Neptune and the destruction sword (A comment Ninja's orgin story)

Neptune and the destruction sword: Comment Ninja's orgin story
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(Thanks for a great storytelling journey!)

By: Neptune_Ninja_Comics, Swayamplayz, and Spyroclub1

Please enjoy this took 5 months.

   

= Chapter 1: Fallen hero =    

It was 6:55 am

   

Neptune lay down on the brown-ish green grass, without a care in the world.

   

The wind blew gently as the earliest birds went out to find food, and the red foxes leaped in the forests.

   

The small town at the edge of the world.

   

Neptune relaxed, and thought back to his adventurous past, as he grabbed his soda and took a small sip.

   

Then, Neptune started to think about the begining.

   

It started on the very edge of the world.

   

= Chapter 2: lost warror =    

The setlle breeze was simply a warning the very day it started.

   

Neptune was resting on a nearby rock, deep in the forest.

   

The planet NeptuneXZ7 was a good planet, even when it got stormy, which it often did.

   

Neptune was waiting in a storm at the very moment the breeze started to change into a ferocious wind, faster than the strongest hurricane earth has ever witnessed.

   

The brown leaves on the trees from late summer flew across the sky.

   

Neptune didn’t mind the wind, as he was used to winds getting this high, but what happened next changed it all.

   

Soilders started to run into the forrest, and started to shoot at Neptune.

   

Neptune ducked, then started to run away from the soilders.

   

“Is that him?” A soilder asked.

   

“They said the one with the blue hair, and dark blue tee-shirt.” Another soilder answered, while touching his intercom.

   

“Yes, it was, now move it!” A voice rang from the soilders intercom.

   

The voice belonged to the one known as Miamo.

Chapter 3: Attack on the village
==     == Meanwhile, a user known as M_K was on the planet moonshadeK5.

   

“What is that black cloud over there?” M_K asked his friend slainsword.

   

“I don’t know.” Slainsword answered.

   

They were about to find out.

   

Neptune sped out of the woods, leaves falling out of the trees on the forest ground.

   

“Over here!” a voice shouted.

   

Neptune looked over to see his friend, “Nitrotune” getting an escape pod ready.

   

“Hurry!” Nitro shouted.

   

Neptune ran as fast as he could, his legs aching from speed.

   

He reached the escape pod, throwing himself inside.

   

Nitro quickly jumped inside, then activated the space pod.

   

The escape pod went srtaight up, then flew into the galaxy.

   

Neptune always loved the galaxy.

   

But he didn’t get to enjoy it this time.

   

The escape pod suddenly stopped when they were on flying by the planet “Virtual world”.

   

“OVERHEATING” the escape pod’s command screen flashed with those very words.

   

“AHHHHHHHH!” Nitro screamed.

   

Neptune was too shocked to scream, as he noticed they were plunging into an ocean, that showed no sign of land, anywhere.

   

Neptune looked to his right, and there was the perfect button.

   

“Eject”

   

Nitro suddenly was overcome with panic.

   

“NO!” he screamed, throwing himself at Neptune.

   

Neptune dodged. “What are you doing?”

   

“AHHHHHHGGGG!” Nitro screamed, as he was tossed into the escape pod’s wall.

   

They had hit the water.

   

Nitro was barely able to stand, so he grabbed a level to pull himself up.

   

The levels handle fell, off, and sliced Nitro’s arm.

   

“I WILL NEVER FALL INTO THE DEPTHS OF THE SEA!” Nitro shouted.

   

Neptune pressed “eject”.

   

Unfortunitly, Nitro was too fast for him, and he grabbed on to Neptune leg as they were shot out into the sea.

   

The cold water freezed Neptune, shocking his whole body with pain and agony. His left leg was being pulled by Nitro, and they both went above water.

   

“NEVER GIVE UP THE FIGHT!” Nitro shouted.

   

Neptune spat water out of his mouth. Nitro’s arm was bleeding everywhere, and that was going to attract sharks.

   

Neptune was pulled under by Nitro, and in a moment of despiration, Neptune kicked Nitro into the depths of the freezing cold sea.

   

Nitro had drowned.

   

Neptune swam to the surface, and gasped for air.

   

The cold water stung his lunges, and he was beyond cold.

