Thread:BiggerNate91/@comment-34008724-20190811012249/@comment-32827342-20190811040418

It's amazing, my dude. Thoughts:

I think you're good to go for publishing!
 * I don't think we really need the prologue of everyone about to tell their stories. We already have that gimmick in Stories of the Great War.
 * I thought Nicnack was a town on Planet GC, but we can change that.
 * I'm a sage on "Skallion Patrol?" Nice.