Fanon:The comment Ninja's 3 (Adventure series)

Welcome to the third part of ”The Comment Ninja’s!”

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 * Neptune_Ninja_Comics (Creator)
 * Swayamplayz (Co-creator)
 * Cheezdoodle51 (Co-Creator)
 * Flipnote19 (Co-Creator)

Chapter 1: Greatest Enemy== == Neptune woke up to find himself in a cell. He stood up wondering where he was. There were no clues or anything. Suddenly it occurred to Neptune. “Wh-where is my crew?"Where is that...person?!” Neptune cried. He searched around, looking for anyway to escape. No such luck. Then, he heard a yell from across the area. “Let me go! Let me GO!” It was Hatena’s voice...but it sounded as if he was being tortured...or worse.

Chapter 2: Hatena’s Suffering== == “You don’t know what you’re doing!” Hatena screamed. “Stop squirming, you filthy animal.” A voice said. It was dark and gloomy, that voice. No emotions at all. The voice had a shadowy figure with no way to tell who it was. However, it held a little machine, Perfect for Hatena‘s size. “You can’t put me in there!“ Hatena said, “or ill...I’ll-“ “YOU’LL WHAT?” The voice screeched. Hatena stayed silent, but tried to escape. He felt an electric shock hit his body as he fell to the ground. “Wh...who are you...?” Hatena said, as he shook on the floor. “That’s for me to know...and you to suffer through.” The voice said. He took Hatena into his hands and put him into the machine.

Chapter 3: Marty_Sayz's Army== == Marty_Sayz ordered C_L to help him clean the cells. Well more like ordered C_L to clean the cells while he watched. Spyroclub1 was still in his cell, and the creaking bars of the cell were driving him crazy. However, the whole Comment Ninja's team was actully starting to get crazy. Half of them were losing their sanity. sanity is an important thing. Swayamplayz was thinking about something other than being trapped in a cell alone though. He was thinking about how to get out. "Hey whats this?" Swayapalyz said to himself. He found something that would change everything.

Chapter 4: New Ending== == Marty_Sayz was asleep that night.He was having a dream that was actully a user using a dreamwalker. Marty_Sayz's dream was this: '''"Before you fell."said a voice. "Who was that?" MartySayz looked around. "I knew you." said the voice again. "W-What?" Marty_Sayz asked. "You know me......I much more powerful than you, you faker." "I've grown stronger........" Marty_Sayz argued. "Don't argue with me, I am much more strong than you will ever be."spoke the voice. "Wha-" Marty_Sayz was scared by now. "I am more powerful. I've exploded Neptune's chance at finding BNF. Literly. Literly though, things are hard to get done that way." the voice finished. "You know." the voice said. "umm....I dont." said Marty_Sayz. "You know!" said the voice."Umm....I don't." said Marty_Sayz. "YOU KNOW!" said the voice.Then Marty_Sayz woke up. I need to get better dreams. thought Marty_Sayz still in his dream. Suddenly a new voice broke up the hilarous thoughts. this one was more scary and imtimidating. The voice said:'''