   

“Help!” Neptun shouted.

   

No answer.

   

The waves grew tall, roaring their height agaisn’t Neptune.

   

“Help!”

   

Nothing.

As the night went on, Neptune was tossed and thrown around by the choppy water, and it made for a long night.

   

Neptune, however, survived.

   

The clear cyrstal morning came faster than the sun could shine its brightness on the world.

   

Neptune could see land in the faint distance.

   

Neptune’s bone’s were aching and he could barely paddle a few feet, and that especially wasn’t good with how far he had to go to reach the island. So he took up all the strength he had and went on his way, struggling not to drown against the harsh waters.

   

Neptune only had one thought: get to land.

   

He froze as he saw a flash of grey upon the water. Suddenly he realized he was surrounded by a pack of sharks. Neptune panicked and started to drown, though with the urge to survive he ventured onwards, careful to avoid any sharks coming his way.

   

But something told Neptune those weren’t just ordinary sharks.

   

He was right.

   

Chapter 4: Endless current

   

M_K sat on the metal seat, punching in numbers faster than any average human could.

   

M_K braced for impact, as the ship lurched forward.

   

Slainsword laughed.

   

“Come on, fly better than that.” he joked.

   

M_K shot Slainsword a deadly look and continued foward.

   

Slainsword opened a pack of chips, and started to eat them, when the ship lurched into overdrive.

   

Chips went flying everywhere and one of them got stuck in the engine, making the ship fall uncontrollably as M_K and Slainsword held on for life.

   

M_K gasped, “I didn’t mean to hit overdrive!”

   

Slainsword was too scared to joke about that one.

   

M_K went to the back to find the damage. He found that the engine was stuck, and chips were caught in it, preventing it from running.

   

“Slainsword! Hand me the autofixer! Quick!”

   

Slainsword climbed up the ship into the cabinet. He grabbed the autofixer, but he couldn’t get to M_K before the ship rocketed down into the deap sea.

   

The same deep sea as Neptune.

Chapter 5: The deep sea
   

M_K interupted him by shouting “HELP!”

   

Suddenly the hellicopter bolted towards M_K, then veered to the right and crashed into the trees, almost taking off M_K’s head.

   

“Woah there.” Neptune loudly said.

   

“Sorry homie.” rang a voice from the helicopter.

   

“Still trying to work out the kinks to this thing. Anyone wanna hop in? I got some candy here, lets see. A few juniour mints, half a bag of skittles, a snickers, ah whatever. I’ll give you a free lift for you!”

   

M_K glanced at Neptune. No one moved.

M_K groaned and got up, his entire body aching from the impact.

   

“What the- uhh… Slainsword? Where are we?”

   

All M_K could see in the distance was blue raging water, threatening to completely submerge the ship.

   

“Slainsword?”

   

M_K ran to the top to see Slainsword unconscious on the floor.

   

“Slainsword, oh no no no. Please don’t be-”

   

Suddenly Slainsword groaned and got up, looked out the window to see nothing but sea, and collapsed back down into M_K’s arm’s.

   

“Don’t worry buddy, I got you. I always do.”

   

Slainsword gave M_K a faint smile.

   

But there was a bigger problem.

   

Water was leaking into the ship, and the water was ice cold.

   

M_K looked down to see water floating in and dropped Slainsword accidentally.

   

Slainsword sat up.

   

“Well, thanks.” he faintly said.

   

“Slainsword, can you get back up?” M_K asked.

   

“Of course I can,” he said. “I always do.”

   

M_K rolled his eyes, but smiled.

   

He started to stand up then collapsed back to the ground, groaning again.

   

“We gotta get you to a hospital, but right now we have a bigger problem. We need to find land before we sink. Now.”

   

Slainsword stood up struggily, holding the railing as he did so, and pushed the ships emergency exit open. M_K and Slainsword swam out into the sea, just to see someone else nearby.

   

M_K activated the emergency underwater jetpack, grabbed the other person, and flew to land.

   

Slainsword smiled back at him. “I’m fine M_K, really. I don’t need to go to a hospital.” Suddenly he fell spiraling to the ground, M_K rushed after him, and caught him. Slainsword gave him a thumbs up. “See? Totally fine.”

