Fanon:The Commenters in a Haunted House

THE COMMENTERS IN A HAUNTED HOUSE

By ComicRater

Featuring:

ComicRater, Neptune7Ninja2Comics, Swasimcool, GiantNate91, BiggerNate91, Henry Hudson, Spyroclub, 7o'clock, BigNateBaseball, PigLoverGoComics, MintCrepe, ItsYaBoiP-Dog, Moothu, LordNour, ComicCreatorz, ChemicalChaos, Positive Elixr Trade, GoldenGlory4life, ToPhu51, CrossDoggo, Spacepuppy, Frailpancake, and SpokeyTV, 

(Note: Sorry if you don't have many lines, you can only have so many lines for 22 people!)

(Note 2: Italics are locations)

OUTSIDE

ComicRater: Are we ever going to explore that haunted house?

LordNour: No way.

BigNateBaseball: Why would we even do that?

GiantNate91: Maybe it could be interesting!

Spyroclub: Interesting for THE MURDERER.

ComicRater: I might go in… It is Halloween, after all.

GoldenGlory4life: Your really going to go in?

Henry Hudson: Um, It’s “You’re”, not “Your”. Get you grammar right.

Swasimcool: “You’re” really annoying me.

(ComicRater walks inside)

CrossDoggo: Well, he’s dead.

ItsYaBoiP-Dog: We can’t just leave him in there!

Neptune7Ninja2Comics: P-Dog is right. We have to go after him.

MintCrepe: …fine. But I’m going to kill him after this.

(They all walk inside)

GiantNate91: ComicRater, you better not get us killed.

Positive Elixr Trade: Good luck with that.

BiggerNate91: What is this haunted house, anyway?

PigLoverGoComics: Apparently, it’s a haunted house. Not many people come out alive.

BiggerNate91: I’m aware it’s a haunted house, pinhead.

Frailpancake: Stop fighting, that will make it worse.

ToPhu51: I don’t wanna die here. We should leave.

Spacepuppy: Sorry ComicRater, but I agree with ToPhu. We should leave.

(The door locks behind them)

ChemicalChaos: Great. Now we’re stuck in here!

CrossDoggo: This is all your fault, ComicRater!

ComicRater: Me? All I did was wanna explore!

(Everyone starts to argue)

SpokeyTV: Guys! GUYS!

(SpokeyTV blows a whistle, everyone goes silent)

SpokeyTV: We are not going to get out if you guys kill eachother! Now, let’s look around.

BigNateBaseball: There seems to be 2 halls. The dark room, and the scary noise room.

Moothu: I say we go down the scary noise hall.

ItsYaBoiP-Dog: No! We should go down the dark path!

Henry Hudson: I have a way we can sort this.

ComicRater: What do you mean?

Henry Hudson: People with A-L names, meaning BiggerNate91, BigNateBaseball, ChemicalChaos, ComicCreatorz, ComicRater, CrossDoggo, Frailpancake, GiantNate91, GoldenGlory4life, me, ItsYaBoiP-Dog, and LordNour can go down the dark hallway. People with M-Z names, meaning MintCrepe, Moothu, Neptune7Ninja2Comics, PigLoverGoComics, Positive Elixr Trade, Spacepuppy, SpokeyTV, Spyroclub, Swasimcool, and ToPhu51 can go down the scary noise hallway.

7o’clock: What about me?

Moothu: You can come with us.

MintCrepe: Well, that seems fair…

Spyroclub: It’s good enough. Now lets go. We don’t know how much time we have, so we gotta go quick.

GoldenGlory4life: See you on the other side!

ChemicalChaos: I hope…

(And they all started down their hallways)

PART 2 COMING SOON!!

THE COMMENTERS IN THE HAUNTED HOUSE PART 2

By ComicRater

PART 2

The Dark Hallway

BiggerNate91:This hallway is weird…

ItsYaBoiP-Dog-:Why did we get sent down it?

LordNour:Because someone, by the name of Henry Hudson, made us go.

Henry Hudson:It isn’t my fault. I was trying to be fair.

CrossDoggo:TO BE FAIR, you are probably going to get us killed.

(They walk into a room, with 12 doors)

Frailpancake:What is this?

ComicCreatorz:Its a room…

ComicRater:With 20 doors…

Frailpancake:I know that. But what does it do?

GiantNate91:Let’s go back.

(The door locks behind them)

GoldenGlory4life:How can a door lock by itself?

