Fanon:The comment Ninja's 4 (Adventure Series)

The only people that can edit this are Neptune (Creator) and the co-creators. swayamplayz, CheezDoodle51, Flipnote19.

Chapter 1: The Journey Stunted== == SW, Neptune and the others were on a journy. A journy of battle. The moderator ship they were on was heading to C_L and the others there. The Comment Ninja's will battle together. The ship they were on was comfortable. The wind was picking up. Neptune, CheezDoodle, and Swayamplayz were huddled in a close group, talking. "Come," SW said walking over to the them. "All three of you." They looked up from their conversation and followed SW to the bottom of the ship. Their footsteps echoed off the damp wooden steps into the dark and misty room. SW flicked the light and slammed the door. "Listen-" he began, but he was cut off my a loud collision. "What was that???!!!" Neptune yelled. "I dunno," Swayamplayz replied. "I will go check it out. You stay here in case something happened to me, or the other commenters." And with that, he was off. Five minutes passed, and still no return. The commotion stopped. "Let's check it out," SW said. The three sprinted up the stairs to find a mess. Something happened to the commenters.

Chapter 2: The Flag== == "What a mess," said SW solemnly. "We have to go after them," Neptune replied with enthusiasm. "But, we don't even know what happened to them," said CheezDoodle. "I have a hunch," said Neptune pointing to a ship in the distance. "It has a flag," CheezDoodle pointed out. "Good eye," SW replied. "Maybe that could help us. Let's get a closer look," he continued while steering the ship in the bad guy's direction. When they got close enough to make out the image, they stopped. "Is that...?" Neptune was at a loss for words. "N-n-n-NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" CheezDoodle's scream echoed out into the great, open sea.

Chapter 3: The New Dark Commenter== == BN91 was still struggling as a robot with red, laser eyes threw him in a cage. He hit hard. Then rubbing his head, memories of earlier torchering connected with him. The feeling of dark nothingness settled on him, the place smelled of mildew, and he lost all hope. Then hearing the screams of Yoda getting torchered enraged him. This anger strengthened him. He punched the cage several times, before kicking it open. He started to run in the direction of the screaming. Suddenly a hand grabbed his neck and he choked. He was losing air. Struggling once again, he tried to take the hands off him. The last thing he heard before he blacked out, was a deep, dark, raspy voice say to him in his ear, "I am the new Dark commenter. Fear me!"

Chapter 4: Neptune's Battle== == There it was, a picture of CD on the flag, accepted it was a, "Dark version of me," CheezDoodle said, depressed. "Sorry, man," Neptune replied sympathetically. "But now is not the time to mope, because we have some butt to kick," SW finished "Now, down to the sub. We will use the element of surprise." They went back down the dingy stairs to a big iron door. After typing the code, SW and the others walked into the room holding the sub. After climbing in, SW said, "You know the drill." and with that, they took off.

Upon sneaking onto the ship, SW was explaining a strategic plan that took your full attention to complete it, but Neptune was not listening. He was fully focused on raiding the ship, getting his friends, and returning to their journey. SW attached the sub to the boat's bottom and listened. Then he heard a clack. The submarine's top opened. Neptune was holding the driller. "Neptune, NO," SW yelled. But it was too late, NPT drilled a hole through the boat and climbed in. A lot of commotion followed. Then it stopped when Neptune screamed.

Chapter 5: The Next in Line== == Spyroclub was next. He had just finished watching Yoda get torchered. He was angry. Ready to stop this, but he knew he was powerless to do such a thing. He was ready to feel the pain of the horrible stuff these robots were programed to do. When he was going to get taken out of his cage, a commenter came walking in. If he could not hear the echo of his shoes, Spyroclub thought he might not be able to determine that. Then, following the dark commenter, two robots came in, carrying..."Neptune!" Spyroclub thought. "No!" "Put him in there," The commander's voice was dark and scary. "I think you forgot, i'm a ninja...." Neptune said, while kicking his jaw. Neptune looked up at the celing just to see Lightning flash.

Chapter 6: The Big Reveal== == SW and CheezDoodle barged in. You could hear the clanking as the metal bots went down. But, no matter how many bots got defeated, it seemed like for every dead bot, there was 2 more. Hearing all the commotion, the mysterious commenter came out. The bots saw him and scurried. He was black with white markings. He was glowing grey, and then he said, "Looks like my double finally came," "Leave him alone," SW yelled, defending CheezDoodle. "I'm fine." said CD calmly. "We are here for our friends," SW said. "In the name of the mods, let them go or I will ban you!" "How about I ban YOU," The commenter replied throwing SW against a wall. CheezDoodle was mad, but he was not worried about SW, his words flickered in the back of his head. Then it was the second comment that strengthened him, "If I go, you are our only hope. Do not let evil win." The commenter's words cut into his thinking, "That is Stone_Doodle for you," He said triumphantly. "Now your next," He said directing it to CheezDoodle. "You will never know what is coming!" "Yes I will," CD yelled. "CUZ, NO ONE KNOWS ME BETTER THAN ME!!!!!"