   

Neptune lay on land, barely alive. Right when he got there, his bones felt like they were on fire and his entire body screamed for him to sleep, but he knew that sleeping on a completely mysterious island with nothing he knew about it was a very, very bad idea.

   

M_K met up with Neptune.

   

“Who are you?” he asked.

Neptune barely sat up.

   

“My name is Neptun--” Neptune went un-consions.

   

Slainsword layed on a tree stump.

   

“Slainsword, if you go un-consious, I swear-” but M_K didn’t get to finish. Slainsword went right next to Neptune and fell asleep. M_K rolled his eyes and went venturing on the island on his own, since he was the only one fit enough to do it.

   

M_K was relived that no one was around to see him try to climb up a tree to get coconuts. It was embarrassing. “But you have to do what you have to do.” M_K told himself.

   

The sun was going down and M_K decided to build a shelter for the night, when he heard a growling sound nearby. M_K froze.

   

The sound stopped.

   

M_K ran back to Neptune and Slainsword, and didn’t even look back once.

   

There was something out there.

   

That something was not an all you can eat buffett, but M_K only wished it was.

   

“Guys! Something is out there, we’re not alone!” M_K frantically told them.

   

“5 more minutes…” Slainsword mumbled. M_K sighed, it was hopeless.

   

Neptune sat up suddenly.

   

“Wait, what.” he implored.

   

“Something is out there!” M_K replied.

   

Neptune looked around.

   

“Whatever it is, its gone.” he said sort of hopefully.

   

“What made you so smart.” M_K muttered.

   

“Oh yeah, i’m Neptune_Ninja, but you can call me Neptune.” Neptune added.

   

“I’m M_K.” M_K said. “My real name is Magic_Nights, but everyone calls me M_K.”

   

Neptune nodded, then noticed M_K was laughing to himself.

Miamo scowled.

   

Miamo’s scowl meant one thing.

   

She was out to kill.

   

Miamo looked at the sunset.

   

The sunset was dark, but thenagain, it could be sunrise.

   

“Time is endless after all.” Miamo thought to herself.

   

Miamo had one goal.

   

“Miamo, why are we attacking the Neptuniouns?” a soidler asked.

   

“The Neptunuions had been too settled, they needed killed.”

   

“Your right.” the soilder said. “Nothing can have a balance.”

   

Miamo set her airforce out.

   

“There are some Neptuniouns left, including that Neptune character, who in fact, was too settled. Kill them all.” Miamo said.

   

“Ok.” the soilder said.

   

Miamo smiled. “Once I kill all the Neptunoiuns, there won’t be a balance.” Miamo plotted.

   

The battle was far from over.

Chapter 6: The island’s fate
   

M_K woke up, and was surprised to see Neptune already up.

   

Neptune was sitting on a log, cutting wood with a wooden knife.

   

M_K walked over to Neptune and slowly sat down next to him. Neptune was startled and dropped the wood and looked back.

   

“Oh, sorry about that. But I just wanted to know… who really are you? Where are you from?” M_K asked.

   

“Huh, oh that’s not important right now.” Neptune said.

   

They both heard Slainsword get up with a groan.

   

“Wha- who? Where? Oh… M_K, who's that next to you?” Slainsword asked, dazed.

   

“I’m Neptune.” Neptune said tiredly.

   

M_K took a rock and threw it at a tree, just out of curiosity. Suddenly they heard the same growling M_K heard, and it happen again. They all jumped up, startled.

   

“Whatwasthat?” Slainsword asked quickly, frightened by the noise.

   

“Probably a mountain hunter.” Neptune said thoughtfully. “I used to see them all the time, until they became extinct.”

   

M_K gasped. “Then how could it be here?”

“To be fair, not everyone thinks they exist,” Neptune said. “But I saw them with my own eyes. After they became extinct people began to doubt it. But a legend from long ago says that the tribe would never be gone from the darkness, and one secret island, the home-land of their father’s they would lurk there, never being completely erased from the history books. I never thought of that legend as true, but we might as well be at that very island.”

   

Slainsword frowned. “Then how do we survive?”

   

Neptune laughed. “We probably don’t.”

   

Just then they heard one of the tribesmen yelling. “WHO DARE SET FOOT ON THE CURSED LAND OF OUR FATHERS, FOR THOU MUST BE SEEKING THE MOUNTAIN HUNTER’S GREATEST TREASURE!” They then heard a horn and Mountain Hunter’s marching in.

