Fanon:The comment Ninja's 3 (Adventure series)

Welcome to the third part of ”The Comment Ninja’s!”

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 * Neptune_Ninja_Comics (Creator)
 * Swayamplayz (Co-creator)
 * Cheezdoodle51 (Co-Creator)
 * Flipnote19 (Co-creator)

Chapter 1: Greatest Enemy== == Neptune woke up to find himself in a cell. He stood up wondering where he was. There were no clues or anything. Suddenly it occurred to Neptune. “Wh-where is my crew?"Where is that...person?!” Neptune cried. He searched around, looking for anyway to escape. No such luck. Then, he heard a yell from across the area. “Let me go! Let me GO!” It was Hatena’s voice...but it sounded as if he was being tortured...or worse.

Chapter 2: Hatena’s Suffering== == “You don’t know what you’re doing!” Hatena screamed. “Stop squirming, you filthy animal.” A voice said. It was dark and gloomy, that voice. No emotions at all. The voice had a shadowy figure with no way to tell who it was. However, it held a little machine, Perfect for Hatena‘s size. “You can’t put me in there!“ Hatena said, “or ill...I’ll-“ “YOU’LL WHAT?” The voice screeched. Hatena stayed silent, but tried to escape. He felt an electric shock hit his body as he fell to the ground. “Wh...who are you...?” Hatena said, as he shook on the floor. “That’s for me to know...and you to suffer through.” The voice said. He took Hatena into his hands and put him into the machine.

Chapter 3: Marty_Sayz's Army== == Marty_Sayz ordered C_L to help him clean the cells. Well more like ordered C_L to clean the cells while he watched. Spyroclub1 was still in his cell, and the creaking bars of the cell were driving him crazy. However, the whole Comment Ninja's team was actually starting to get crazy. Half of them were losing their sanity. sanity is an important thing. Swayamplayz was thinking about something other than being trapped in a cell alone though. He was thinking about how to get out. "Hey whats this?" Swayamplayz said to himself. He found something that would change everything. :(

Chapter 4: New Ending== == Marty_Sayz was asleep that night.He was having a dream that was actually a user using a dream walker. Marty_Sayz's dream was this: '''"Before you fell."said a voice. "Who was that?" MartySayz looked around. "I knew you." said the voice again. "W-What?" Marty_Sayz asked. "You know me......I much more powerful than you, you faker." "I've grown stronger........" Marty_Sayz argued. "Don't argue with me, I am much more strong than you will ever be."spoke the voice. "Wha-" Marty_Sayz was scared by now. "I am more powerful. I've exploded Neptune's chance at finding BNF. Literly. Literly though, things are hard to get done that way." the voice finished. "You know." the voice said. "umm....I dont." said Marty_Sayz. "You know!" said the voice."Umm....I don't." said Marty_Sayz. "YOU KNOW!" said the voice.Then Marty_Sayz woke up. I need to get better dreams. thought Marty_Sayz still in his dream. Suddenly a new voice broke up the hilarious thoughts. this one was more scary and intimidating. The voice said:'''

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(that said:That was just to rattle you up, just so I can bring you down!!! You think I don't reconize you?!? well that will change. Goodbye. I will except better things from you. I rattled up Neptune, and I can do a lot worse. Goodbye. See you. You know who I am.)

Marty_Sayz woke up screaming. His screaming stopped when he heard a voice rang out, "DONT FORGET!" that woke up everyone. Marty_Sayz remembered now. "Oh no....." he said. "I thought he was gone forever....." a drop of water hit the floor. The moon seemed to disappear under the clouds.

Chapter 5: The Follow== == Neptune fell back asleep at 5:00 and woke up at 6:00, wondering about why Marty_Sayz woke everyone up. Neptune looked over at the cell doors .The cell doors were open, which was not something that would just happen. Marty_Sayz was gone. "Where is Marty_Sayz?" Neptune said to himself. Little did Neptune know, Marty_Sayz was long gone. Nothing seemed wrong however.