'''T̶͍̭̩̤̂́̀̽̈́̐̏̊̇͟͡h͇͓̩͔͌́̈͊͜͝à̴̭̥̤̭̥̳̗̲̝́̓̇̍̒̽͞t̡̠̞̳̝̺̆̓́̽͂͜ͅ ŵ̶̟͓̗̲̮̩̱̈̎͊̐͗͛͠ȧ̼̫̯̤̣̞̮͔̐͑͌̆̇ͅş̸̮̺̳̱͓̗̖̾̽̀̎͆̓͛̈̇̾ j̢̨̥̳̫͕̮̯̙̞̍͌̀͂̊͛̂͡͝u̞̰̯̙̻̳̱͋͋̆̈́̋̆̎͟s̼̟̦͙̉̿́͑͑̓̆͘͟t̢̤͈̺̭͇̙̀͌̈͑̋̏ ţ̘̮̖̠̘̓͋̈́̍̓̕̚͟͞͡o̷̼͖͚̹̤̐̒́̏͌͞ r̛̥͇̖͕̩̣̅́̌̒͐̈͢ă̢̺̞̠̝͔͕͔͈̇̉̓̈́̔̔̈ͅt̝̱̤̞͍̳͑̔̄̆͡ṫ̸̡̛̫̩̦̮͇̫͓̓̀̃̃̌̅͋̚͟l̷̜̹̣̮̩̮̲̅̍̆̾̽ͅĕ̶̥̦͈̖͒̌̽͌̽͒͂͜ ỵ̷̛̩̠͚͈͔̣̪͒̐̈͑ͅǒ̸̳̣̘̫̘̺͊̀̑͒̒͜͝ư̧͉̫͔̯̫̘̆͊̎́͘̚̚͢͠ͅ u͖͓͓̥̹̲̭̖̱͗̍̏̄̏̍̔͊͢͞p̸̨̨̲̖̥̜̯̖̈́̐̽̈́͐͜ͅ,̛͖̬̞̱͇͖̺͍͈̑̿̍̓͗̒͟ j̶̨̬̤̙̭̗͍̊͗͌͑̃̒͢͠͝u͙̗̫̥͍͍̔̔͛͜͠͠ṡ̱̹̣̠͈͈̾͆̿̂̃̔̚ţ̟͔̬̭̬̺̋̌͆̿̕ ṣ̷̨̡͇̝̈̉̒͂͂͢o̱̼̜̰̺̩͊͋̂̿̀͊͑͗̒͞ I̷̡̤̖̜͔̜̜͋͂̔͐̎̕͜ͅ c̵̨̛͖̖̤̟̞͔̹̣̱͑̍̾̍̓͑̉͠a̸͖̻̱̪̲̩̯͈̺͒́́̇́̐̋̎̒ͅn̩̙͇̩͕͎͖̼̠͐̓̃̒̐̽̕͜͠ b̙̟̟̦͖̳̓͗̅̿̋̑͗͆̚̚͢ͅr̻͕͈̣̳͂̾̌͋̈́̕̚ͅḭ̴͍̤̰̭͊͂̄̃̎̑͊̉̍͟͜ͅn̵̡̛̲̠͙͖͕͇̰͉̐͑̋̅̇̔̐͠g͍̳̩͓̯̹͒̅̎̑͒̚̚͜͡͠ y̹͙̫͇͈̣̟̫͎̆̐̈́͗̂́̋͘o̶̮̭͓̻̱͐̿͆̑́̕u̡͉̱͚̘̤̓̇̿̈͐͞ ḑ̠͈͔̮̆̊̈́͒͘͜͜ơ͙̤̻̞̮̬̳̽̐͋̽̾͐̀̚ŵ̸̥͉̱̖̜̯͍̬̓̓̆̚̚͜n̢̛͍̩̲͙̲̰̰̗͌͗̄̔͒̍̃́͢͡!͚̺̮̪̥̰̙́͊̀̓̌̄̈́͘͜͝͞ͅ!̧̖͎̯̖̹͓͆̾͐́͋͌!