Fanon:The Comments Crisis

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Chapter 1: The Banning
“Hey, when will that disaster happen?” Swayamplayz asked Neptune.

“I don’t know,” Neptune responded.

“It's kind of scary knowing that it could happen at any time,” C_L said.

“Yea I know.” Chemical Chaos responded. The four comment ninjas were walking down dusty lanes, a well-known road to walk down.

“Hey what's that up there?” Neptune asked. A metal gate was standing right where the path would be.

“Uh…” Swayamplayz asked. The four just stood there, wondering what the gate meant. Suddenly a bunch of gates started to appear around the 4 comment ninjas.

“What is happening?” Chemical Chaos yelled.

“Look!” Swayamplayz said. C_L pointed to the thing Swayamplayz was looking at. It was the admin who had taken control of planet GC. A good admin.

“Tell them I’m sorry,” he groaned. “I just can't train them. Miamo, now Pig Lover.”

“What the hell happened here,” asked C_L

“Fool.” came a voice. Everyone turned. It was a user that looked like a cartoon character, except different.

“I Pig Lover, the strongest warrior to be seen!” the character exclaimed,

“Uh…” Neptune said.

“My reign will benefit the entirety of the BNCS” PL schemed. “First, the strongest Comment Ninjas, who are destined to be disloyal of the revolution will have to die. At the drop of his word, the 4 comment ninjas started to pixelate. They stared in horror as they withered away slowly. Only Chemical Chaos accepted their fate.

“NOOOOOOO!” Neptune yelled.

“What is happening?!?” C_L yelled.

“It's the end.” Chemical Chaos said sadly. Soon the comment ninjas faded into pixels.

“The old comment section is dying, the age of freedom is over!” PL said. “For too long has this community lost in immaturity, bow, to the new age of industrialization!”

“With the comment ninjas gone, laziness won’t be a problem anymore.” Superfoxtrot helped the admin up.

“He still has a part to play,” said Super. An injured admin groaned.

“That old man?” asked PL. “I’ve destroyed him and his heart.” PL immediately threw his sword at them but they both disappeared. PL laughed.

Chapter 2 | In Enemy Grounds
50 years later

“And that is how the comment ninjas died.” said a user. The user was the mother of a new strong user, P-Dog

“Wow really?” P-Dog said.

“Yep.” Said P-Dog’s mother. “But I can’t talk about it too much, the world before the revolution is a banned topic.

“Now come on, the vice-president, ComicCreatorz is announcing something important." Said P-Dog's mother

P-Dog and his mother went outside to hear what ComicCreatorz had to say.

“Greetings, my citizens, this year is the 50th anniversary of the revolution, where we’ve been facing constant uprisings against the weak community in our previous government, but thanks to the great leadership of PigLover,” ComicCreatorz shouted in glory as their hero, Pig Lover stood beside the podium “Who lead the industrialists on a revolution which improved the conditions of this country.”

“This town went through the harshest of fighting, the previous government had some of the best fighters, and it was a shame that they decided to stick with the previous government.” PL boldly said “Those included ToPhu and much much more. THEY WERE A TRAITOR TO THE FEDERATION!”

“You mean they tried to save us?” Shouted someone from the crowd.

“WHO SAID THAT???” PL yelled but quickly recovered his calm voice. “See, this is the problem we have been facing, constant revolutions, so I, the great Pig Lover, will show you how we deal with traitors.” PL, then, pulled out a pistol, then shot the protester, who faded into pixels. The crowd fell silent. PL waited for their cheers.

“Well?” PL said, annoyed.

The crowd started to cheer, but there was something unenthusiastic about it which irritated PL. PL gave the crowd a stern look, followed by silence. And then the crowd roared with loudness. P-Dog looked at the dirty streets of their city.

Fires roared on a house, while garbage lay on the streets.

The conditions PL gave them were bad.

“Did you know,”P-Dog’s mother said “That it was that tyrant ToPhu who killed your father? That is why I decided to stick to PL, who knows what worse conditions they would’ve faced.

“WHAT!?!? So PL tried to save dad…” P-Dog said, surprised. This was the news which made up his mind. He had been thinking about this for a while. He was going to fight for PL

“You can put it that way…” P-Dog’s mother said as the cheering died away.