Chapter 6: Dazed and Confused== == Hatena finally woke up. All of the color was drained from his body. He has no magic, no friends, no color...he was useless. The mysterious figure laughed as he picked up Hatena by his leg. “Y-you...Ugh...” Hatena grumbled. He felt like he was paralyzed. “Now...do you understand that you are a useless being?“ The figure asked. "Wha-" "SILENCE!" spoke the figure, as he put Hatena into the machine. Hatena was silent. Then the machine door closed. The robot stood up. "At your service" Said the robot.

"I'll take everything from here." said the figure.

Chapter 7: Old rivalry's== == The cave was wet and damp. Martysays entered. He knew that the end was near for him. He approached the orc. "Gollum, come out," said Marty. "War... You come to me now. The anti-polls must have lost, if you are here,' said Gollum. "I'm not here to kill you," said Marty. "My kind is being erased by the new generation, The quick question are replacing my polls." Gollum laughed. "Martysays, I remember fighting you, till the end. This is my destiny. Your destiny is coming." 'I need you to help me, these quick questions will have the same fate as these polls," begged Martysays. "The user is coming to kill me." "User?" said Gollum. 'Darkspyro, the brother of Spyroclub1," said Marty. A sudden boom could be heard. "Run," said Gollum. "The user is here." Martysays ran deeper into the cave. Gollum stood up and got his electrical spear. "GIVE ME MARTYSAYS, OR YOU WILL FACE THE SAME FATE," said Darkspyro. "Get through me," said Gollum. The two fought. Gollum swung his spear and Darkspyro dodged. Darkspryo summoned a wave a dark energy blowing Gollum and destroying a lot of the cave. Gollum struggled to stand. Darkspyro punched Gollum in the face and Gollum fell. "THIS IS THE HERO THAT THEY ADMIRE, I CRUSHED HIM WITH MY BARE HANDS." Gollum stood up again. "Legends never die." Darkspyro punched him in the jaw and threw him to the wall. "I GUESS LEGENDS DO GET BANNED." Gollum was covered in rubble.

Chapter 8: Into the cave== == Martysays ran deeper into the cave. He had not got a signal from his watch that Gollum had been banned. That meant Gollum must of still been fighting him. He could still hear booms behind him. Gollum must have been defeated but not banned then. Martysays fell into a hole. He stayed in there until DrakSpyro left. '''"WHERE IS HE." '''Martysays didn't dare to breathe. "Brother," said a voice. '''"GUESS WHO SHOWED UP." '''"Your doing too much, just because Spyroclub hid his life from you. Doesn't mean you have to take everything from him." '''"NATHAN, YOU LIED TO ME. YOU HAVE HAD YOUR EYE ON HIM FOR YEARS. AND YOU TELL ME NOW." '''"I am sorry, I lied. But it was not safe for you to know." '''"I'll GO NOW," said Darkspyro. '''When Darkspyro left, Nathan whispered to Marty. "You can come out now. I'll bring you to your old army."

Chapter 9: The Robot of Hatena== == Neptune assembeled his team again. His team was not ready. There was a funeral going on. The funeral of Hatena. Tears rolled down from everyone's eyes. "psst, I need to have a chat with you," said Swayamplays. "What is it," asked Neptune. "I found something, that could help us," said Swayamplays. "What is it?" asked Neptune. "Look at this security footage." Swayamplayz spoke. Swayamplayz showed Neptune his watch.

Chapter 10: Enemy territory== == C_L was in the Quick Question base talking with Nate and Chad, when some one sent a message to C_L on his laptop. "Huh....?" C_L stated. "Probably just junk mail." Nate spoke, rolling his eyes. C_L checked the message. "No, we dont get junkmail in BATTLELAND. spoke C_L as he checked the message. "Topic: BATTLELAND sides?" Chad read, looking over C_L's shoulder. "That sounds like an adventure." Nate said. "Ive had enough adventures from the time M_K died." When C_L had said that, he remembered that time when M_K had gone on an adventure with him. C_L sat down on the bed in the QQ base. He tried to keep himself from crying, but no luck. "Why are you crying?" asked Chad. "Oh its nothing." and with answering that, C_L went back to the desk with his laptop to check the message. it read: This is an important message from a QQ'er. Down in the west base, they have found us. Me and one other user escaped. We will be at the north side in 20 minutes. Thats where you are now right? I'll be down. - Nate Clone C_L let Nate and Chad read this message, then C_L sent it to Neptune. "Wow, a famous QQ fighter, here." said Nate. "Wow Nate clone!" said Chad. C_L had recived another message. he checked who it was from. C_L couldnt belive it. The message was from M_K.