   

M_K gave Neptune a panicked look and said, “What do we do?!” Slainsword and M_K both looked at Neptune for answers.

   

“Wait, according to legend, the Moutain Hunter is also an animal!” Neptune said.

   

“So?” M_K panikly said.

   

“If we feed it, then maybe they can trust us and not kill us?” Neptune said.

   

“Lets see… I have 39 cents and half a bag of MnM’s,” Slainsword said.

   

“Yeah, that’s not gonna work,” Neptune stated. “They like to eat cattle, so if we find a good sheep or goat-” Neptune began to say.

   

“Where are we going to find that?” M_K asked.

   

Neptune was speechless. M_K sighed.

   

Neptune reached in his pocket, and pulled out a pocket knife, this time metal.

   

“Lets hope this works.” Neptune said.

   

Just then Neptune heard a voice.

   

“Give up!” Miamo shouted.

   

Neptune spun around in shock.

   

Miamo laughed.

Neptune started to bolt into the jungle, and M_K and Slainsword found themselves following Neptune.

   

“Neptune, where are we going?!” M_K asked.

   

Neptune didn’t answer.

   

M_K noticed that Slainsword was starting to fall behind, but Slainsword would just have to try and keep up.

   

Miamo flew in by jet, then ordered her air force to attack.

   

Bombs dropped from the sky, and rained down on Neptune, M_K, and Slainsword.

   

Ahead there was a drop out, leading to an underground area populated by rabits, groundhogs and such. The drop out was perfect to hide in, but the only problem was that there was a big tree root guarding half of the entrance.

   

Neptune pointed to the drop out, and M_K ran toward it, and went to work digging the tree root up.

   

Slainsword ran to get a stick they could use to lever the root up.

   

Neptune just pulled on the root, painfully trying to pull it up.

   

Slainsword started to yell, but it was too faint for anyone to hear.

   

“Guys!” Slainswords voice rang, as he ran up to M_K and used the stick to pull the root up.

   

Neptune frowned, and climed into the drop out, which was big enough for 5 people.

Slainsword held the root up, while M_K climbed in.

Just as Slainsword was about to get in, there was a bomb they flew through the sky, straight toward the drop out.

   

“Slainsword look out!” M_K and Neptune yelled.

   

“No, there’s no time!” Slainsword yelled, then put the stick down, and closed the drop out.

   

“Come in, hurry!” M_K screamed.

   

“It will only kill all of us if I do!” Slainsword said.

   

Neptune started to speak, but decided against it.

   

“No!” M_K yelled.

   

Slainsword smiled.

   

“Just remember to always get back up.” Slainsword said.

   

Then a terrible explosion rang across the island, destroying anything unprotected.

   

Neptune and M_K flew against the dirt wall, screaming in terror.

   

Ashes flew threw the ground, stinging their eyes, and burning their lungs.

   

The pain of the burning ashes was horrible, and it left many scars and burns on Neptune and M_K.

   

The bombs kept raining down, and the ground shook from the noise.

   

A stick flew threw the ground and stabbed M_K in the arm, and Neptune was pierced by burning twigs, and they both were badly injured and bleeding.

   

But all M_K could think about was Slainsword.

   

Finally, after 2 hours, the bomb’s ceased, and miamo left.

   

Miamo smiled. She was sure that she had destroyed Neptune for good.

   

Neptune wasn’t destroyed, however.

   

In fact, he woke up the next day at 8:32 am, and could barely talk.

“M_K, are y-you a-alivvee?” Neptune barely maniged to say.

   

M_K was out cold, but not dead.

   

Neptune sat up, and searched his pockets for anything he could save.

   

Neptune put his hand straight threw his pocket, as there was a big hole in his pocket.

   

Neptune sighed and fell back asleep.

   

“AHHHHH!” M_K suddenly screamed.

   

Neptune bolted up, and saw a badly injured M_K sit up.

   

“Are y-you o-ok?” Neptune asked M_K.

   

“SLAINSWORD!” M_K screamed, tears streaming down his face.

   

M_K started to cry, but Neptune had to stop him.

   

“M_K listen, you have to stop crying!” Neptune yelled.