“They managed to survive my first blow, and they recruited reinforcements. On their way, they committed the most unforgivable crimes to our community, and killed many loyalists.” PL remorsed, pretending to be in pain. “But, it was those acts that fueled us to defeat the previous government and we defeated all the warlords, and now, today isn’t known as the day Miamo was defeated, but today will be known as the day, the new, and the more powerful nation rose and protected us all.”

“Yes yes, and that is why, in honor of our nation, we will be raising the taxes by 50% to support the military who is constantly working to protect us all!” ComicCreatorz announced and waited for the applause. However, they found many groans instead.

“Ahem…” PL coughed, and the crowd cheered again.

This had been the cruel life they were facing during the reign of PigLover.

== Chapter 3 | Victims of the Reign == “I’m guessing this was the crisis SuperFoxTrot warned us about …” Neptune sighed, defeated. He was in the realm of the banned, along with all of his friends who have fought PL, and lost.

“Ahem,” said a user. He looked familiar and then more users came forward. The user was… Spyroclub1.

“Wow, you've been inactive for a long time.”

“Because of that stupid CheezDoodle51!” roared Spyroclub1. “And also because I was banned.”

“Don’t worry, he’s probably dead since Miamo was banned.” C_L told him.

“Wait, we like Cheese Doodle as the head of our jokes, plus he tastes good!” Chemical Chaos responded.

“Anyway, being banned is actually fun. We play games all the time and stuff,” said Spyroclub1

“Speaking of games, have you seen MartySaid and all of those pollers here?” asked Swayamplayz

“Well, there are two sections of the ban. One is for the evildoers and one is for the good guys. So no, I have not seen any pollers,” said Spyroclub1.

“So like heaven and hell?” Chemical Chaos joked. The floor rumbled. Superfoxtrot appeared.

“That warning was too vague,” said Neptune.

“It was not my choice,” said Super, “my gift only gives vague predictions.”

“Yes I know.” said Swayamplayz. “But still.”

“I want to give you a gift,” said Super, “You will be able to watch the crisis happen but not be able to do anything until it is your turn.”

“What do you mean “turn,” said ChemicalChaos.

“I mean your part,” said Super. “See ya.”

== Chapter 4 | That Day Forth== 50 years back

PL walked towards the Comments Ninja’s Headquarters. As soon as PL walked in, NobodyElse jumped and kicked PL in the face.

“WHO ARE YOU,” PL yelled.

“Ur mom.” Nobody else answered.

“GIVE ME ONE REASON WHY I SHOULDN'T BAN YOU.”

“Because I don't know,” NobodyElse answered.

“Cool your jets guys,” asked ToPhu. “And you are?”

“Pig Lover, your new ruler” PL answered

“We don’t fall under the rule of anyone, unfortunately,” Henry Hudson told PL.

“You probably will after you hear what an unfortunate disaster which happened to your friends.” Pig Lover told them, acting sad.

“What happened?” asked Hatena, rushing into the room.

“Did you kill them?” Henry Hudson said, now mad.

“No, I tried to save them. They were attacked by Miamo’s sympathizers and were banned using one of their inventions. In other words, the people whom you were fighting for killed them.” Pig Lover told them. “However I defeated the previous government and then the admin saw my feat and gave me admin and retired.” Hatena seemed to believe him.

“Weren't you the apprentice of the admin?” asked Hatena now, remembering him.

“I was, and the admin taught me a lot. He encouraged me to take over.” PL sighed

“You liar… You banned them, didn’t you… That’s why they didn’t come back yesterday right?” asked ToPhu.

“I did not, and in this government, accusing someone without proof can get you BANNED!” PL threatened. ToPhu laughed.

“Your powers won’t work here, unfortunately, and especially not on me.” ToPhu scolded, PL then laughed. He had placed bounds on ToPhu, disabling his movements in a blink of an eye.

“I have the entire forces of the nation and can destroy you in as many ways as you can count.” Hatena bowed down. (“Damn it Hatena, aren’t you a cyborg?” NobodyElse cursed.)

“You all do the same,” said PL. One by one, they all bowed down.

Except for Nobody Else, and ToPhu, who was bound tight.

“I am not bowing down to a BLEEPING fake.”

PL frowned.

“I guess we will do this the hard way.” Meanwhile, Nobody Else provided a distraction which ToPhu was able to escape.