Chapter 11: The leader== == DarkSpyro returned to his own base. Darkspyro walked up to a room. he spoke through a voice recorder. "I'm back." The door opened. " Stardust, I have the info I need." DarkSpyro said. "Good." "I am your leader after all." Stardust said. "Also, dont wake up DarkDust." "He has been sleeping for over 200 years." Stardust glared at DarkSpyro. "Darkdust is the true leader, I am just his brother, filling in for him." Darkspyro nodded. Then he left the room. Everything was normal. Unfortunitly it wasnt' going to stay that way for long.

Chapter 12: Nothing new== == "Watch." Said Swayamplayz to Neptune. "Hantena is a robot or something." Said Swayamplayz. The video played. The comment Ninja's enemy, the robot master sat in a chair. everything seemed normal. Then, suddenly, Hantenbot turns around. Neptune gasps when he sees him. "No..." Then Hantenbot lets out a bloodcurdling scream. "The presents of evil sure are with him," Swayamplayz said. Right after he said that, Hantenbot slashed the camera and everything went black. "We need to stop the ceremony, right now," Swayamplayz said. "If we do not rescue him, this could be permanent. Plus, with his power on their side, things would go nowhere, but down!" Swayamplayz did not wait for the person on the podium speaking, he simply shoved him to the side and took the mic. Confused whispers came from the crowd. "Hantena is not dead!" There was a mix of happiness, surprise, confusion, and suspicion. "Is this a joke?" one called out. Then others started to join in. Soon enough, the two were mobbed with questions. "This will answer all your questions," Said Swayamplayz as he turned on the video. After the video, there was silence, then the questions started coming again. "Thase people are relentless," Swayamplayz said. But Neptune could not hear it. He was frozen in thought, and his leg felt like it was on fire. One of the questions a person yelled out caught neptune's attention. "How did this happen!?" It all came back to him, the cell, the screams of horror as Hantena got put in a robot, and the dark, evil laughter of the mysterious figure. Neptune felt dizzy and his leg was giving out. His mind was swirling. He wanted to forget the horrible smells of the dungeon and the taunting banning in the torcher chamber. Why couldn't things be peaceful again? "Neptune," Swayamplayz said. "I'm talking to you." Neptune stood in silence, then passed out.

Chapter 13: The cave's end point== == Marty_Sayz stood in the cave, sitting down. He was thinking. "I'll come back." He said. "I'll come back to help the Comment Ninja's." Nathan Big sat next to him. "I don't know, you put up quite the reputation." said Nathan Big. "Like I havent had that reputation before." said Marty_Sayz. "I cant even go on Go Comics without getting banned." Marty_Sayz suddenly relized something. "I'll team up with the bad users." "Umm...." said NB. The cave was wet. wet enough to slip and fall....

Chapter 14: The fall== == Neptune woke up in a chair, with Swyamplayz and Cheezdoodle51 tending to his leg. "Is it broken?" asked Neptune. "No said Swayamplayz, "Its badly scraped and sprained though." Neptune sat up in the chair.

Chapter 15: Limbo== == Hatena’s mind was blank. Nothing but a black void. Hatena’s memories before he was converted created his original form inside his mind. As the confused being walked and walked, he found the other half of his mind. The robotic one. “Y-you...you did this...and for what...?” Hatena stuttered. The robotic half stood still. It didn’t say a single word. “Answer me!” Hatena cried. The robotic half jumped back into a battle stance. “Ah...I see. Well, I guess you better say your prayers.” Hatena declared. The robotic half closed its eyes as it flew up into the air. All of its parts came together to make its true, non-frog form. They both nodded...