   

M_K didn’t listen.

   

“M_K, tears will hurt your cuts and make the pain unbearible!” Neptune yelled again.

   

M_K stopped.

   

Neptune sighed. “That’s better.” he said.

   

“Ok, now we need to get you first aid.”

   

M_K shook his head. “You need first aid more than I do!” he said.

   

Neptune frowned. “How bad is it?”

   

M_K winced. “You don’t want to know, but long story short your badly injured, and you have a bleeding scar toward on your cheek.”

   

Neptune stood up, and looked around for his first aid kit.

Neptune picked up a piece of what looked to be a burnt ointment bottle.

It was in bad shape, but still useable.

   

Neptune rubbed the ointment on his face, and winced as it stung his entire body.

   

M_K picked up a piece of what looked like a burnt band -aid, and a plastic handle.

   

Neptune found his pocket knife, and since it was heat proof, it was still in decent shape.

   

M_K picked up something that made him freeze.

   

It was Slainsword’s M and M bag.

   

M_K only saw the green m&m’s left, as Slainsword never liked the green ones.

   

“Frickin destruction!” M_K yelled. Then exhaled afterwards.

   

Neptune stood up.

   

“Yelling won’t do us any good.” Neptune quitely said.

   

M_K sat down and nodded.

… Ah! This is the turkey sandwich I was going to have for lunch, you guys look kinda

Neptune suddenly noticed a helicopter.

   

“Is that a-”

   

“It's ok if you don't like candy, they’re not really that good for you anyways. Lets see hungry though, how did you get here anyways?”

   

The helicopter then came to life for a second and crashed into another tree.

   

“Ah! So that’s the start button, found it!”

   

“Who are you?” M_K asked.

   

“Ah, the name is Spyroclub1.” the helicopter person said, then proceeded to fall of his chair.

   

“Oh and my co-pilot GiantNate91 isn’t here, but I should introduce him anyway.”

   

Neptune climbed out of the overpass.

“Ya guys need a lift? You seem pretty lost,” Spyroclub1 said.

   

M_K climbed out of the overpass as well, and he gave Spyroclub1 a confused look in the process.

   

“How do we know we can trust you?”

   

Spyroclub1 shrugged. “I mean, I just thought you guys seemed lost so I flew over here… and definitely did not crash. Anyways, if you don't need a lift then I can just fly away.”

   

“I mean, we are really lost and i'm starving… so…” M_K started to say.

   

“But we can't trust him, he could be one of Miamo’ minions with a trap,” Neptune said.

   

“Alright, If you don't want to go then I’ll just leave,” Spyroclub1 said, they heard a rumbling engine start then turn off.

   

“So… uh… my plane might be a tad bit broken.”

   

All the sudden Spyroclub1 stopped.

   

“Wait Miamo?!?” he asked.

   

“Yup.” Neptune replied.

   

“Aww man, she sucks when it comes to survival.” Spyroclub1 frowned.

   

M_K nodded.

   

“I think he is trustworthy.” Neptune said.

   

“I think so too!” Spyroclub1 called out of the plane. Then he got out of the plane.

   

“So… any of you guys got any snacks? Looks like we’re spending the night!” Spyroclub1 called cheerfully, then started setting up a stick hut.

   

“I do.” said a voice.

   

M_K turned around

   

“Hey guys.” Slainsword said.

   

“Slainsword! You're ok! Wait… Slainsword. How are you here?” M_K asked.

   

“I’m not.” Slainsword said, then he quickly changed into a soilder.

   

“I got him!” the soilder yelled.

   

M_K gasped.

   

Suddenly another soilder dropped down from the trees.

   

“Attack!” the tree soilder yelled.

   

Spyroclub1 quickly grabbed a piece of bambo, and threw it at the fake Slainsword.

   

Fake Slainsword was quickly dead.

   

The tree soilder backed up, but M_K and Neptune did a double pursuit, and talked him to the ground.

   

“Who are you?” Neptune demanded.

   

“None of your-” but the soilder didn’t get to finish.

   

Spyroclub1 picked up a piece of bambo.

   

“Wait there is something different about this soilder!” Neptune yelled.

   

‘What is it?” Spyroclub1 asked.

   

“Yeah what is it?” M_K asked.