“Ah, he’ll soon be captured, as for you…” PL pointed at Nobody Else “You have aided a traitor of this nation, and you will most certainly be punished.” After that day, Nobody Else was never seen again.

Chapter 5: War Rages On== == “Get your papers,” yelled the newsboy. “War goes on for the 50th year!” A civil war had descended across the planet since Pig Lover’s rise to the throne, and ToPhu fought him, he lost the war and now has a bounty on his head. The newsboy was kicked to the ground by a few soldiers.

“WHO PRINTED THIS?” yelled one soldier reading the ad.

“I don't know, some man paid me money to sell it,” said the boy stuttering.

“What should we do with him,” asked another soldier. “I suggest we kill him.”

“No, no,” said a voice from behind them. “Let him go, he seems strong. He could make a good soldier.” The boy gasped. It was ComicRater, the man who wrote some of the best articles of all of Planet GC. But what was he doing in this gully?

“Alright, kid, just stop selling those papers which discriminate against our glorious nation,” said CR eyeing the soldiers. “You may leave now soldiers.”

“Yes sir,” said one soldier.

“Thank you sir…” the boy thanked CR.

“What's your name kid?” asked CR. The boy stood up straight and tall.

“My name is BNBaseball,” said the kid.

“Come with me,” said CR. “How much do you really know about the civil war?”

“Well, I know it's been going on for 50 years now. The bad side led by general ToPhu is losing and ToPhu is getting old. My parents were both on Pig Lovers' side, then ToPhus' army killed them both, I will get revenge.” said BNB.

“Smart boy,” said CR. "You definitely could make a good soldier."

“But why are you here?” BNB asked,

“What do you mean?” CR said.

“Why are you here in this gully,” said BNB.

“Ah, well I’m writing a new article and it will be about this place,” said CR. “And the past government.”

“Why?”

“The old government was starting to starve, and they were taxing us like crazy. More than what our glorious leader does.” the professor recovered.

“Tell me more!”

Chapter 6 | Defeated and Lost.
“So, It has finally come to this.” ToPhu sighed, “All my best generals, defected, the loyalists, defeated, just for my old friends to suffer.” ToPhu was walking down the streets of an abandoned village; where he had once lived. After the incident, where he had lost his friends who defected to the sociopath, PL, he had searched for loyalists who disagreed with PL, which wasn’t that much. His second-in-command, P-Dog, was a spy for PL ever since he was recruited. GarfieldMN, his best general, disappeared in a battle. All of the loyalists either defected to PL or deserted the country elsewhere. Superfoxtrot and the admin have not been seen for a while and for hell would know when he would wake up. He also aged significantly and was not able to fight. He was ready to surrender himself to PL’s forces, and if he is lucky, would return to his friends if they survived the rein. ToPhu saw a man and a child walking towards him, and braced himself in defense.

“That guy looks like ToPhu,” said the child quietly. ToPhu felt the presence of ComicRater. CR felt ToPhu's presence as well. CR took out his pen.

“Dang it,” said CR. “This is my only weapon.” The floor started to rumble again. ComicRater was surprised.

“Quick, this place is not where we want to be... “ CR told the boy, but the boy stayed. He recognized ToPhu. He walked to ToPhu, ready to avenge his parents.

“You ended my parents, and now I will end you,” BNB said, with hatred.

“I never harm anyone without reason,” ToPhu said, not looking at the boy.

“You burned down the village of the discussions,” BNB explained, searching for a weapon.

“Wait, what?” ToPhu sat up, in alarm. He looked at the boy, as to search for any recognition.

“Come on, we have to go” CR urged BNB, but BNB stayed. BNB glared at ToPhu. “And your leaders Neptune, and Swayamplayz are even worse.”

“THEY ARE DEAD.” ToPhu yelled at the boy, “ALL OF THEM, AND WHAT THE HELL

“If that was a village that was burned down, it wasn’t me,” ToPhu said, now looking back down.

“No, BNB, I saved your life, now listen to me.” CR panicked; he knew what would happen if ToPhu continued.

“PL would kill his own people, burn down his own territory, disguised as an enemy force, JUST TO BLAME IT ON OTHERS.” ToPhu bellowed, “HE BLAMED ME FOR CRIMES I DID NOT COMMIT, HE FRAMED PEOPLE WHO WERE DEAD, He would even blame his own people for the cause of suffering… Kid, if your parents were dead from a place I haven’t even heard about, then it must’ve been him. ” BNB fell down at the shock of the news. The weapon he had found clattered to the ground.

