Fanon:The Commenters' exploit of combat - 1

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During poll war 2, two sides fought; The pollers and the Anti-Pollers. (This is not based off the Joe stories.) Alex"Cluch"Carry106 was the commander. During the wars, he got sucked into a blackhole created by the forces of evil and was never too be seen again. Seeing that his right-hand man vanished, Marysayz, the genral, ordered the pollers to be replaced by droids because the black hole was their fault. . After turning on Martysayz, because they found themselves much stronger than him, the droids chased him, helping the anti-pollers wether they liked it or not. When all hope seemed lost for Martysayz, he jumped into a volcano. The battle raged on, and without Marty, the pollers where no match for the antis. Soon enough the battle ended and all was peacfull once again...

Chapter one: Kaboom!
One fine day, CheezDoodle, Neptune, and Swayamplays, were walking to BiggerNate's (BN) house. "Let's see if he wants to play soccer with us," says Neptune. Just then, they heard an explosion coming from BN' direction. "What was THAT???!!!" Swayam yelled. The three ran to BN's house to investigate. "WE WILL SAVE YOU!!!" Swayam yelled, as he kicked the door to BN's house off it's hinges. "We're fine," said Bigger. "You owe me a new door." "But, what made that loud noise?" Swayam's voice trailed off. "I am showing Flipnote, here, the solution we put in our exploding bullets that messes with the poll-droid's motherboard," BN answered. "Mother-boring," CheezDoodle said, rolling his eyes. "Yeah," Swayam said. "Why don't you relax? The poll wars just ended a couple months ago. Say goodbye to work and hello to vacation!!!" "This is serious, Swayamplays," said Flipnote. "Any of the pollers could be back." Then he dropped the bomb. "Even Martysayz." "M-Martysayz...?" The three studdered. "Yes," said BN. "The radar has been showing recent poller activity the last few days." "Lemme see!" said Swayam. "Ha! This is garbage! It said there is poller activity underneath us." BN sighed. "Maybe you are right," he said. "Maybe this is just garbage..." "But, we are so close to discovering a new solution, that we can't stop now," Flipnote finished. This seemed to lift BN's spirits. "Yeah! So go play soccer without us, we have some work to finish." And with that, the two got back to work.

Chapter two: Work, work, and no play
On their way to the field, the 3 see Spyroclub running on the track. "Hey, Spyroclub," Swayam yelled. "Come join us for soccer! Two on two! You can be on my team!" "He doesn't want to be on your team," Cheezdoodle said. "You suck!" "Hey, shut-up scrub!" Neptune laughed as the two argued. "So... Was that a yes or a no on playing?" asked Swayam. "Sorry, dude," Spyroclub answered. "I have to train. You never know when the pollers will attack next." "But it's vacation!" "No, man. Gotta beat my high score." And then Spyroclub ran off. "Aw, man," Neptune shouted. "Everyone is training." "This is wrong!" Swayam protested. "IT'S VACATION!!!" "Three strikes and your out," said Cheezdoodle pointing to Yoda. "If he is training, I guess so should we." They walked over to Yoda. "Hi g-" "SAY NO MORE!" Swayam yelled. "I have seen enough!" Yoda was lifting wieghts. Swayam stomped off. "Wait!" But Neptune's voice was muffled by a lound sound.

Chapter three: A new kind of Boom
KA-BOOM!!! "What was that?" Cried yoda. "Oh, just BN's and Flipnote's expeirementing," CheezDoodle said. "I'm sure their fine." "Well, go find out to make sure," Yoda replied. "We will," said CheezDoodle, and he rounded the others up. "And if there is any trouble, before you do something, call us!" Yoda called. As they walked, the three talked about the radar. "You know what is weird?" said Neptune. "What?" the other two say. "Well, BN is pretty good at tech and expereiments, right?" "Riiiight..." "Well, his tech never fails," "Uh, huh..." said Swayam, wanting NPT to get to the point. "So, what I am saying is, well..." "WELL WHAT ALREADY???" Swayam was yelling now. "WhatifMartysayzisstillaliveandhasahidoutandhasbeenhearingeverythingwesayinBN'slab?" "Whoa, whoa, whoa," CheezDoodle said. "Calm down. The hideout inside the volcano theory is just another myth. You will see, everything is f-" The three looked around. "ine," he finished.