LordNour:It’s a haunted house. Finish the puzzle.

(An unknown voice comes on from above)

???:So, you have chosen to come inside.

BiggerNate91:What do you want from us?

???:Nothing really. Just a puzzle.

ComicRater: What puzzle?

???:Here, you will see 20 doors. At the end of each room, there is a key inside a chest. Only one of the keys work to get out. If you want to survive, you must find the correct key. But, you only have 3 tries. If you can’t get it, you die.

ItsYaBoiP-Dog: That isn’t fair!

???:Oh, I know. But, it’s fun to watch everyone panic, so I’ll let it slide. Haha!

(The voice stops, and a ten minute timer starts)

Frailpancake: Okay guys, don’t panic.

ComicCreatorz: I’m panicking, I’m panicking, I’M PANICKING!

Henry Hudson: What are we going to do?

GoldenGlory4life: I guess just open a random door.

(He goes to open the door)

BigNateBaseball: STOP!

(He stops)

GoldenGlory4life: Why?

CrossDoggo:I think I have an idea.

ChemicalChaos: What is it?

CrossDoggo: I think if we open all the doors at the same time, it will register it as one! BiggerNate91: That’s a stupid idea.

Frailpancake: It doesn’t hurt to try.

ItsYaBoiP-Dog: Yeah, it could!

GiantNate91: Whatever. Let’s go.

(They all head to a door)

All: 1…2…3!!

(They all open doors)

ComicRater: IT WORKED! BigNateBaseball: Ok, now everyone get a key!

(They all get their key)

ChemicalChaos: I GOT IT! #4!

(He runs to the exit)

ItsYaBoiP-Dog: YES! LordNour: We’re out!

ComicRater: Now, where are the M-Z kids?

Scary Noise Hallway

MintCrepe: I hate this arrangement…

Positive Elixr Trade:Why?

MintCrepe: I wanted to go down the dark hallway!

7o’clock:Oh, get over yourself.

(They all walk in the room)

Swasimcool:That’s weird…

PigLoverGoComics:There is nothing in here…

ToPhu51:I still hear the music though.

???: So, you have chosen this hallway?

Spacepuppy:Well, we didn’t exactly choose it…

???: I don’t care. Your challenge is to play hide and seek. But you have to be hiding together.

SpyroClub:Ok…

SpokeyTV:Who are the seekers?

???: I’m not saying yet.

PigLoverGoComics:That doesn’t sound too bad…

Moothu: Just a simple game of hide and seek.

???: And if even one of you is found, you will all be killed.

Positive Elixr Trade:What??

Swasimcool:That isn’t fair!

???: I know. That’s the greatest part. Muahahaha!

NeptuneNinjaComics:Let’s just leave.

(The door locks behind them)

Spyroclub:Ugh…

7o’clock:Wait. Where will we even hide? There is nothing in this room!

???: Here.

(Furniture appears out of thin air)

Neptune7Ninja2Comics: Wha…How…

ToPhu51:I’m not even gonna ask…

???: You have 30 seconds. Good luck.

(A 30 second timer starts)

Positive Elixr Trade: Oh god… what do we do?

Swasimcool:Hmm…

Spacepuppy:I KNOW! Let’s go behind that couch.

(They all run behind the couch, and the seekers come out. They start to whisper)

MintCrepe:Wait a second… The seekers are dead commenters!

PigLoverGoComics:Gollum! Wonder what happened to him…

ToPhu51:Hev1! Haven’t seen him around.

SpokeyTV:Feed Me Comics! She’s an old one.

NeptuneNinjaComics:SuperFoxTrot! Spammer…

7o’clock:Arica Jade! Hmm…

(5 minutes later)

Swasimcool:They finally went away…

Spyroclub:I though they never would!

PigLoverGoComics:Let’s go!

(They all run to the exit)

ComicCreatorz: Guys!

LordNour: I thought we lost you!

MintCrepe: Nope. We’re safe.

ItsYaBoiP-Dog: What was your hallway anyway?

Moothu: We played hide and seek with dead commenters.

ComicRater: Ah. We had to think outside the box, and look through doors.

7o’clock: Let’s go up these stairs.

(They go up the stairs)

PigLoverGoComics: What more could there be?

(They all see the villain)

BigNateBaseball: No way…

Moothu:It isn’t possible…

Spacepuppy: It can’t be…

All: MARTYSAYS!!!

PART 3 COMING SOON!