“Did you know this?” BNB turned around, interrogating CR. “Did you know that PL was a sociopath and a tyrant?” CR did know, but he didn’t know how to answer. BNB looked suspiciously at CR.

“You lied to me?”

Chapter 7 | Encounter
P-Dog was wandering around the city. He was just heading home after buying some milk at the store. His mother was a pretty rich woman and so they could afford most things. Men could join the army at age 14. P-Dog was 13 and turning 14 next year. He opened his door and expected to hear a radio playing music. The house was dead silent. He then heard a bang in the kitchen He ran to the kitchen and screamed. His mother was lying on the floor and he saw a window broken that led to the roof. He checked his mother to see if she was ok and came to the realization that she was sleeping somehow. He went out of the window and on to the staircase that led to the roof. He peeked his head to see two figures on the roof.

“Fancy, what if that kid comes and sees us here,” said one of them.

“Well NobodyElse, we’ve survived in this city for 50 years, I think we can handle him,” said Fancy.

“Ok lets head back to the-,” said Fancy

“Wait,” said NobodyElse. “He’s here. I can sense him.” P-Dog stopped cold. He then was lifted up by a hand and was thrown on to the roof. NobodyElse and Fancy stood.

“Be more careful,” said the figure behind P-dog. From the shadows, stepped out Henry Hudson

“Wait, what,” said P-Dog. “Aren't you on PL’s side? You helped bring the end of the badge gaming and categories.”

“Wait, who is this guy,” questioned Hudson.

“My name is P-Dog and what do you want from my mother,” said P-Dog defiantly.

“Umm,” stuttered NobodyElse, “We wanted to-,”

“Make sure she was paying taxes,” Fancy said very quickly Henry rolled his eyes.

“Let's just get straight to the point,” said Henry. “I'm not who you think I am. I’m part of the rebellion.”

“No, you hate them.”

“Have you heard of those comment ninjas?,” asked Henry.

“Yeah, I’ve heard of them.” said P-dog. “My mom hated them.”

“I was one.” said Henry.

There was a knock on the door. They all looked at the door. P-dog walked towards the door

“Who’s there?” P-dog asked.

“It’s the head police officer Moothu. Open the door now!” the voice said.

“Don’t open the door.” said Henry

“Why should I listen to you?” asked P-dog and he flung open the door. Suddenly there were 10 cops in front of the door. All of them with their guns drawn. P-Dog looked behind him to ask Hudson for help but Hudson was gone.

“Where are they?” said Moothu looking at P-Dog angrily

“Where are who?” asked P-Dog “Don’t play dumb with me boy.” said Moothu meanacingly. “We had Comment Ninjas sighting at your house.”

“What,” said P-Dog. “Comment Ninjas sightings?”

“Yes, I did see them,” said a voice from behind.

P-Dog turned to see his mom tying up hudson and the rest.

Chapter 8 | Captured
“Thanks,” said ToPhu. “For letting me stay here.”

“No problem,” said CR. “I have to make sure PL isn't suspicious.” CR then walked away.

“Ok, so can you tell me about them,” said BNB.

“Well, they vanished one day. Neptune, Swasimcool,” said ToPhu. “ChemicalChaos and C_L too.”

“How did you survive,” said BNB.

“I escaped and built a resistance,” said ToPhu. “PL already used most of his powers to make the ninja’s vanish so we had a lead. But he had more men than me, and he could replace his losses. I couldn’t. I escaped again and they arrived at our cities just last week. I suspect that they will find the second in command.” A siren flared in the distance.

“All citizens please report to the town plaza,” it said. “We have won the Civil War!”

“Well, they got him,” said ToPhu. “Go on now. I shall hide.” BNB walked through the town until he got to the plaza. PL was on a podium speaking.

“And I’d like to thank our amazing head officer Moothu for catching three Comment Ninjas!” BNB gasped. He ran to get ToPhu. He got to ToPhu and told him the news. ToPhu sat down on the ground hard in disbelief.

“Which ones,” he said.

“Uh, I don't know,” BNB said. The room started to shake. A figure appeared out of nowhere.

“Henry, Fancy, and NobodyElse,” said the figure.

“SuperFoxtrot?” said ToPhu. “I haven't seen you in years.”