̛̻̺͎͈̝̞̻̹̓̀́̑̓͘̚͘ Y̷̡̨̫͍̯̗̙͖̝̽͌̄̈̅̍͌̾̕o̢̢̡̙̻̳̹̥͔̘̾̎͋̀͋u̢̮̻̼̺̔͂͆̌͢͡͝ ẗ͖̣̘̖̰́̊͊͋̆̌͂̾̈̕ͅḩ͚̘̳̲̳̃͌̓͘͡͝į̠̣͉̺͔̻͔̊́̒̋̉̒̄͛͘͠n̸̡̛̦̳͕̼̘̱͊́̔̾͆͂͠͞ͅk̯͚͈̻͚̩̘̯̼̓͆́̈̿͠ͅ Ỉ̷̜͕̹̼͊̓̽̆͒̆̇͒͟͟ d̷̝͓̹͕͓̊̆̂̑͡͡ǒ̷̢̼̲̼̬̲̩̞͊̊̚͢͢͝ņ̡̛̹͔̙̘̤̝̦̙̾͛̽͂̕'̡̧̢̨͍̙̺̣͒̏̃̾͐̃̂͌͐͢͠t̹̳̯͕̩͙̉̀̉̏̆̾͜͞ ŗ̸̛̗͈͇̖͊̐͑͜͜͝ͅȩ̫̰̺͚̯͙͚̊̾͌̿̄̌̇ç̩̪̮͚̠͖̱̜̈́̔̀͋̉̽̒͑̉ȍ͚͍̥̮͑̆͐̑͋̔̄͞ͅͅṉ̶̰̥͈̭̘̗̜̫̅̆̇͑͆͛̽̌̾̚ͅḯ̴̟̝̼̮̿̎̏̆̚͟͞͡z̨̧̛̭̰̟̯̣̓̊̓̌͆̂̈̅͢͜e̡̡̧͚̠͚͒͌̍̽͐̒͞ ȳ̢̝̤̮͉͇̹̞̣̹̏̎̊̉̒̃̒̓͒o̵̧̗̮̱̼̪̿̈̑̄̓͐̿͟͞͡ṵ̢̞̰̺͍̥͋̓̅͛̓͂̀̕͘̚͢?̬͍̰̞̝͚̬̤̫̆̿̈́̑͊̋́̿!̫͉͔̟͓͔̉̔͒̎̆̎̒͟͞?̼̟͎̜̄̂̔̒̕͡ͅ w̴̧̡̻͈̦̯̗̤̬̪͑̿̔̓͆e̷̡͖̝͎͙͕͕̫̓̽̄̐̓̑̒̅̿̉͢ļ̸̧̞̱̩̤̝̥̊̓͊̀͌͋̀͘͡l̨̨͈̜̲̗̝͉̻̄́̒͒̃̎͋̕͟ t̢̠̰͙̱͖̦̏̌̈́̔͂͌͢h̷̗̙̦̲̻͖̮̳͉̻͛͛̐̽̂̽̈́̏a̴̧̞͔̦̥̤̮̾̋̉̆̄͡ẗ̩̼͕̜̻̊̉͂͋͆̆͑̑̀ w̶͈̤͚̼͉̜̜̺͍͂̈́͗̾̑̈͝i̡̨̛̹̩̘̓̊̒̈́̔̾͜͡l̛̞̠̠̹̻̿͌̈̋̀̅̃͞l̷̨̰͎̣̺̓́̃͂̾̄̚̚̕ c̱̗̦̼̺̈́͛̓̀͊̓͜͠͞ḫ̶̨̛̜̰͈̱̟̍͐̽̎͗͂͆̎̕a̱̫̤̤̪̙̜̫͓̍̀̾͞͡n͍̜̱̹̫̉̉̄̔̏́̔̑͘ͅͅg̡̧̡̞͖̤͌̊͆̒̓͟ȅ̵̛͚͇̭͍̠̱̂̃́̑̾.