   

Neptune shrugged.

   

“I don’t know, but for what it’s worth, let’s keep him alive for know.”

   

“Sounds good to me, do you have any snacks, by the way tree soldier? We’re kinda low.” Spyroclub1 said.

   

“First let the frick go of me.” The tree soilder said.

   

Neptune looked at M_K and nodded.

They both let the tree soilder go.

   

The tree soilder took of his helment.

   

The tree soilder was a purple mudkip.

   

“My name is Swayamlayz.” The mudkip said.

   

“You work for Miamo?” M_K asked.

   

Swayam saddly nodded.

   

“But i’m ready to change.”

   

Neptune smiled only a little.

   

Swayam suddenly looked alarmed.

   

“We need to get off this island.” he yelled.

   

Neptune and the others all started to get nervous.

   

“I don’t want to be the one to ask this, but why?” Spyroclub1 asked.

   

“The storm is coming.” Swayam replied quickly.

   

“That kinda sounds like a bad thing.” Spyroclub1 said.

   

M_K rolled his eyes.

   

Swayam’s expression grew dark.

   

“It is a very bad thing.”

= Chapter 7: Escape =    

M_K dug his foot into the soft dirt that law below.

   

It had been 8 hours, and they still couldn’t find a way to escape.

Neptune fell to the ground tired.

“I don’t think it’s possible to escape.” he said.

   

“Are you guys forgetting about the classic raft?” Swayam said.

   

“Yes.” replied Spyroclub1, as he tried to fix his plane for the 107th time that day.

   

“We can use Spyroclub1’s plane as a raft, if we add bambo to the bottom.

   

Spyroclub1 pulled a big container of Bambo out from the plane.

   

“You never know when this stuff will come in handy.”

   

2 hours later they were floating away on the raft.

   

That’s when the storm came.

= Neptune and the others were being thrown around by waves, thrashed in the darkness of the ocean. =    

“Gah!” Swayamplayz gasped, as water splashed onto him.

   

“I feel the same way.” M_K replied.

   

“Ya know, this isn’t what I had in mind.” Spyroclub1 said.

   

M_K rolled his eyes.

   

After what seemed like a restless night, the storm stopped.

   

Five hours later, they arrived at an island smaller than before.

   

Everyone was hurting from the storm, since saltwater and scratches don’t mix well.

   

This meant rowing to shore with their bare hands was tough.

   

Neptune looked up at the island ahead.

   

There was a huge temple, hidden the trees.

   

Once they got on the island, Neptune and the others decided to explore a little.

“Hey what’s that?” asked Spyroclub1.

   

Everyone looked at what Spyroclub1 was pointing to.

   

It was the temple that Neptune had briefly saw.

   

Except this time, it was glowing blue and purple.

   

“I say we go check that out.” Swayamplayz said.

   

“Sure why not.” M_K replied.

   

Spyroclub1 frowned. “Except the only way in is through the forest.”

   

“Has a forest stopped us before?” M_K exclaimed.

   

The truth was, no forest had.

   

= Chapter 8: The Temple =    

They entered the temple.

   

“Hey look a sword!” Spyroclub said.

   

Neptune ran up to the sword.

   

Sudddenly a voice rang out.

   

”Neptune, the sword is yours!” this voice said.

“Who said that? Neptune yelled.

   

“Said what?” Swaysmplayz responded.

   

“Yea what?” M_K asked.

   

“You guys didn’t hear that?” Neptune was shocked.

   

The sword seemed to lure Neptune closer.

   

Pick it up!

   

Without thinking, Neptune picked the sword up.

   

“Wow I like this sword!” Neptune said.

   

“Its nice.” Spyroclub responded. “But it doesnt compare to my delicious stone pie!”

   

Everyone rolled their eyes.

   

Form a team

   

You are the ninjas of comment.

   

“Guys, i heard a voice that says this should be a team, called the ninjas of comment.” Neptune said nervous.

   

“Not a bad idea.” Spyroclub said.

   

“Except the comment Ninjas sound better.” Swayamplayz added.

   

“No the Comment kings.” M_K argued.

   

The three started to argue.

   

“Guys!” Neptune yelled.

   

Everyone stopped argueing and looked at Neptune.

   

“I like the comment Ninja’s.”