“Um,” wondered BNB.

“There are two left,” said SuperFoxtrot. “You and Hatena.”

“Hatena?” said ToPhu.

“You both will work together to beat PL,” said SuperFoxTrot. “And to revive the dead.” When Super vanished, Hatena appeared.

“NO! PLEASE! DON’T BAN ME, I DID NOTHING WRONG!” Hatena screeched.

“STOP SCREAMING!” BNB commanded.

“Huh, ToPhu? Why are you- where am I?” said Hatena. “What day and time is it?”

“December 10th 2069,” answered ToPhu.

“It's been 50 years then, hasn't it,” said Hatena. “And Pig Lover won?”

“Yes,” said ToPhu. “We have to revive the Banned and we’ll need your help.”

Chapter 9: The Banned Rise Again== == “Check,” yelled Spyroclub1. The former Comments Ninja’s had fun. They often played against criminals.

“That is so unbelievably stupid.,” said a shattered miamo. Miamo had been forced to play.

“Welp, another comments ninja has fallen,” said Swayamplayz. C_L came into the room.

“I’m done,” he said.

“Let me escape,” said Miamo. “I can help you be unbanned.”

“Yeah right,” said ChemicalChaos.

“Trick them, gain their trust,” said a voice in Miamo's mind.

“I’m trying,” he said to himself.

“What do you mean?” said Chemical Chaos, “What are you trying?”

“Um,” stuttered Miamo. “Nothing.”

“Pathetic,” said the voice. “Do I have to do everything myself?” Miamo tried standing up but he couldn't. He was bound to the chair. C_L said he was done with something. His time machine.

“Uh you have a time machine,” questioned Swayamplayz “What Can I Do Now?” the voice asked Miamo.

“Help win this match,” said Miamo.

“You act very strange Miamo,” said Spyroclub1.

“Only 5 can enter,” said C_L

Chapter 10 | Murder of The Comments Ninjas
Henry, Fancy and NobodyElse sat in a dark empty room.

“There were so many comments ninjas,” said a figure. “I read stories about them.”

“Huh,” wondered Fancy

“But I soon realized something,” the figure explained. “I was much better and way stronger.” Henry tried to not shudder and tried to be brave. He couldn't.

“I’ve been waiting so long for this,” said the figure staring at NobodyElse.

“Finally it is here,” he said again. NobodyElse couldn't move.

“WHAT ARE YOU,” he yelled.

The figure moved forward and his face was shown.

PigLover. For the first time in his life, NobodyElse couldn't think of anything to say. Henry tried to lunge at PL but PL merely smacked him aside. PL with a sword in hand sliced it through NobodyElse’s head. Fancy screamed and PL knocked him out. Henry started backing up in the cell and PL started walking slowly toward him.

“Ahh Henry,” PL said. “It feels like yesterday when you pledged your oath to me.”

“What oath?” Henry said looking around trying to find a way out of this cell.

“You’re more annoying than NobodyElse aren't you,” PL said. Henry kept PL distracted as he tried to untie himself. PL had his sword ready and then he tried to swing at Henry but then a loud noise occured. PL quickly left the cell but left the door open A protest was happening outside.

“FREEDOM OF THE PRESS!” yelled one. “REMOVE PL!” They were getting gunned down but shields were spread across the crowd.

“Well, our only choice is to fire.” ordered CC. Meanwhile Henry was able to untie himself. No one was in the capitol so he walked around. PL was in a hurry so he didn't close the door shut. In his weakened state, he couldn’t bring Fancy, nor NobodyElse’s corpse, which was deteriorating at the moment. He eventually found PL’s office and walked in. The secretary didn't seem to be there. He opened up a book and couldn't believe his eyes. It was the board of fate. However the pieces seemed to be intact as they were before. He walked around the room when he noticed something fishy. There seemed to be a something behind the bookcase Outside, ToPhu and CR were wondering what to do.

“Do you think it was a good idea leaving bnb behind?” asked CR.

“You should be too,” said ToPhu. “We need someone as a spy.

“Moothu, what should we do,” said ComicsCreatorz outside the capitol. “They are winning.” Moothu knew what he had to do. He jumped and threw explosives at the protesters. Moothu fell and was badly hurt.