̧̩͕̥͉̫̎̈́͂͛̏͟͞ G̫̗͖̰͒̾̒͌̎̀̄̑͘ͅo̧̙̠̹͖̹̠̐̾́́̐̅͞ǫ̷̧̛̪͎͎͉̙̖̞̍̅͜͠͡d̛̦͍̺̮͕̭̺̲̻̤̎̍̈̐͐b̸̨̧͖̠̼͇̔͋͋̎̏͗̚̚̕ͅỳ̵̢̼͙̜̆̔͆̋͂̑̎͟͡ͅe̡̨̱̥̳̣̯͂̈́̃̂̒̂̽͞ͅ.̮̗̦͓͉̾̿̄̑͟͡͡ I̖̯̖̦̣͗̍̽͛́̚͟ w̛͈̝͈̭̯͍̙̾̆́̍́̾͡ͅḭ͙̪̘̺̄̾͆̇̔l͔̮̪͔͕̆̇̾͛́̀̃̊͡͞l̷͔̺̼̲̿̀̐̀̄͢ e̞̙̻͔̗̭̖̞̼̐͑̈́̓̚x̸̛͙͚̺͚̏͂̃̈́̕͢c̭̞͎͉͔͍͍͈̋͐͆͋̐̎͞ͅe̸̗̪̘̣̭͙̩̝̯͛͋͆̈́͆̄̚̕p̡̠̟͉͙̪̦̣͐̈̂͒̈ͅt̴͔̦̻̠̝̣͂͂̈̚͜͞ b͍̬̻̪̮͚͍̣̫͌͋̂̐̿͘͜e̻̰͉͆͌́̚̕͢ͅt̵͈̙̦͔̬͎̤̲͇̿̇̂̋̀̅̑͘t̵̬̘͙̮͉̞͈̗̖͒̐̊̊̚ë̞̲̥̞̟͓͕́̾͊̏̿͐͟r̸̹̦͔͇̣͈͆̇̾́̃̀̇̕͡ t̢̡̛̘̘̟̬̞̻̬̔̑̉̑́͐̓̚͝ẖ̵̛͎̯̲͙͍̫̏̿̕͢͡͠į̥̦̪̱̱̙͐͂͊̃͆̊̕͜n̶̝̤͎̳̼͓̜̱̏̑̏̈́̆͢͜g̡̮̼͙̾̾̈́̍̾̎̂̅̽ͅş̵͚̟̖̭̖̿̌̓̓̏͞ f̸̡̛̪̠̻̰͐̑̀̿͒̀͌͌͝ŕ̶̻͎͇͓̞̙̊̈̔̍͋̚͟͜ǭ̗̻͍̬̮̋̌͒͜͝m̤̦̰̫̍̽̅́̃̾̽͜͝ ÿ̵̢̤̭̭͙͚͔́̂̌̀̂͊͜o̶̧̳̝͇̭̽̈̌̐̐ư͇͕͉͓̭̈́͑̈́̀́̈̉͢͝͞.̶͇͓̣̰̣̽́̇̃̓̃̎̋̚ Î̷̢̧̧͉̌͊̊͛̃͐̈́́ͅ ŗ̨͖̱̯̺̀͊̅͗̐̊͂̕ͅa̘̦̘̤͔̣͕͉̘̲̿̆̐̅͗̌̓̀͡ṫ̢͉̙̤̼̮͉̮̐͛͌͋̓̓̆ţ͖͎͉̻̭̗̞̫̮̀͆̓͑̒̾̀l͚̭̭̫̖͍͉̳̥͑̔̽̽̄ȩ̶̨͕̳̱̺̟͆̔̇̃̋̾̎͘ď̙͇͎̝̹̊̊̄͒̃͞ ư̠̦̳͇̯̜̥̙̏̀̎̉̋̓̚̚̚ͅp̴̡͈͎͉͙͕̤̟̅̈͂̇̇̾̓ Ň̸̨̳̞͍̭̤̂̊̓̅̆̃͆͜ḛ͈͎̮̩̅̑̉̆̈́̊͘ͅp̴̡̲̥͈̞̱͎̊̉͋͂͆̀̏͘ͅt̵̘̫̩̤͑̽̊̒̔̽͟͞͠ù̲̮̳̱͕̼̏̈̍͂̓͠͝n̫̯̳͖͙̼̯̗̳͗̐̾̌̍̆̉͌͐̆e͈̗̲̭̘̤̱͒̔̌́̈̈́̒͡͞͡ͅͅ,̵͈͚̻̜͍̯̯̪͖̄͂͂̓̏̔͗̂̌̚͟ ą̵̟͉̖͆̆̅̅͘͜͜ͅn̶̥̭̳̩̠̑͗͗̔̍͢͢͡ͅd͓̪̜͙͚̗̫̐̈́̓̂̏͌̔͘͢͞ I̸̭̺͉̙̠͊͑͗̀̒̄̑̒͢ c̴͓͚͚͉̝̐̽͗̓̀̎̓͋͘͟ȧ̞͓̰͙͖͕̪͐̓͘͝͝ͅn̷̢̲͖͍̫̯̝̍̃̏̄̃́̀̒̚͟͝ͅͅ ḓ̜̤̱͉͙̭̂̔́̓̓̈͜o̡̢̱͚̫̦̘̎̿̑̐̍͘͜͝ å̢͈̪͙̖̞͔͈͋͆̔̍̓͌̌͡͞ͅ ļ̸̯̗̗͎͋̋͆̃̍ơ̸̧̬͕͚̳̳̈́͒̂̇̃̽͡͡ț͍̯͖̬̫͚͂̏͊͒͟͞ ẃ̱̠͔̱̰͖͙͛̏͋͒̽̎̐̐ͅò̧͇̻̤͓̆̄̒͐̔͐̚͢r̨̢̧̛̫͖̱̬̞͆̀͂̈̓̽ͅs̵̳̥̟̤̻̲͐͋̌́̈́̽͒̅͐e̸̡͇͙̯̖̲̙̺͖̱̎̏͒̽̚͝.̸͈͔͇̙̩̩̺͂̉̒͊̀̄̃̔ G̯̜̩̣͎͚̪̉̈̔̒̆́͘o̥̻̟̘̯͂̈́̂̓̒̚̚͝͠o̷̖̺̩̪̫̾̏̉̈̄̅̂̋͝d͎̯̦͚̬͔̺̝͂̌͒͆͗̕b̵̦̭͓̯̦̺͈̺̙̯̎̓̀͒͊͛̐̐͝ẏ̵͍̲̣͕̼̜̙̇͂̇̍́͢e̠̺̥͕̮̓͗̃̈́̏̕ͅ.̻͓̝̣̼͆̀͛͂̓̽͑͑̚͟͢ͅ S̵̛̫͖̳̜̥͔͓͎͓̮̒̋̋̊̒ę̸̛̩̩̪͍͈͖̀͛̈̄̿͐͟ͅệ̡̖̞̙̠̣͇͖̩̽͆̑̽͂͡͝ ŷ̶̡̛͍̣̯̩̾̆̒͒́͊̈́̋ȯ̡̧͍͙̲̪̠̹͂͌̀̀̍̽u̵̹̜̭̞͋̔̐͊̊̿͊͋̾ͅ.̢̟̰͙̬̪̖̼̣̘͗̾͌̏͆͛ Ỹ͕̞̯̳̠̩͌̑̃́͛̏̓̌ͅō͎̩̹̞̬̊͒̀̅̊̅͡ṵ̢̧̼̝͕͉͚̮̋̒͑̊̈̄̈́͡ k͉̩͇̫̪̖͂̅̐̋̅͒͟ņ̶̛̻̳̺̳̔̌́̋͘̚ỏ̧̪̰̺̣̞͓̭̱̄̐̀̄͟͝w̧̰͕̼̬͎̲̱̅̽̀̍͊̃͊͟ͅ w̷̛̝͖̭͔̖͎͊́͗͛͜ͅḩ̼̤͔̗̊̾̇̎͠o̷͚͔̳̜̙̘͋̈͆̄̄̀̽̕ I̶̞̟͈͍̲̩̓́̈͒̍̇̏͟͞ ą̸͈̰͈̰̯͓͌͋̓͂͛̽̔̕m̴̛̼̤̤̪͐̀̀̈̀̅̒͜.̡̤̲̬͙͎̮͚̇̅́̅̉͞ '''

