Community Activity:Improve the story!

Ok guys, I'm making a new activity where I wirte a paragraph of a story, and anyone can add on. Just improve the story.

Chapter 1
It was a dark and stormy night at the local burger king. P-dog drank his Milkshake. As he savored the flavors in his MilkShake,

Henry came up behind him and put his hand on P-dogs shoulder."

You are very scary." P-Dog yelled.

"It'll be ok, man" said Henry.

"Yeah, I guess I overeacted. thanks dude." P-dog was suffering the loss of one of his friends, M-frog, who died in a bike accident. His school mourned. It was about a week ago, and he had a basketbal tournament this weekend, and his sorrow might mess him up.

"Try to cheer up," GG said.

"Sure," P-dog replied.

They walked out of burger king.

”Wait is that a killer clown?” Said P-Dog.

"Yup" GG said. "Wait, no, it's just a normal clown,"

The clown throws a red balloon at Pdog.

"AHHHH” said P-dog.

P-dog destroyed the balloon and they turned on the tv and saw that the vikings had gotten smoked by the seahawks.

"Augh!!" P-dog cried out. "BNB will never let us hear the end of this!"

"Seahawks won! HAHA!" yelled BNB walking up to them.

Then p-dog smashes the tv on BNBs head.” bnb passes out 10 minutes later

"hey me and gg joined your basketball team!" said bnb happily

”Um he must be going crazy“ said GG4L.

"No I’m ok!" said bnb. "We need to help p-dog in his basketball tournament."

"BRO WHAT IS UP!" Neptune yelled, driving up in a blue lambo with the roof off.

. "Hey Neptune." gg4l said.

Neptune gave them pizza and sodas, and the pizza had mushrooms, and pinapples. "Good toppings on the pizza." Neptune added.

"Wow thanks Neptune!" said bnb. He then proceeds to throw his pizza into the trash.

"Here want cheese pizza?" Neptune hands bnb a cheese pizza with no toppings.

"Nah I'm good, I don't really have much of an appetite, with p-dog smashing a tv on me and all." bnb says rubbing his head from where p-dog hit him over the head.

"Oh cool." Neptune said, eating a piece of little cearses crazy bread. "Want a ride?'

"Sure!" bnb said looking at the blue lambo. " I've never been in a lambo before!"

"I know its nice." Neptune said.

Bnb hopped in the back. "Where are we heading too?" bnb asked. suddenly gg4l screams Joe mama and explodes. "Woah did you see that Neptune?" asked bnb incredulously. "

GG4l just exploded!" Suddenly. CrossDoggo feel out of the sky! ”WOOOOOAAAAHHH!! CrossDoggo yelled.

”I’ll catch you!” Neptune yelled. ”He drove the car and caught CrossDoggo.

”Why where you falling out of the sky?” Everyone asked.

"Cause I felt like it" Cross said

"youd th9ink with a 9 son." Neptune yelled. suddenly a rock monster came out of the ground and screamed. the earth shook.

"This earth is going to destroy my car!" Neptune said. Fortunitly, that didnt happen

. bnb: Did you guys hear that?

'''All of a sudden, Henry Hudson came out of nowhere with a dagger in his throat. He muttered, "Cheezdooooodle is com-" and then died'''

. "Ah Fu-" "Someone! Call 911!" P-dog cut cross off. BOO

Hii it’s me said gg4l with bad grammer

Suddenly, ComicComet spawned in the sky.

ComicComet: I have come to show you the wisdom of melon.

”Melons suck!” exclaimed GG4L

"u suck" said ppdog

Ak-Elfs has 74 ak-47 in his hand and shares them yay!

Ak says hi

Obi-Wan walks through a portal with a full infinity gauntlet
Now reality can be whatever we want.

Obi-Wan falls to his knees his body can't handle the power he snaps his fingers putting everyone into a new Minecraft world
"Aee23 joins the game"

Everyone freaks out. He found a 7th Infinity Stone! The Wiki Stone! Aee23 makes a weird snapping emote and they all teleport into Community Central.

Then everyone is sad since half of the wikiverse has been ended so they all make a time machine and P-dog Ak Elfs go to vomier and Bg Rafy and username go to get the red stone while 0 avatar and Chase go to get the green stone and

= BAM! = Out of nowhere, the most handsome thing on Earth comes out of nowhere. Zomboss.

"ZOMBOSS!" The pathetic humans yelled pathetically. "Oh save us!"

"BAH" Zomboss yelled majestically. Then he left.

"That was it?" The humans said.

The humans turned back. Sighing and returning to their caves.

Then Aether destroys the universe with his godlike abilities. Also he haccs the system to get seven quadrillion edits, or 6.9 quadrillionedits more than and the helpless people who still survived (idk how) are now running for their lives

 SUDDENLY, IC429 appears,  and somehow finds Zomboss and challenges him to a duel. They each pick up legos and desperately try to get them other the other persons foot. Ultimately, the match a was a draw, because they both got distracted from Pop Tarts and Pop smarts. BUT WAIT! HE HAS TO SAVE THE UNIVERSE! Well, silly me. Anyways, he tries to perform surgery to the universe, but can’t because the Universe is just too darn big! "Who will save the universe now?" He cried. But then he realized that even if the universe can’t be saved, at least I tied in a duel to the great ZOMBOSS. BUT THEN…

Everyone dies and this stupid story no one cares about ends. The End. (jk). What actually happens is that IC429 is celebrating drawing with Zomboss, when a monster with one leg and 3 eyes appears. It says, "I am Smug Nate, run away in fear!".

Suddenly, a 12-foot longsword came flying out of nowhere and struck Smug Nate on the chest. Blood poured out like it had no end, and Smug Nate's leg began to crumble. He took one last gasp and muttered, "Cruel world... Never wanted to be part of it anyways..." and then closed his three eyes for the last time.

Who threw the sword? Why, it's none other than Quincy! He's decided to stop wishing everyone a happy day on gocomics and decided to fight for justice. His mission: Rescue everyone from the cruel reign of Zomboss. Turns out Smug Nate was one of Zomboss's servants (against his will, mind.).

Quincy picks up his sword and walks away triumphiantly, however he forgets to look backwards and before he knew it Aether killed him in one blow, but then Toasted shot Aether in the back and Aether started to lose conciousness as blood ejected out of his body. However, before he died, he swiftly threw his harpoon at Toasted, and they both die. Quincy's grave starts to rise. Devil-Quincy had awoken.

* Universe dying sounds*

THE END