Chapter 7: CheezDoodle's Fight== == CheezDoodle dodged the fist punch, then the second. He could not lose, but then the army of bots snuck up behind him. But it was too late, he was caught. He had failed. Evil would win. The bots held him up for the final blow. Stone_Doodle punched him square in the stomach, and he went flying overboard. "How did you let him go, you useless bots," Stone_Doodle yelled. "Get him!!!" The bots went flying into the ocean. That is when Stone_Doodle remembered they could not go in water. But is was too late. The bots fizzled out when they hit the water. Stone_Doodle ran to steer the boat out of CD's direction, but just as he was doing that, CheezDoodle climbed over the edge of the boat. "Running away from me?" He said. Stone_Doodle charged, but then something unexpected happened. CD stood there. Nonetheless, the Stone ran at him. When Stone_Doodle was in the air falling on CheezDoodle, he did a flip and kicked the dark doodle overboard. He ran to the control center and chased the imposter to land. "This is not the last of me!!!" He yelled, and ran off.

Chapter 8: The Dungeon== == CD ran to the dungeon. It was dark and still. There was a flash. "Huh," CheezDoodle said. "What was that," he wondered. "It must be me imaging things." He continued. Then he heard rattling. He ran to the sound.

Chapter 9: BN91== == BN91 woke up to a flash of light. "What was that?" He wondered. Nothing happened....

Chapter 10: Yoda== == "Bigger!" CD exclaimed. "CheezDoodle!" He replied. "You defeated him!" "Yeah!" CheezDoodle told him everything. "I'm glad SW is safe," BN replied. "Where are the others?" CheezDoodle asked. BN did not have to answer, Yoda was laying on the ground.

Chapter 11: Lighting_Neptune== == "Yoda!" the two simultaneously exclaimed. "W-what?" yoda said weakly. "He needs to be treated immediately," BN said. "I will take him to our ship, you free the others. Now go!" The two departered. CheezDoodle easily found Spyroclub. He followed the yelling for help. After unlocking the cage, CD asked, "Where is Neptune," Spyroclub pointed, his hand shaking, at Neptune fighting a yellow.....lightning bolt? he did not finish. Spyroclub was on the ground. CheezDoodle looked around. Then at the end of the boat was..."Neptune...?" He was black and glowing yellow. Spyroclub weakly got up and groggily said, "L-lighning Neptune." Then he fell back down. "I never should have trusted you.." Neptune angirly spoke. BN ran back into the ship. "I will help you carry them." BN said. "THE SHIP IS SINKING!!!!!" "Huh?" NPT said, looking back at CD, only to get zapped. "Run!' CD said. "The ship is sinking!" The three ran, CheezDoodle carrying Spyroclub. Then they jumped. It seemed as they were going in slow motion. Then CheezDoodle fell. He plummeted into the great blue sea.

Chapter 12: Going on== == "Noooooo!" Cried Neptune and BN. Yoda woke up. "What's going on?" He asked. Just then, Spyroclub came out of the water holding CheezDoodle. The three cheered. CheezDoodle said weakly, "W-what happened?" Then he fell back asleep. The three put him in a bed and an hour later he woke up. Spyroclub was done telling the others about Lighting_Neptune and Stone_Doodle. After telling CD how Stone_Doodle was created, he told him about LN. "Th-they took him," He began. "Neptune tried to fight of the lightning bolt, but thats when I relized they some how knew each other." "The two will be back, but now we must continue our journey." Everyone agreed, and they set sailed.

Chapter 13: Mr. Epic's trials== == Mr.Epic and Chad sat on a bench. Nothng was happening back at the QQ base. "I'm bored." Mr.Epic spoke. "Yeah." said Chad. Thats when Mr. Epic got an idea....

Chapter 14: The faker four== == Neptune and the others were going on their journy to beat the pollers, when suddenly a ship started firing at them. "Oh come on, we have already had enough action for a year!" CD complained. "Wait, there waving a peace flag....." Neptune noticed. Suddenly four users emerged from the ship near the comment ninja's. The four users climed onto Neptune's ship. "I'm Gracie." "Leader of the Faker Four." A user said. Gracie pointed to the users behind her. "This is Arcia Jade, this is just your averege Gocomics commenter or JYAGC for short." Gracie continued. "Ad this is Jovvie." "Hi." Jovvie spoke. "We have come to make peace and be a part of the QQ'ers." Gracie happily said. "Not me." Arcia Jade said. "No way." Neptune said, "Am I letting AJ on here." Arcia Jade gave Neptune a hard glance. "DONT CALL ME AJ YOU-" Arcia Jade stopped herself. "I'm out." she said. Arcia Jade teleported to the pollers base. Neptune got an alert on his watch. "theres an emergrency at the QQ base." Neptune said. "Plus we only need 5 users on this quest." Neptune continued, "So for the quest, Neptune, Gracie, CD, Yoda, and Swayamplayz." Neptune said. Everyone else teleported to the QQ base. The wind started to pick up again.