= Chapter 9: The Battle =

8 hours later….

   

The new team started to walk out of the temple.

   

They spent the day exploring it, and Spyroclub complaining about when dinner was made it hard.

   

“Whats that sound?” was a question he also asked a lot.

   

“What is that?” Spyroclub asked the team.

   

“I don’t know, a bird.” M_K responded.

   

“No for real this time.” Spyroclub said.

   

Suddenly a rocket shot out of a ship and hit the ground next to M_K.

   

“Get The frick out of this island!” Neptune yelled.

   

The team ran up to the water, soon realising they don’t have a boat.

   

“Uh now what?” Spyroclub said.

   

Suddenly a lazer beam was shot at the team. It seemed it was the end.

   

“No!” yelled a voice.

   

SlainSword ran up to the team, and jumped in front of them, but instead the lazer hit Swayamplayz, because SlainSword was still a little of aim.

   

“Slainsword!” Neptune and M_K yelled.

   

“Guys, now is not the time!” Spyroclub said.

   

They looked down at Swayamplayz.

   

He was dying.

   

“The only way we can save him, is by using the sword.” M_K said.

   

“How do you know that?” Spyroclub responded.

   

“I don’t know it just popped in my head.”

   

The team soon revived Sawyamplayz, but miamo had arived.

   

“Attack!” Neptune yelled.

The team attacked the ships by climbing up to the cliffs and jumping down on them.

Neptune and Slainsword landed on the same ship, and it was miamo’s.

   

“Why are you destroying us?” Slainsword yelled.

   

“BECAUSE NEPTUNE’s PLANET DESTROYED MINE!” Miamo screamed.

   

“No we didnt!” Neptune said.

   

“Yes you did!” Miamo replied. “You guys were building on to your planet making it bigger. This caused my planet to go out of orbit.”

 

Neptune frowned.

   

“You could have told us that!”

   

“Destorying you is more fun.” Miamo said.

   

Miamo threw the ship around, letting it bang agaisnt the cliff, throwing Neptune and Slainsword onto it.

   

Neptune fell onto burning hot rocks, rocks that had been shot by a lazer.

   

Slainsword fell onto grass.

   

“Neptune, quick question.” Slainsword said.

   

“AH Ow what?” Neptune replied, jumping off the rocks.

   

“Can you win?” Slainsword asked.

   

“What do you mean?” Neptune asked.

   

Slainsword smiled, and then faded into pixles.

   

Neptune stopped himself from crying.

 

“Yes I can win.”

   

Neptune threw himself onto the ship, and got the sword out.

   

“Since this is technacly my sword now, lets do this.”

   

Neptune dug his sword into the sjhip, but miamo has a step ahead.

   

He threw Neptune down to the ground, just like he did with the other team memebers.

   

“Guys, Slainsword died and Miamo won!” Swayamplayz yelled.

   

Miamo threw her ship into the temple and got out.

   

“At last I can destroy this temple!” “Neptune thought I was trying to kill him, well the real reason is this temple!”

   

The team somehow heard this, and ran to the temple.

   

But it was too late.

   

Miamo ran to the base of the temple, and blasted it.

   

“I win!” Miamo yelled.

   

Suddenly the temple shook and started to fall apart.

   

“Haha now the temple is gone!”

   

Miamo didn’t realise that she was in the temple as it was being destroyed, until it was too late.

   

The Comments Ninja’s had won, thanks to the quick question temple.

   

“Yes!” Spyroclub yelled.

   

Everyone else had fallen asleep from being too tired.

   

= Chapter 10: Celebration =    

3 months later…..

   

The team celebrated in their new base, with Nate and Chad.

   

The team had founded a base, as well as gotten two comic book characters that would disapear in later adventures, never to be known from again.

Neptune went up to the window, and looked up to the sky.

   

A bright star shone through the night, making even the moon seem dim.

   

Shortly after that star disapeared.

   

Neptune smiled.

 

This was a sign.

   

There were more adventures to come.

   

Even though they would be hard, and painful, Neptune still knew.

   

The adventues ahead would besomething Neptune would never forget.

   

Neptune never did.

   

So the Comments Ninja’s were ready for an amazing start.

The End!
Thank you for reading, and until next time, goodbye and beware of ninja's-

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