“Whatever,” sighed Comics Creators. ToPhu and ComicRater knew that remaining Comment Ninjas were in the building, what they didn’t know, however, was that only one remained conscious. In order to save the remaining Comment Ninjas, they’ll need to sneak into their cell without being detected. It was hard enough that both of them are now wanted criminals who have a fortune on their heads, but fortunately they were in a crowd of citizens who were suffering because of PL’s promises he never made. They did not want to be recognized in fear of losing their heads, but one citizen who was protesting recognized them.

“Oh! It’s my old friend ToPhu!” He exclaimed, “And who are you?”

“Do I know you?” ToPhu said, confused and surprised.

“Oops, wrong vegetable,” he said, “I’m Shahajadas.”

“I feel like I’ve seen you somewhere,” said ToPhu.

“Hmm well my father was a comment ninja,” said Shahajadas, “And you are one as well. Your disguise isn't the best.”

“Who was your father,” said ComicRater.

“ChemicalChaos,” said ToPhu.

“My god, ChemicalChaos might have the worst possible character development timing of all time,” said Hatena.

Everyone jumped back.

“When were you here,” said ComicRater.

“I’m always here,” said Hatena.

DarkDust had been waiting. He was known as Miamo, sitting in the chair for decades. He waited to finally receive the call, from his master. He listened to the comments ninja’s that were right in front of him.

“5 only?” said Spyroclub1.

“Yes all 5 of us,” said C_L as he opened the portal.

“This is your chance,” said the voice inside Miamo’s mind. C_L, Swayamplayz, Neptune, and ChemicalChaos went in and it was Spyro's turn. Miamo ran with the chair on his back. He knocked Spyro out of the way and went in.

“NOOOO,” said Spyroclub1. The portal closed and spyroclub1 was stuck in the banned again.

== Chapter 11 | The Rescue == Henry walked behind the bookcase.He was surprised to see P-dog tied up.

“Mmmph,” said P-dog.

“Settle down there,” said Henry, “I’m right here.” Henry untied P-dog.

“Thank you,” said P-dog, “I have no idea how I was easily beaten by Pig Lover despite my muscles.”

“I don't know how either,” said Henry sarcastically.

“I am so smart too,” said P-dog, “That should have help-”

“Hurry up!” shouted Henry.

“Ok,” groaned P-dog. ToPhu, CR, Hatena and Shah had made their way in. They walked through the banquet hall which was very large. They could hear shouting from outside.

“DOWN WITH PL,” could be heard.

“Cmon, the exit is this way,” said Henry to P-dog. Then the two groups saw each other.

There was silence…

“It’s been so long.” Hatena said to Henry

“Well, I guess I’m not the only comments ninja left,” said Henry.

“Woah,” gasped P-dog.

“What made you think that? Where is Fancy and NobodyElse?” said ToPhu.

Henry’s expression darkened.

“Pig Lover murdered them, and Fancy’s been knocked out.” he said sadly.

“Oh,” said ToPhu, not feeling remorse at all. “We better run now. This place is about to be stormed with protesters.

Chapter 12 | A Battle In Time== == The fallen comments ninjas were going through space and time, they had never seen it before.

“Cool,” said Neptune. Suddenly a dark aura could be felt.

“Hello everyone,” said the voice. “Missed me?”

“No, it's only been two minuites since we last saw you,” said ChemicalChaos, unamused. Then he realized what had just happened.

“Wait a second why are you here!” said ChemicalChaos.

“Hahaha,” laughed Miamo. “Spyroclub1 couldn't make it on time.”

“Noooo, Spyro,” said Neptune. “You will pay.” Miamo appeared.

“I have the power of darkness,” said Miamo. “No one beats me.” His eyes turned black.

“Hahaha,” said Miamo.

“What the,” said C_L.

“Finally,” said Miamo. “I am bonded with the creator.” They were still in this whirlpool. Neptune made his way across to fight.

“How sad,” said Miamo. “It will be a delight to crush your bones.”

Chapter 13 | A Prince’s Fight
Henry and the gang went out of the palace. The guards were overwhelmed.

“The SS Category is currently on dock, we can get out of here if we get there in time,” said ToPhu. They ran to the ship.

“Is this it,” questioned P-Dog “I call shotgun.” Suddenly a figure jumped in front of them.

“Where do you think you’re going,” he hissed.

“To that ship you kid,” yelled P-dog. It was ComicsCreatorz.

“I am the prince, don’t you know how to treat a prince,” asked ComicsCreatorz. “Now let me go in that ship.”