And Hatena charged forward.

Chapter 16: Chair== == Neptune sat in the chair, feelling tired. "How did this happen....." Swayamplayz asked, while putting Neptune's leg in a speical brace that had a cast like healing structure. "I must have banged my leg on the dungon cell when I was thrown in, and it was swollen enough to be numb untill now." Neptune managed to speak. The chair he was sitting in was ticking. "Wait is that?" CheezDoodle51 said alarmingly. "A bomb....." Swayamplayz finished his sentence. CheezDoodle51 picked the bomb up from under the chair. "5 SECONDS LEFT, WHAT THE-" CheezDoode's yelling was suddenly cut of by Swayamplayz. "Were the only ones left in here since everyone else left after Neptune Passed out, so we need to GET OUT! "Drop the bomb!" Swyamplayz noticed 2 seconds left on the bomb as Neptune, CheezDoodle and himself jumped out the door and started to run. Neptune could run perfectly fine since Swayamplayz had put that brace on his leg. "1 SECOND LEFT!" shouted Cheezdoodle looking back. they ran as fast as they could. All Neptune could remember was the huge noice that followed, and getting sent flying over 50 feet, straight into a brick wall. Everything was silent. Spyroclub1 looked out his window that night. he saw a burnt chair fly into his front yard. The chair was still there the next day, when Spyroclub1 got the message that Swayamplayz and CheezDoodle51 had been banned, but Neptune was still alive somewhere.

Chapter 17: Explotion aftermath== == Later BN91 and Flipnote19 heard about the news. BN91 knew that Swaymaplayz and cheezdoodle51 would come back. But Neptune was injured......alone. BN91 hit a button on his chair.

Chapter 18: The Cave== == Neptune was stumbling around. It was dusk. The explosion was yesterday. His mind was starting to clear. He could remember scrambling to get out of the room. He heard a loud BOOM, and then everything went black. "What happened to Swayamplayz and Cheezdoodle," Neptune thought. Then, he heard footsteps. He could sense another user approaching. The presents of evil was strong. Neptune quickly looked around. The rustling was getting louder. He was trying to find a place to hide, when all of the sudden, an arm of another user grasped Neptune and pulled him into a cave hidden by rocks and vines. "Who are you, and who are you for," Neptune said alarmed and squirming. "Calm down." He could now see the face of the user. A deep blue creeper with glowing green eyes. The user set a fire on a pile of wood. "I do not take sides. I am Space_Walker101," He said. "But, you can call me S.W." He continued. "You must be Neptune." "How did you..." But Neptune did not finish. "Come," said SW. He led him through the cave to an "Elevator," Neptune said with a puzzled look. "In a cave?" "Trust me," SW replied. They went down. "We also have stairs," Said SW. "But those are ancient." The elevator dinged. "Whoa..." Neptune was amazed. "Ha!" SW scoffed. "We aren't even there yet."

Chapter 19: The Mods== == SW gave a signal to the guards, then he led Neptune into a long corridor filled with rooms. Neptune thought he saw a shadow creep along with them. "I must be imagining things," He thought. At the end was a big iron door with a keyboard next to it on the wall. SW rattled out the code and the two entered. Neptune thought he heard rustling. "Stop it," NPT thought to himself. "Stop imaging things." "Behold!" SW said. "Our high tech submarine." The sub was red and yellow. It was lined with 6 inch glass windows. When they went inside, there was computers, tablets, wires, and other techy things. "Boy, do I have more for you," SW said. He took the cockpit. "You, sit there," SW said. Then, they took off into the ocean. SW rambled on about things Neptune should know, but he was not listening. He could feel the presents of evil strongly, but there was no one. "It's only us," Neptune said to himself, but that did not calm him down. The sub entered a cave. The blueish green water started to get shallower and shallower, until it was no more. "We are here," SW exclaimed. "Now you can be amazed." Neptune was. There it was, a building built into the cave. It was professional looking, painted in white, and polished until you could see your reflection. There was a sign uptop that read, "Mod's Lab" "You... your a mod." Neptune asked amazed. SW nodded his head, then without word, he entered and Neptune followed. "We need you." SW said "Mods have been leaving the comment section due to the uncontrollable evil. We lost alot during the poll wars." He continued. "This is were you come in. You must stop evil with your friends, Swayamplayz, Cheezdoodle, and the others." "Swayamplayz and CheezDoodle are banned," Neptune replied sadly. "I don't know..." said SW mischievously. Neptune got exited. "They are alive!?" He exclaimed. "You will see," said SW. "For now, should I give you a tour?" This time, Neptune was the one to nod.