Chapter four: Top warriors?
"Wow!" Neptune said. "This is..." he did not know what to say. "Forget about the house," said Swayam. "Where is BN and Flipnote?" They looked every were and could not find them. They shouted thier names, but no answer. "I'm going in," said Swayam. "Wait!" said CheezDoodle. "Remember what Yoda said?" Yoda's words flashed in Swayamplays's mind. "And if there is any trouble, before you do something, call us!". "Yoda, shmoda," he said. We are the top warriors, we can handle a little investigation." "If you put it that way," Cheezdoodle said. "Then let's do it!" They went in. "Look footprints!" Neptune said. "L-look," Swayamplays said. He was pointing to an outline of a commenter. They could feel the presents of evil. Black and purple orbs were floating and swirling around him. His red eyes sliced through the dark like a laser. "RUN!" CheezDoodle yelled. They heard an evil laugh, then a net swooped them up, thick, green fog was clouding the place, and then, before they could yell "HELP!", everything went black.

Chapter five: The rope
"It's been a while since those three left," Yoda thought. "Are they alright? Or are they getting into trouble, like those guys always do? I will ask Spyroclub to go with me to find them." Yoda went to get Spyroclub, meanwhile...

Neptune woke up to the sound of bubbling. It was hot, very hot. "Were am I? How did I get here? How come I am in this cage???" "Your questions will be answered in a matter of time," a familiar voice said. Neptune spun around. "M-mar-MARYSAYZ???!!!" Neptune exclaimed. "I thought you were dead!" "Hmm," He answered. "Then you were wrong. But good news! You get to watch the death of your friend! BwaH haW HAW!" "BiggerNate! NO!" BN was tied on a rope above the lava. "Now," Marty began. "Tell me how to reverse the formula that messes with my BOTS." "I will never tell you!" BN exclaimed. "Fine, we will play the hard way." said marty. "Tell me or you are going in the lava. Then your little friend, Dipdope-" "It's FLIPNOTE!!!" BN yelled. "Fine, Flipnote," he continued. "Well, he will be next." "No! Flipnote!" Flipnote replied, "Don't do it!" "Never!" BN cried! Then, martysayz lit the rope.

Chaper six: the crew
Spyroclub and Yoda were running to BN's house when they saw into Lordnour. "C'mon," Spyro said to Lordnour. "We need you." "Yeah," yoda added. "CD51, NNC, and swayam went missing when they investigated the explosion at BN's house." "Well, we gotta find them," said Lordnour, and they took off. When they arrived at the house, Yoda said, "This is more than a little puff. This is the work of a poller." Lordnour and Spyroclub exchanged worried glances. "Look!" Spyroclub exclaimed. "Footprints." "And they lead to..." Lordnour finished, "A hole." The hole was pitch black. It looked to go on forever. "Let's grab this rope, these lasers, and lets grab... this!" Yoda said pulling up an object. "Let's rescue some commenters!"

Chapter seven: The rescue
BN's rope was burning quickly. Commenters were yelling and screaming in horror at this sight. It was time for BN to say goodbye, when suddenly, three commenters came falling down. "Yoda! Spyroclub! Lordnour! You came!" Neptune yelled. Two were fighting off droids and one was "Flying?" Marty said. "How could that be?" Yoda flew to BN, as he was just about to fall, and swooped him up. "Uh, we're kinda cornered..." said Spyroclub. Yoda grabbed them and said, "We will come back for the others later." and then, they flew off. "Curses!" Martysayz said. "Well at least I still have you guys..." He said, eyeing the four. Neptune squirmed. "Take them to the dungeon!" Martysayz barked to the droids. "All we need is a plan..."

Chapter eight: Brainstorming
"All we need is a plan," Yoda said. "Something that could take them down." "Well, that super-jetpack thing you grabbed was very efficient." Lordnour commented. "Ah!" BN said. "That's what you used! One of my oldest inventions, The jetpack 2000! I have to think of a better name. I never tested it. That was risky..." "Well, we saved you," Yoda said. "That is all that matters." "If there is another poll war," Spyroclub stated. "Then we better build a hideout to do business in, without getting ambushed." "Great idea," BN said. "But I am worried about the four that are stuck. Especially Flipnote." "Don't worry," Yoda said. "We will think of something. But, now we have to build a fort!"

Chapter 9: Neptune's escape
Marty_Sayz was standing on a chair. He was still trying to figure out how Yoda flew, when a rustling noice broke loose. Marty_Sayz looked behind him. Neptune was gone. "How-" Marty_Sayz started, then he noticed a note lying on the floor. "What is this?" Marty_Sayz said to himself. He picked up the note. It read: '''I Saved Neptune. I couldn't save the others, I had no time to. I am in the Quick Questions side. You will never reach us now. - Nate Clone.''' Nate clone was a famous Quick Questions fighter. That didn't matter now. Neptune's escape now mattered much more.

Chapter 10: QQ base
"Wow" said Neptune. "I havent seen this thing in years." The planning table was still in tact. Everything was.