The Commenters in a Haunted House

THE COMMENTERS IN A HAUNTED HOUSE

By ComicRater

Featuring:

ComicRater, Neptune7Ninja2Comics, Swasimcool, GiantNate91, BiggerNate91, Henry Hudson, Spyroclub, 7o'clock, BigNateBaseball, PigLoverGoComics, MintCrepe, ItsYaBoiP-Dog, LordNour, ComicCreatorz, ChemicalChaos, Positive Elixr Trade, GoldenGlory4life, Yoda, ToPhu51, CrossDoggo, Spacepuppy, Frailpancake, and SpokeyTV

(Note: Sorry if you don't have many lines, you can only have so many lines for 23 people!)

ComicRater: Are we ever going to explore that haunted house?

LordNour: No way.

BigNateBaseball: Why would we even do that?

GiantNate91: Maybe it could be interesting!

Spyroclub: Interesting for THE MURDERER.

ComicRater: I might go in… It is Halloween, after all.

GoldenGlory4life: Your really going to go in?

Henry Hudson: Um, It’s “You’re”, not “Your”. Get you grammar right.

Swasimcool: “You’re” really annoying me.

(ComicRater walks inside)

Yoda: Well, he’s dead.

ItsYaBoiP-Dog: We can’t just leave him in there!

Neptune7Ninja2Comics: P-Dog is right. We have to go after him.

MintCrepe: …fine. But I’m going to kill him after this.

(They all walk inside)

GiantNate91: ComicRater, you better not get us killed.

Positive Elixr Trade: Good luck with that.

BiggerNate91: What is this haunted house, anyway?

PigLoverGoComics: Apparently, it’s a haunted house. Not many people come out alive.

BiggerNate91: I’m aware it’s a haunted house, pinhead.

Frailpancake: Stop fighting, that will make it worse.

ToPhu51: I don’t wanna die here. We should leave.

Spacepuppy: Sorry ComicRater, but I agree with ToPhu. We should leave.

(The door locks behind them)

ChemicalChaos: Great. Now we’re stuck in here!

7o’clock: This is all your fault, ComicRater!

ComicRater: Me? All I did was wanna explore!

(Everyone starts to argue)

SpokeyTV: Guys! GUYS!

(SpokeyTV blows a whistle, everyone goes silent)

SpokeyTV: We are not going to get out if you guys kill eachother! Now, let’s look around.

BigNateBaseball: There seems to be 2 halls. The dark room, and the scary noise room.

LordNour: I say we go down the scary noise hall.

ItsYaBoiP-Dog: No! We should go down the dark path!

Henry Hudson: I have a way we can sort this.

ComicRater: What do you mean?

Henry Hudson: People with A-L names, meaning BiggerNate91, BigNateBaseball, ChemicalChaos, ComicCreatorz, ComicRater, CrossDoggo, Frailpancake, GiantNate91, GoldenGlory4life, me, ItsYaBoiP-Dog, and LordNour can go down the dark hallway. People with M-Z names, meaning MintCrepe, Neptune7Ninja2Comics, PigLoverGoComics, Positive Elixr Trade, Spacepuppy, SpokeyTV, Spyroclub, Swasimcool, ToPhu51, and Yoda can go down the scary noise hallway.

7o’clock: What about me?

Yoda: You can come with us.

MintCrepe: Well, that seems fair…

Spyroclub: It’s good enough. Now lets go. We don’t know how much time we have, so we gotta go quick.

GoldenGlory4life: See you on the other side!

ChemicalChaos: I hope…

(And they all started down their hallways)

PART 2 COMING SOON!!