(that said:That was just to rattle you up, just so I can bring you down!!! You think I don't reconize you?!? well that will change. Goodbye. I will except better things from you. I rattled up Neptune, and I can do a lot worse. Goodbye. See you. You know who I am.)

Marty_Sayz woke up screaming. His screaming stopped when he heard a voice rang out, "DONT FORGET!" that woke up everyone. Marty_Sayz remembered now. "Oh no....." he said. "I thought he was gone forever....." a drop of water hit the floor. The moon seemed to disapear under the clouds.

Chapter 5: The Follow== == Neptune fell back asleep at 5:00 and woke up at 6:00, wondering about why Marty_Sayz woke everyone up. Neptune looked over at the cell doors .The cell doors were open, which was not something that would just happen. Marty_Sayz was gone. "Where is Marty_Sayz?" Neptune said to himself. Little did Neptune know, Marty_Sayz was long gone. Nothing seemed wrong however.

Chapter 6: Dazed and Confused== == Hatena finally woke up. All of the color was drained from his body. He has no magic, no friends, no color...he was useless. The mysterious figure laughed as he picked up Hatena by his leg. “Y-you...Ugh...” Hatena grumbled. He felt like he was paralyzed. “Now...do you understand that you are a useless being?“ The figure asked. "Wha-" "SILENCE!" spoke the figure, as he put Hatena into the machine. Hatena was silent. Then the machine door closed. The robot stood up. "At your service" Said the robot.

"I'll take everything from here." said the figure.

Chapter 7: Old rivalry's== == The cave was wet and damp. Martysays entered. He knew that the end was near for him. He approached the orc. "Gollum, come out," said Marty. "War... You come to me now. The anti-polls must have lost, if you are here,' said Gollum. "I'm not here to kill you," said Marty. "My kind is being erased by the new generation, The quick question are replacing my polls." Gollum laughed. "Martysays, I remember fighting you, till the end. This is my destiny. Your destiny is coming." 'I need you to help me, these quick questions will have the same fate as these polls," begged Martysays. "The user is coming to kill me." "User?" said Gollum. 'Darkspyro, the brother of Spyroclub1," said Marty. A sudden boom could be heard. "Run," said Gollum. "The user is here." Martysays ran deeper into the cave. Gollum stood up and got his electrical spear. "GIVE ME MARTYSAYS, OR YOU WILL FACE THE SAME FATE," said Darkspyro. "Get through me," said Gollum. The two fought. Gollum swung his spear and Darkspyro dodged. Darkspryo summoned a wave a dark energy blowing Gollum and destroying a lot of the cave. Gollum struggled to stand. Darkspyro punched Gollum in the face and Gollum fell. "THIS IS THE HERO THAT THEY ADMIRE, I CRUSHED HIM WITH MY BARE HANDS." Gollum stood up again. "Legends never die." Darkspyro punched him in the jaw and threw him to the wall. "I GUESS LEGENDS DO GET BANNED." Gollum was covered in rubble.

Chapter 8: Into the cave== == Martysays ran deeper into the cave. He had not got a signal from his watch that Gollum had been banned. That meant Gollum must of still been fighting him. He could still hear booms behind him. Gollum must have been defeated but not banned then. Martysays fell into a hole. He stayed in there until DrakSpyro left. '''"WHERE IS HE." '''Martysays didn't dare to breathe. "Brother," said a voice. '''"GUESS WHO SHOWED UP." '''"Your doing too much, just because Spyroclub hid his life from you. Doesn't mean you have to take everything from him." '''"NATHAN, YOU LIED TO ME. YOU HAVE HAD YOUR EYE ON HIM FOR YEARS. AND YOU TELL ME NOW." '''"I am sorry, I lied. But it was not safe for you to know." '''"I'll GO NOW," said Darkspyro. '''When Darkspyro left, Nathan whispered to Marty. "You can come out now. I'll bring you to your old army."

Chapter 9: The Robot of Hatena== == Neptune assembeled his team again. His team was not ready. There was a funeral going on. The funeral of Hatena. Tears rolled down from everyone's eyes. "psst, I need to have a chat with you," said Swayamplays. "What is it," asked Neptune. "I found something, that could help us," said Swayamplays. "What is it?" asked Neptune. "Look at this security footage." Swayamplayz spoke. Swayamplayz showed Neptune his watch.