“No, I don’t think I will,” said Henry. Behind ComicsCreatorz was his guards following him.

“Finally they show up,” ComicsCreatorz said to himself. “FREEZE,” said the guards. “Put your hands on the ground.” ComicsCreators went over to them.

“NOW FIRE,” said ComicsCreatorz

Everyone dived behind the ship.

“Hopefully this can tank these shots,” said Tophu.

“Well this is made of steel which is not that good against the laser guns that they have,” said Hatena.

“Not now, Hatena!” urged ToPhu.

“BAM” ComicRater fell to the ground. ComicsCreatorz seemed unfazed. He did not care that his friend had been shot down.

“NOOO,” yelled P-Dog. “Now who will write those books. My great and intelligent brain needs something to be satisfied.”

“There won’t even be any good books if PL fully takes over.” Henry said impatiently “What are we going to do? We’re just going to be executed as war criminals at this rate!”

“I guess there is no choice left for me…” Shah sadly said, “Remember me,”

“Wai- What?” ToPhu shouted as Shah leapt out of the safe covor the ship had provided, and ran towards the open, dodging and knocking out as many soldiers as he can to provide a distraction. Shah was shot.

“Get him,” said CC as they ran over.

“His father would be proud,” said Hatena.

“Now’s our chance, Hatena, you carry ComicRater and we can start the engines!” Henry said, looking hopeful. They climbed on silently

ComicsCreatorz made his way to the SS Category.

Chapter 14 | Deja Vu== == Neptune and the gang fought Miamo.

“Give up,” said Miamo.

“Never,” replied Swayamplayz.

“Then die,” said Miamo.

“We are about to get to our destination,” said C_L. A bright light appeared and they were at the pathway.

“It's been so long,” said Chemical Chaos.

“No time,” said C_L, “If I’m correct we are now going to witness our own death, and remember, we mustn’t do anything that changes time, meaning that we must wait for whatever PL will do in the years until we have a chance to strike back.

“Oh no, it's happening again,” said Neptune. A bunch of gates started to appear around them.

“Tell them I’m sorry,” the admin groaned. “I just can't train them. Miamo, now Pig Lover.” A familiar cartoon character appeared.

The Comment Ninjas watched, while their past selves fade into pixels, soon, they’ll have to find home in the 50 years unknown to them.

Chapter 15 | Into Space== == As CC made his way to the SS Category, the capitol burnt.

He wondered where PL had gone. More of pig's army was coming to stop the protesters, but they were being overwhelmed.

The rest of the comments ninjas had escaped planet GC.

Far out in space, there was nothing but a ship.

“Good thing we made it out of there alive,” yelled ToPhu.

However there was a bad thing that happened.

“ComicRater doesn't have much time left,” said Henry.

“Uh guys,” said P-dog.

A gigantic ship was ahead.

In that ship lay Miamo who had finished conquering planets.

“Sir,” said a familiar user, “A ship has been detected.”

“Absorb it,” he yelled.

“Your chance is here, Miamo,” said a voice inside his head.

“I know master,” he said. “Soon planet GC will be mine. And this time I won't fail.”

Pig Lover was far away. He knew he couldn't save the capitol from burning. He would eventually lose if he tried.

He also felt that something had come back. Something from his past. And it had led him to this very spot.

“Would you like supper,” asked a voice.

Pig Lover hid.

It was the admin and superfoxtrot.

“I don't know, something feels strange,” said the admin.

“Yes I feel it too,” said SuperFoxTrot.

Pig Lover had dreamt of this for so long. He wanted to end his master.

He lunged at the two.

The admin dodged but superfoxtrot fell down.

“I see, my old apprentice has arrived,” said the admin.

“I have,” said PL.

“Looks like even administrative powers still can’t preserve your young age.” the admin sighed.

“Oh how much potential you had, but all you could tell me was that your apparent brother had more potential.”

“He is my brother, you cackling old fool” scolded PL, ready to strike again.

“If you destroy me, there will not be balance and this world will be chaos once again,” said the admin.

“Then chaos there will be,” laughed PL.

Chapter 16 | Battle on Ships== == “The ship ahead is pretty big,” said P-dog.

“It seems we are getting sucked in,” said ToPhu.

Meanwhile on Miamo's ship.

The familiar user took off his hood. It was CheezDoodle51.