Chapter 20: The Creation Room== == They walked down the hall. Mods were scrambling around. SW talked about different rooms the Mods have, and how they have the ability to destroy the comment section, but what really caught NPT's attention was the last room. "This," SW explained. "Is the creation room," Neptune was in awe. It was a white room just like the others, but what really made it different was the big tube in the middle. "This is where we help make the commenters," He continued. "We where able to create them, so we have the ability to destroy them." "This is-" But Neptune was could not finish. An alarm sounded. "Intruder alert! Intruder alert!" "We have a stowaway," SW yelled. "Stand in formation and get armed!" Neptune was right! "I should have listened to my ninja senses," thought Neptune. But now was not the time to beat himself up about it. "Quick! Hide" SW said. "You can't fight with that cast!" Neptune went to go take cover, but, then he saw Swayamplayz and CheezDoodle preparing to fight. "Your alive!" Neptune yelled. "But... how?" "Yes," said Cheezdoodle "But now is not time to celebrate. Right now we have a commenter to fight." "We will explain things later," Said Swayamplayz. Inspired by CD's words and the fact that his friends were still alive, Neptune yelled to SW, "Never!". "I never hide!" SW nodded. Just then, the commenter came into sight. He had a leather coat with a gun tucked away in it's side. He was smiling. All the mods crunched down, ready to fire. Neptune's sense of evil was the strongest it's been. He was ready to fight along side his friends once again. But then something unexpected happened. The commenter just stood there and said with a sly grin, "Allow introduce myself." "My Name is Nathan Big, You world is being toyed with my brother Darkspyro. I hope your fake trips to the banned weren't that bad." "Hey, You were the guy who planted that bomb," said Swayamplays. "Its called a heal bomb, an effective device used in faking bans." "But why, did you do it," said Cheezedoodle. "To make sure DarkSpyro does not kill you. You see Spyroclub1 is next. Darkspyro wants revenge on Spyroclub1."

Chapter 21: The Old Poll Base== == Martysays walked into the poll base. He had not been in here for at least a decade. Martysays fell. He was getting sicker and sicker by polls decreasing. Gollum had said that his destiny was almost complete. Martysays knew that was true. His vpn power was gone. He opened the door......

Chapter 22: Attack on GC== == GC cities were getting destroyed. Everything was on fire it seemed. Just then C_L ran out and looked at the fires sourse. A helicopter. C_L climbed up a burning building. He jumped onto a falling window and used that as momentum to jump onto the top of the tallest building. From there he jumped onto the helicopter just as the roof caved in. "Who are you?!?" Asked C_L. "Stardust." the user said .His voice was metalatic and robotic. "Wha-" Started C_L. "Oh yeah. Get the heck out of my helicopter if you want M_K to come back." C_L was speachless. "Get the heck out of my HELICOPTER YOU-" Stardust was interupted by a lazer gun. It was Yoda, Spyroclub1, and......M_K! Stardust fell of the helicopter, and yelled "Its too late, you have awoken Dark Dust!" Once you have awoken him, your done." Stardust dissapered into a star. "Who was that......" asked Spyroclub1. "Stardust." said C_L. "Look whos back." said M_K sarcasticly. "M_K!!!" C_L said joyfully. "Hey, I was gone for like 2 weeks." M_K spoke happily. "Wow your back!" C_L was so happy that he almost fell off Yoda's helicopter. the wind was gentle. That day was almost too perfect to be true........Somewhere Dark Dust had been awoken......somewhere the battle had only just began...........

The End!
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