ice. He was relieved, but wanted to know how that happened. He looked around and saw Neptune freezing the water. Nate_Clone was with him. Nate_Clone turned his attention on ToPhu. Then suddenly started to yell at him. ToPhu was confused. Then he heard a crack, and the last thing he saw was Nate_Clone running at him.

Chapter 18: QQ all over again
ToPhu woke up to the birds chirping in the bright, sunny morning. "Where am I, and what happened?" He demanded. Nate_Clone spoke up,"You got hit by falling ice. I tried to warn you." "Ice?" ToPhu could not remember what happened. "Neptune, here saved thousands of lives turning the water to ice." Nate_Clone said. "But how did this happen?" Neptune walked up to Tophu. Tophu stood up. "How did you do it?" he asked. Neptune looked at him with tiredness. "I have not one, but two elements. so does CD51, and Swyamplayz." Neptune explained. "I have Ice, CD51 has fire, and Swyamplayz has well......I don't know yet, but we are the elemental warriors." Tophu was amazed. Tophu looked like he wanted to fall into the sand below. "Oh yeah, there are 5 of us." Neptune said. "But one has forgotten their power, and the other is forgotten." Neptune told them. "Legend has it, we get TWO elements!" ToPhu was astonished. How he now longed to become one. "It is tougher than you think." NPT said, reading ToPhu's mind. "I am not exactly sure you would like it..." ToPhu thought of something else. "Wait, what are the two names of the forgotten warriors?" he asked. "Their names are Spyroclub1, and ..." Neptune thought. "Well," Said Nate_Clone, "He is forgotten, like Neptune said. Now, you witnessed it," He continued to ToPhu. "What happened?" Suddenly a loud eruption interrupted their conversion. Lava pored out of the beaches sandcastles, and the water grew in temperature. "Were stuck!" shouted Nate Clone. Neptune looked at a nearby tree. "We could climb up the tree, it helps, since heat only rises if its directly under you." Neptune implored. "Did you pay attention in Science class? That's not true." Nate clone said. "I think it is." Neptune argued. "I think the best option is to dig under a non-lava sand, so the water doesn't reach us, and burn us." Nate Clone argued back. "No, Lava would blast up onto us, and burn us!" Neptune franticly shouted. "NOT TRUE!" Shouted Nate clone. Tophu had enough of this. "EVERYONE STOP!" He shouted. Neptune and Nate clone went quiet fast. Tophu glared at them. "We are getting nowhere." He said. "So, quick question- Tree, or dig?" Tophu looked at his watch while he said this. The watch immediately spoke back. "TREE" it said. Neptune smiled, while Nate Clone sighed a breath of defeat. "Tree it is." Neptune happily said.

Chapter 19: The tree
Neptune, Nate Clone and Tophu all ran toward the sturdy oak tree. "If we climb up using the branches, maybe we will get somewhere." Nate clone implored. Neptune nodded. "Your right." Tophu looked at the tall tree. Hights, have never really been his thing. By the time Neptune and Nate clone got up, the water had risen to Tophu's ankles, if he were standing on the ground, that is. Climbing the tree was harder than Tophu had imagined, since he didn't have any climbing training in a while. Tophu tried to climb up the tree, but he kept slipping off, and barely catching himself before he fell to the water to get badly burned or killed. Tophu did not want to die. After many attempts, he finally made it to the 4th branch. He found he could not pull himself any further however. He had lost all his energy.The water was rising fast. The island was sinking into water that was hotter than lava. Tophu was barely avoiding the water, as it sloshed up toward the tree. Neptune saw what was happening, and went down to help Tophu. Nate clone followed, as he was sure that both of them would fall without his help. Neptune tried to pull tophu up the tree, only to successfully bring him up to the 5th branch. Nate clone came down, and helped get him to the 6th branch. Then 7th, then 8th. There were 10 branches, so they had 2 left. Neptune was in an utter exhaustion shock, and Nate Clone was in an utter exhaustion break down. Tophu was sore all over, since he kept accidently ramming into the branches as they went up. Tophu managed to get up to the 9th branch, with Neptune's help, since Nate Clone was unconscious. Neptune, however, could barely move his arms and legs, and needed Tophu's help to pull himself up. ll this happened while the water got closer and closer. If they made it to the top of the tree, they would be safe. Since the water was so hot, it was also misty and clear, so Neptune could see some of Tophu's beach supplies float past. the last branch was really high up, and it was clear only Neptune or Tophu could make it up. Only one of them would come out of this alive. Nate Clone, was already back at the top of the tree. It was either Neptune or Tophu who survived this. Tophu looked at Neptune. Neptune nodded. Tophu got a boost from Neptune, and made it up to the top. Neptune unfortunately, couldn't make it back up. "Before I die." Neptune gasped. "Before I die, tell everyone who asks, that I think they can win." neptune gasped. "And also." Neptune said his final words. "I say goodbye, as a hero, so Goodbye." So with that, Neptune evaporated from the burning hot water.

Chapter 20: The end?
That was that. The rain poured from the sky, yet the lava that swallowed Neptune seemed to eat the rain up too. "A- at least that is the end of MS and his layer." ToPhu quivered.

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Mary_Sayz scoured the Mod base under the sea which was flooded with lava. The lava had not hardened to rock yet, because the base was not exposed to water. MS did not care, he waded through it without pain. His BOTs had locked the remaining MODs. As he cornered one, Marty said, "Neptune was only half right. What about our elements? Bwa ha ha!"

Chapter 21: The End! (Of the first story)
Spyroclub was in his house in the desert. He was trying hard to forget the hardships he went through early in life. He escaped to here to be alone. His door creaked. He looked. A note floated in. "That is odd." he thought. Reading it, he seemed calm, like he knew it all along. He sighed. "It's time." With that, he went to his closet revealing the pitch black, misty chamber leading underground. Another sigh. His footsteps echoed with every step.

Thank you authors for your hard work completing the first Commenters' exploit of Combat!
Special thanks to the following authors,

CheezDoodle51 (Creator)

Neptune_Ninja_Comics (Co.)