“Sir,” said CheezDoodle51. “I’ll go check on the ship.”

CheezDoodle did what he said.

He walked across the ship and made his way there.

“What do we do?” asked P-dog.

Henry knew what they had to do.

“We fight.”

Chapter 17 | Master vs Apprentice == == PL and the admin fought.

“Give it up old man,” yelled PL.

“No,” replied the admin.

SuperFoxTrot was trying to get away. He had to alert the comments ninjas who had returned.

Neptune and the gang were sitting in their cave, sipping their tea.

They had been hiding for 50 years now on the farm. No one knew they had come back for such a long time.

SuperFoxTrot teleported into their base. He knew what everybody was doing.

“What the f-,” said C_L. “Language,” yelled Neptune. “This is a children's book, remember?”

“SuperFoxTrot?” asked Swayamplayz.

“Yes it is me,” said SuperFoxTrot. “I need your help.”

“Ok then,” said C_L

They all teleported back to the island.

Pig Lover and the Admin looked back. The Comments Ninjas were back.

Chapter 18: Unlikely Defeat
The others on the ship were fighting.

Miamo decided his time was here. There were some comments ninja’s on the ship.

“I can’t lose this fight. My dignity will be ruined!” said P-dog.

“Relax kid,” said Henry.

“Maybe we can try to fly the ship and that would destroy everything,” said ToPhu.

“Good Idea,” said Henry.

Miamo walked across the spaceship field.

Henry powered up the spaceship again.

Maimo was walking distance. His eyes pitch black.

“Something is wrong,” said the voice in Miamo’s mind.

“Be quiet,” Miamo said to himself. “I know what I can do.”

Henry put the ship in drive mode.

“3… 2…. 1…”

BOOM.

The ship went straight for Miamo knocking everything and everyone down. Everything was destroyed.

Miamo groaned.

Henry jumped out and so did the others.

He found a blaster on the floor.

Miamo was one the floor. His armour, destroyed.

“So long apprentice.”

Miamo’s breath stopped. His dream of taking over all of the galaxy had stopped too.

“Well that was anticlimactic,” said ComicRater.

“Wow you seem like you never got shot!” yelled ToPhu.

“Yeah I think the story writers got lazy and decided to not do a full out battle,” said Hatena.

“Why do you keep breaking the 4th wall?” asked Henry.

“It's a habit of mine,” replied Hatena.

“Well this ship is going to go down and we better get out of here.”

However, a snack food watched in the distance.

Chapter 19 | Return of the Ninjas
“We are back,” yelled Neptune.

Pig Lover growled.

“A growl?” said the admin. “You’re a pig not a dog.”

C_L rolled his eyes.

The Comments Ninja’s lunged at Pig Lover.

Neptune slashed his sword across PL’s chest but PL dodged. “Not today,” said PL.

Swayamplayz then did the same but again PL dodged quite easily.

“Pathetic,” said PL.

Then from behind C_L jump kicked PL to the ground.

“How about now,” yelled C_L as he kicked PL again.

Chemical Chaos ran at PL.

“QUICK QUESTION, WHEN WAS THE LAST TIME YOU BRUSHED YOUR TEETH, YOU SMELL LIKE PIGS.”

“That's because… he is a pig,” said the admin.

PigLover was exhausted. He already fought the admin, he couldn't take the comments ninjas too.

Then a portal appeared below his feet. SuperFoxTrot had summoned a portal to make PL disappear.

“SuperFoxTrot, why did you do that?” asked Neptune.

“You will see, bye,” said SuperFoxTrot.

Chapter 20 | End== == CheezDoodle walked.

The other heros were already gone and now he was still here.

The ship was going to crash and everyone in it would die.

Including him.

“CHEEZDOODLE.”

“What was that,” said CheezDoodle.

“It is I, TrapperClicker.”

“You mean… the first admin?” said CheezDoodle, shocked.

“Let me guide you CheezDoodle and you will become more powerful than anyone has ever been.”

CheezDoodle smiled.

“When do we start.”

Meanwhile the hero's outside of the ship had escaped.

They didn't know where they would be heading but what they did know, was that there was more to come….

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We hope you enjoyed this story, yes there will be a sequel. Authors Swasimcool Neptune7Ninja2Comics ToPhu Spyroclub1 BigNateBaseball GarfieldMN